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What's My Mistake

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this is my first story hope you all will like it👍
first I would like to introduce you'll to our ml and fl
with other supporting characters
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so let's start
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so this is our ml
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Name : Peter walker Age: 25 personality: rude, arrogant, smart, handsome, strong,have a high iq likes: his family and friends dislikes: gold digger, slut, his enemy,and the people who harms his family occupation: Asia's 1st top company owner and also Mafia king of the world but no one know he is a Mafia except his few friends
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so this is our fl
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Name : sara william Age: 18 personality:sweet ,decent ,kind, intelligent, god of beauty likes: soft things, cats, her family & friends dislikes: bad people, gold diggers She is a student in xy school
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ml dad
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ml mom
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ml sister
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fl dad
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fl brother
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fl mom died when she was 5 years old in a car accident
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ep 1

so let's begin our story
fl side
Charlie william (fl dad)
Charlie william (fl dad)
sara baby get up
Charlie william (fl dad)
Charlie william (fl dad)
or you will be late for your school
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
Yes dad ( while yawning)
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
good morning dad☺️
Charlie william (fl dad)
Charlie william (fl dad)
good morning my child
Charlie william (fl dad)
Charlie william (fl dad)
hurry up it's already 8 am
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
WHAT
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
omg Maggie will kill me I promised her that I will pick her
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
from her house
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
oh shit I have to hurry up
while saying this she rushed to her bathroom
after few minutes sara wore her uniform and was ready to go to school
she went downstairs and hurriedly eat her breakfast and went to her school
In school
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
I am so scared what will Maggie do to me
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
Today I am dead
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
as I entered the corridoor I felt that some one was burning in anger
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
I knew 😥 that person
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
oh look who's her
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
you know sara u are going to die now
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
Yes😥
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
look I can explain u
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
I didn't mean too
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
oh really
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
I am really angry with you so don't talk to me
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
hmm😤
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
u know u look so cute when u are angry😚
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
don't change the topic
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
u alway do like this
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
I am sorry
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
I will never do it again sorry
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
for making your anger down
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
I will buy u pizza☺️ok
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
no
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
but u like pizza
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
Yes but with chips u forgot Maddie 😂
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
oh sorry I forget 😔
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
dont be sad come let's have our pizza ok
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
hmm😚
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
let's go
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ep 2

sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
hey by the way we're is lisa
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
I don't know she didn't came today
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
is she all right
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
yeah she is a strong girl
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
nothing will happen to her
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
come on lecture is started we have to go
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
ok baby😚
actually Maggie and Lisa are sara's best friend
finally school ended
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
bye Maggie
Maggie ( fl friend )
Maggie ( fl friend )
bye baby
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
☺️
Maggie went and she was standing alone on the road
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
where is the car
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
I have to call the driver
she called but he didn't picked up
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
why the hell he is not picking up my call
suddenly a car stopped infront of her and she was a bit afraid
suddenly 4 to 5 men's jumped out of the car and pushed her in the car's back seat
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
hey leave me what the hell are u doing
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
leave me
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
somebody help
she started shouting
then a man put chloroform in the handkerchief and pressed that handkerchief on her mouth
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
(after few times I was feeling dizzy)
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
and I fainted
few hours later
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
(I opened my eyes)
sara willam ( fl)
sara willam ( fl)
( and I was shocked)
End
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