FITOOR-[ ENCHANTED BY HIM]
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AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
so this is my first chat story hope you all will support it and give your love🤗🤗🤗
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
if their is any grammatical mistake kindly correct me and i will surely try my best to make this story interesting 🥰🥰
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
so enough of the talks let's start 😙
is there any rule that only a guy can be obsessive over a girl?
what if it's complete opposite this time?
she is a mercenary, definition of cruelty a living hell...
but what if her this obsession, aggressiveness and cruelness is just a cover for a mysterious dark past?
this journey is of pain, betrayal,hate and love..
LOUD CRIES AND BEGGING OF 3 PEOPLE CAN BE HEARD
...
leave her you monster!!(crying)
...
are you even a man if you want fight with me but please let her go!!
that man was heavily injured he was beaten for many days and not given food..
he was chained with many chains
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hahahaha!!! if we have her why will we waste our time on you!!(shot him)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
huhhhhhhh!! (wakes up with a jerk) (heavily breathing)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
again same dream!!!
she search something in her bedside drawer
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
(found pills) (takes it)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
don't know when this will stop!! (crying)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
(takes out a frame from drawer) (caress it)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
i miss you!!(crying) i miss you so much why did you leave me alone!!
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
(stopped crying)(wipe cheeks) it's not the time to cry athy, it's the time to make them cry!!(psychotic smile)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
come in!!
RINA (NANNY)
(comes in) miss the bath is ready!!
she took a shower and got ready
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
i will eat breakfast outside today!!(while coming downstairs)
she took her car and went for office
she stops the car outside a cafe
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
(goes in)
STAFF
welcome to cafe black rose!!
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
(nods)(went near a window seat)(sits)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
a strong black coffee and sandwich!!❄️❄️❄️
STAFF
(flinch) ok anything else miss!!
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
no❄️❄️❄️
she had her breakfast and went to office
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
(enters)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
(nods)(went to her cabin)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
(sit on her chair)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
come in!!
ROSE(FL SECRETARY/BFF)
(enters)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
so what is my today's schedule!!❄️
ROSE(FL SECRETARY/BFF)
(reads her schedule)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
(nods) bring me a cup of black coffee!!❄️
ROSE(FL SECRETARY/BFF)
ok,but how many since morning!!
ROSE(FL SECRETARY/BFF)
again same dream?
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
(nods)
ROSE(FL SECRETARY/BFF)
don't worry it will be over soon!!(hugs her)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
(hugs back) i wish what you said is true!!(sobbing)
ROSE(FL SECRETARY/BFF)
now now don't cry, remember you are my strong girl you have to make them cry!!(wipes her tears)
ATHENA RAYMOND [FL]
yes i will surely make them cry!!(smile maniacally)
ROSE(FL SECRETARY/BFF)
i miss my innocent baby athy,alas that incident changed her life and her forever(in mind)
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
ending this here guys
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
i am fucking tired and it's 4:30 in the morning 😓
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
see you soon🤗🤗
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
byeeeeeeeeee
INCOMPETENT(눈‸눈)
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
hlo beauties (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
let's start our next chapter ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
on the other side a man was walking peacefully on the road
he was in his own world thinking something
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
(walking)(remembering something)
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
i forgot to mention the place in earlier chapter but it's America, San Francisco
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
so let's move on know
the whole mansion was at chaos
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
what the fück are u saying!!(shouting)❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
why should I leave my house!!❄️❄️
someone - because we think you are incompetent and can't handle this empire which i made from my hardwork
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
huh!!(turn around)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
grandpa?
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
yes so you have to leave this luxury and prove me that you are capable of doing something without us!!
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
you seriously this i DEIMOS SALVATORE is incompetent?❄️❄️❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
(nods)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
(angry) ok so i will accept as you wish i will stand on my own and make a empire myself!!❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
just wait and watch you oldies how i will prove you wrong!!❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
i will be waiting for your return,right Derek!!
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
yes dad!!
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
but remember you can't disclose your identity you have to leave all your cards, money and cars here only!!!❄️❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
you have to start from the root just like how i did!!❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
ok!!❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
anything else? say fast i have to go and have dinner with my mom don't know when i will come again!!!🙂🙂
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
just because someone think i am incompetent i have to leave my house and my mom!!😒😒❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
-that certain someone
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
-including him
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
you have to go to another country!!❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
why? i can work here too no one knows my identity here!!❄️❄️(raise eyebrows)
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
no you can't work here you have many friends here it will be easy for you to set foot here!!❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
you have to go to another country and set your foot there and you should be someone whom everyone will fear just by listening name!!!
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
i want everyone to shiver while hearing your name!!❄️❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
just wait and watch oldie i will be someone whom not only everyone will fear or shiver!!❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
but they will also BOW and RESPECT me!!❄️❄️❄️❄️(smirk)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
whole world will know who DEIMOS SALVATORE is!!!❄️❄️❄️
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
we will be waiting!!😏
unknown
Dinner is ready!!(shouts)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
coming darling!!
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
coming honey!!
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
who is your darling brat?
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
your honey!!😏
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
she is my wifey brat!!
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
yeah yeah i know!!
unknown
come fast!!(shouts)
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
wifey!!
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
darling!!(hug her)
MARIA SALVATORE (ML MOM)
my baby!!(hugs back)
MARIA SALVATORE (ML MOM)
come have dinner!!
