{ Racheal } - "where am I"??

{ Racheal } - " ugh... my head hurts".

{ Racheal } - " who is that? and why is she sitting all alone"?.

{ Racheal mind } - should I go and see what's wrong with her, she might need someone, she might be lost.

{ Racheal } - "H-h-hello".

( NARRATOR ) "as Racheal goes and sits by the unknown girl, she/ the unknown girl slowly looks up and says hello, who are you" ??.

{ racheals mind } - "this girl has no feelings her heart is empty with no emotions, her eyes look lost".

{ Racheal } - "hello I'm Racheal and you?".

{ unknown girl } - "i-i don't know who I am".

( NARRATOR ) "as the unknown girl says that she starts cry and slowly starts to smlie".

{ Racheal } - "why are you here all alone"?.

{ unknown girl } - " I've been here for awhlie I'm surprised to see one of you!!!".

{ Racheal } - " one of you "?.

{ unknown girl } - "yes there is not many people here as in none".

{ Racheal } - " what do you mean none"?.

{ unknown girl } - "this is a dark empty place where no happiness is found where there's nothing but a filed of light where you have no emotions or your only crying because you feel alone". people who are in pain come here into this world and start to lose their emotions and get stuck into this world intell someone sets them free".

{ Racheal } - " intell someone sets them free , w-what do you mean, w-what am I here for".

( NARRATOR )" as Racheal is worried and thinks she might not escape her self she is also worried of how she will set the unknown girl free as well and doesn't understand how she ended up here"!!.

{ unknown girl } - "someone has hurt you or you have been hurt many times so you closed yourself in and kept everyone out and as of that your losing your emotions".

{ Racheal } - "h-how do you know that".

{ unknown girl } - "its why I'm here anyone who has come to this place has been hurt or more , I've been here for more then 20 years waiting for someone to come and set me free. free from no emotions or walking in the same field of light"

{ Racheal } - "what happens when you set someone free"?.

{ unknown girl } - "when you set someone free you are taking the persons place that has been waiting when you set someone free you are giving them happiness and a way to feel it by them going into the world you were in before coming here".

{ unknown girl } - " a world where you can feel emotions a world where you can smlie or have friends you can go out and do thing you can laugh without worry a world with there's just not one long filed with light but with flowers too".

{ Racheal } - "that's where I came from before I got hurt".

( NARRATOR ) "as Racheal is worried that she will never go back into that wonderful world before coming here she still want to help the unknown girl".

{ unknown girl } - please please help me

( NARRATOR ) will Racheal help or will she wait there with her.....

{ unknown girl } - "will you set me free, please I need to feel again feel warmth and happiness".

( NARRATOR ) as the unknown girl is crying why begging Racheal to help her Racheal feels some type of way...

{ Racheal mind } - "I want to set her free and let her find happiness but will I ever feel my mothers hugs and kisses again or my dad taking me to baseball games and what about my little sister she's just now going into 8th grade she'll need help with some things".

{ unknown girl } - "please please".

{ Racheal } - "yes if it means helping you escape from here then a course".

( NARRATOR ) as Racheal gets ready to set her free and wait intell someone comes in the emtpy world and can set Racheal free..

( NARRATOR ) as the unknown girl walks in the filed on light color starts to show and lead's her to the other world but before she enters she says the words that Racheal has always wanted to here before coming here...

{ unknown girl } - "Thank you"..

{ racheal } - y-your welcome

( NARRATOR ) as Racheal watches the unknown girl walk into the light she starts to cry....

( NARRATOR ) it was the first time that the unknown girl saw colors as Racheal sits there alone and releases she will soon forget too...

...6 years later...

( NARRATOR ) Racheal soon forgets who she is too and starts to feel alone , no one has come yet to set her free from this but she still has hope even if some more years go by she will sit and wait

{ unknown girl / Racheal } - if I could walk the filed and see some colors I would love to but letting her go was the right thing to do I hope she's happy.

( NARRATOR ) in this world where you feel emotion less you have one wish to make and Racheal made her one wish and that was....

{ unknown girl / Racheal } -" I wish I could see how she's doing if she's happy and is doing alright"?.

{ unknown girl / Racheal } - "wow her eyes look full but on eyes blue I wonder how that happ happened but I'm just glad she's okay and is not hurt".

( NARRATOR ) as Racheal trys to put a smlie on her face she can't because this world doesn't allow it so she crys instead..

...2 year later...

( NARRATOR ) as Racheal releases she can't escape she waits some more holding for someone to come and help her..

...the end...

hello I know this story is really Short and not good in pictures but I'm trying I could use some help on the but this story is about going into depression and feeling lonely so they kick people out in the open and hide their self's in this dark world but setting them free means letting that one person come in your life and helping you get out of that stage ... I hope you like it but I will come back better and stronger next time with stories and better stories... thank you for reading.