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Burning Rose

episode 1

hello readers....

I have come up with a new story

hope you would like it

I will begin the story ....

INTRODUCTION...

This story is about a young Indian girl .. who stays in Kerala..

One of the Indian states ...

she is kind .. curious ... cheerful... sweet... and also full of spirit....

she has other two sisters .. and also two other brothers...

along with their parents...

it is village .. full of orthodox people...

***STORY BIGINS.......:

.. ******The little middle class orthodox Christian family lived in a small village where there wasn't any correct public facilities...

They have to go a very long distance... to the nearest town.... for any emergency...

Mrs.Amanda was cleaning house...

she was pregnant... almost eight months..

she still had time .... for the delivery of the baby... she was a cheerful women... very dedicated to her husband*****...

Amanda**: It's almost 9'o clock .. where is he... ? bahh... ! he is still late...! I'm out of patience.. ..hump..!

***the door bell rings* ..

Amanda**: he must be home...!

**runs towards door immediately...

she opens the door...

for her surprise there was a young lady... about the age of twenty four..

Amanda herself was twenty six... while her husband was around twenty nine...

**though it wasn't a love marriage. after knowing him for a year.. she married him at the age of twenty five... perhaps a year ago..

the young lady... laid her eyes on Amanda

she raised her eye brows.. and twisted her lips... as if she gave a crooked smile... looked up and down... and then began to introduce herself... Amanda was having a bad feeling.. yet she gathered courage and gave a beautiful smile....

The young lady .. once again gave a crooked smile... Amanda was a goddess beauty.... She was bit fat now... because she was pregnant..

other wise... she had a beautiful waist... she was very thin and slim... although she didn't come from a rich family.. her family was not poor... had a beautiful white skin... her beautiful pink lips.... looked like a lotus... her straight narrow nose... suited her face very well... and her eyes... were one in million... they sparkled like a stars.... The young lady could see the beauty of Amanda...

but her purpose to this journey.. was not to look at Amanda's beauty.... she has come to inform a very important message***....

the young lady asked***.....

will you let me in... Mrs....

Amanda: oh..! you may call me Amanda... mam.. how may I adress you..!

***well...! the lady remained silent*..

Amanda**: well! I forgot to invite you in..! please come in mam... do feel comfortable...! what would you like to drink...!

******the lady came in... made herself comfortable.. and sat on the sofa... she wandered her eyes.. towards every corner.. of the house... she looked suspicious... somewhat like... she was searching for something or someone...

Amanda came out of the kitchen... holding a glass of orange juice in her hand.... with a gentle smile on her face... she remained calm**..

**HELLO READERS... PLEASE DO SUPPORT THIS STORY.. WITH A LIKE AND COMMENTS.. AND PLEASE DO READ MY OTHER WORKS..

" THE LIFE YOU RUINED"

"WHEN THE GHOST FALKS IN LOVE"

"NOT LOVE BUT ARRANGED"

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episode 2

Amanda: how may I help you mam...! mmm..

before that...! may I know your name... please..!...

Maria: I'm Maria... I ...

***Amanda interrupts before she completes her sentence*...

Amanda**: I guess I have seen you some where mam...

***she tries to recall*...

Amanda**: Maria..! Maria... hmmm... I'm not remembering.... I think....

***Maria tries to speak*

Maria**: well...!

Amanda: oh yaa! I guess in the photo album..! with with... hmm... where .. where... ! with my husband and ohh! and also his colleagues..

wait wait... don't say me... you are one of his colleague... !!!

******Amanda now becomes desperate... she tries to link Maria's relation with her husband and the message she wanted to tell...

suddenly something flashes in her mind...

her eyes fills with tears...

before Maria could say anything.. she once again interrupts**...

Amanda**: what happened to my husband...! is is is... is he all right... is he hurt... oh... my..!

***Maria mocks her*!

Maria**: you really are a very devoted wife..!

what a pity...! your love is only one sided ...

what a pity... Jamy does not love you ... huff!

Amanda: what do you mean ! don't spout nonsense... Miss.Maria... watch your tone and language...!