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
yes!!(sits)
MARIA SALVATORE (ML MOM)
i have made your favourite dishes!!(serving)
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
ignored creature 1🙂
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
ignored creature 2🙂
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
wifey won't you give me food!!🥺🥺🥺
MARIA SALVATORE (ML MOM)
can't you take yourself!!😐😐(serving deimos)
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
but you are serving him too!!🥺🥺🥺
MARIA SALVATORE (ML MOM)
so what😐you are sending my baby away don't talk to me!!😤😤
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
(giving him a winning look)😏😏
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
better don't ask her she already insulted him don't know what she will do with me!!(in mind)
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
samajhdar Buddha😏
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
can I join you guys(puppy eyes attack)🥺🥺🥺
MARIA SALVATORE (ML MOM)
y-(cuts off)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
NO!!❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
GET LOST!!(kicks author out)
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
hey i gave you this food, palace and all can't u share a bit!!(crying)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
NO!!(straightforward)😐😐❄️
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
let it be guys i will teach him a lesson later😜 actually it's midnight and after seeing so much yummy dishes i started feeling hungry🥲🥲🥲
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
next time i will give less picks🥲
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
ok enough of talks
they had their dinner and went to the respective rooms
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
so tomorrow a new journey will start!!
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
i will prove those oldies whom they underestimated (smirk)😏
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
this whole world will be under my feet!!
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
today till here only!!
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
i started writing and even forgot the word count!!
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
goodnight guyssss
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
well it's about to be morning it's already 4:00 A.M
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
help me to select a pic for male lead
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
or the current one is ok??
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
don't forget to like(◕ᴗ◕✿)
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
comment
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
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AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
see you in next episode (◍•ᴗ•◍)
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
take care(◠‿◕)
NEW JOURNEY
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
hlo beauties (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
missed me??( ꈍᴗꈍ)
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
let's start our next chapter!!(◕ᴗ◕✿)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
(sleeping)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
(no response)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
(irritated)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
who the fück is disturbing me early in the morning!!❄️❄️(shouts)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
(get up)(wear t-shirt)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
(open the door)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
what happened!!❄️❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
did you forgot about the challenge so soon!!❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
i didn't forget anything, i will leave in the noon!!❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
ok!!❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
book me the flight tickets!!❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
to where?
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
America,San Francisco!! (smirk)😏
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
ok!!
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
and yeah book 3 tickets!!❄️❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
why??(raise eyebrows)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
i will take them too!!❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
ok,i will do it!!
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
but remember not only buisness society u have to capture underworld too!!❄️❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
don't worry about that old hag when i said whole world means whole world will be under my feet!!❄️❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
including UNDERWORLD!!!❄️❄️(smirk)😏
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
hmmm(nods)
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
i already created your fake identity!!❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
your name will be DETARIAN!!!
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
ok!!(nods)
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
tell your friends too to not reveal their identity or surnames!!!❄️❄️❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
i have already enrolled you in a college!!❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
COLLEGE??❄️❄️❄️(shouts)
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
(flinch) yes!!❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
but i have already cleared it long ago!!❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
in your age children go to college so if i didn't enrolled you everyone will get a doubt!!❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
ok!!❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
find a part time job for your living!!❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
(nods)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
which college!!❄️❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
ROYAL COLLEGE!!❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
everyone know you are scholarship student and your identity is well hidden!!❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
ok!!❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
than can I go for breakfast if you are done??❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
hmmm!!
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
i won't show you the pics of breakfast 😤😤
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
i have fast today and i will get hungry so no pics 😤😤😤
they all were in the living room
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
so i will be leaving now!!❄️❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
and those donkeys?❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
they said they will directly come to the airport!!❄️❄️❄️
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
ok!!
MARIA SALVATORE (ML MOM)
take care my baby...eat well and sleep on time!!
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
i know mom i am not a kid anymore!!
MARIA SALVATORE (ML MOM)
but you are still my baby!!😤
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
ok ok!!
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
i won't forget anything i promise!!😊
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
take care brat!!
MARIA SALVATORE (ML MOM)
don't call my baby brat!!😤😤
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
ok!!🥺
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
bye oldies i will be back soon!!(smirk)😏
DEREK SALVATORE (ML DAD)
we will be waiting!!
DAVID SALVATORE (ML GRANDPA)
We will be waiting!!
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
where the fück are you both!!❄️❄️
unknown
coming bro!!(playfully)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
come fast!!❄️❄️
unknown 2
chill buddy we will be there soon!!
unknown
yeah very soon!!(playfully)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
atleast you tell him to be a little serious nath!!
NATHAN BROWN (ML BFF)
you know how he is buddy...he won't listen to anyone!!!
unknown
woohooo(twirl the car)
NATHAN BROWN (ML BFF)
we are here buddy!!(wave hand)
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
come fast!!❄️❄️
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
how did you take so much time??❄️❄️
NATHAN BROWN (ML BFF)
actually dex broke a signal so the police stopped us!!
DEXTER MURPHY (ML BFF)
but we bribed them!!(casually)
announcement - the flight is about to take off kindly switch off your mobiles
DEIMOS SALVATORE [ML]
from here our new journey will start!!(in mind)
DEXTER MURPHY (ML BFF)
again an adventure!!(in mind)
NATHAN BROWN (ML BFF)
a lot of hardwork and sleepless nights!!(in mind )
the trio kept thinking and the flight took off
a journey full of adventure and hurdles
let's see how will their journey turn out??
will deimos able to win the challenge he took??
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
stoppppppppppp
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
today till here only
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
let's meet in next episode it's already 3:00 means ghost time(;ŏ﹏ŏ)
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
guys i wanted to ask is the story boring??😗
give me honest opinions!!😁
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
and yeah don't forget to comment
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
i love reading comments the most( ꈍᴗꈍ)
NATHAN BROWN (ML BFF)
byeee
DEXTER MURPHY (ML BFF)
see you in next episode (wink)😉
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
till than stay tuned(◕ᴗ◕✿)
AUTHOR {NIE}🖤
lobeee u all(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)
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