***Maria completely acts like a mistress.... she knew the weak point of Amanda... she tries to mock her more..!

but for Amanda... it was just like a life and death situation...! she couldn't understand the situation...! as well as she does not want to think the upcoming results..... Her mind was filled with upcoming havoc*...

she wondered...

what does she mean.... why my husband don't love me ... whatever... I must trust my husband... there are many bitches..... who want us to be seperated.....

indeed.. what Amanda was thinking was true..

James was very handsome ...sexy... he had a good figure... Amanda and James were match made in heaven.... yet there was something laging behind their relationship... that... it was only one sided love.... though James loved Amanda... he wasn't soo sincere as before....

Maria**: Look Amanda.... your husband and I love each other.... have you ever thought... why he refused to marry you before... the one year time. ...was not for you to understand him ..but for him to forget me... and try to adjust with you... yes! you are indeed right... he loved you more and more... and was ready to forget me.... but I'm not a easy girl....after you got pregnant.... I had a chance.... no man could resist a girls body...... though he could resist others... but not mine.... before your marriage...we had already shared our body... he had already tasted me.... I was his love... before breakup... we did it..... you know... he is really tasty ..... yummm! when you were pregnant... I seized the chance... got into his company... persuaded him... of course he refused me at the beginning.... but was like a hungry kitten... who did not had sex for a long time... and my few tears... melted his heart... I was once his lover... he accepted to sleep with me..... secretly... without knowing others .. DO NOT WORRY...! we did it only twice... after marriage... he told me to take pregnancy resisting pills.... but I did not...not knowingly...I knew it.... and I wanted him.... he's only mine...!

3

Amanda's heart broke...

she had a slightest hope that her husband did not... even yes... it would be in the past..! but her heart shattered when her husband came home...!

he had a huge smile while entering but suddenly he became pale after taking a glance at Maria..

he didn't even had a slightest idea of this sight..

he didn't imagine to find Maria here...!

John: Maria! you you you... you here...! ha ha.. let's talk about business later... should I leave you home.!

Maria:John! be serious. I have told her everything.. you don't need to worry..!

John: why did you say..! didn't you say .. it would end soon..! then...

**Amanda enturrpts...

Amanda** : So what she said is true..!

John panicks..

John: no Amanda..! listen to me... it's not what you think.. you must have misunderstood.. it's.. it's.. wait... let me explain.. I I...

Amanda: stop blabbering..! why... ? what have I done wrong.. haven't I given you enough love... was I lacking some where...!

answer me...!

John: I know.. I made a mistake.. don't worry.. I really love you... only you... I have left the past...so...

Maria: won't you take any responsibility for me John..! I'm pregnant.!. I'm pregnant with your baby .! won't you consider it..!

a huge lightening strikes John.. he could not digest this fact.. infact he loved children.. he still had a bit place in heart for Maria.. but a large space was now filled with Amanda.. yet he didnt wanted to lose the child in Maria s belly... it was also .. his child..! and also didn't wanted to upset Maria... he didn't wanted to lose any...

he thought ..

if only Amanda agreed to let Maria stay along with them... as three.. he thought it was easy to convince Amanda.. but not Maria... because Maria was more like a bossy type.. while Amanda was mild as flower...! but he had no option..he had to spit it right now... he didn't want to lose any...!

John:Listen.,! why not all of us stay together..! I love both of you ... Amanda and Maria..!

Maria: well! I agree to this condition..! I will be happy as long as I stay with you.. dear...

*she kisses him...

Maria knew that Amanda would never agree to such rules... though she was mild.. she hated the idea of sharing her people.. especially her husband... she loved him more that anything in her life..!

even if she agrees.. Maria would use many dirty tricks to spend time with John... Amanda's weapon was innocent while Maria's weapon was her body... she was very good at seducing... and was a sweet talker...!

most of the time... she would succeed... and she also knew that .. no girl would want to share her husband's body*..!

Amanda: but I won't AGREE.. I'm legally your wife... I will never share my husband...!

.... how hateful..!

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