Mistake Love
Chapter 1
They know eachother at childhood
They always play together
They attach at the same school
Their friendship like stranger
Luki
*what is happening to him?*
Luki
(👈the one near the wall)
Jack
(pin hand on the wall)
This was the lunch time so no one in the classroom
Luki
Jack what are you doing?
Jack
What did you just call me? (cold tone)
Someone is coming and speak this '' Baby ''
Jack
(whisper him)
We aren't friend
Don't be so friendly
Karria (Jack's Gf)
let's eat together
Karria (Jack's Gf)
Are you busy?
Jack
(walk away from Luki)
Karria (Jack's Gf)
(glance at Luki)
Karria (Jack's Gf)
Is he your friend?
Karria (Jack's Gf)
I love you Jack
Luki
(think about Jack told '' we aren't friend '')
Luki
(walk on the home way)
Karria (Jack's Gf)
I want to go with you (pout)
Karria (Jack's Gf)
(hold Jack's hand and wave)
Jack
Silly girl
You need to go home
Jack
We will meet Tomorrow
Karria (Jack's Gf)
Be safe Jack
Karria gets in the car and wave her hand to Jack
Luki done took bath and came out from bathroom
They stay in their own room and the bathroom is only one in the home
Jack
Don't block in my way (push Luki)
Luki
(fall and his kneel on the floor)
Luki
I don't mean to block his way
Aon (Jack's mom)
How is your school?
Aon (Jack's mom)
Did Luki bully you?
Luki
No aunt (saw aunt is holding vegetable full basket)
Aon (Jack's mom)
It is fine
Aon (Jack's mom)
Go to change first
and then you can help me
Aon (Jack's mom)
(saw Luki's kneel)
Aon (Jack's mom)
What's happen?
Aon (Jack's mom)
(sit down and look Luki's kneel)
Luki
Aunt stand up
I'm fine
Aon (Jack's mom)
(stand up)
Take care of yourself Luki
Jack
*Why is he bothering me?*
Jack
*tsk so annoying*
(washing hairs)
Come out from the bathroom
Aon (Jack's mom)
You cook well
Jack
What the f**k are you so happy?
Aon (Jack's mom)
GO CHANGE OR I WILL CUT YOUR TONGUE
Jack
You only love him not me
Aon (Jack's mom)
I love him the most
such a clever boy
not like you Jack
They are in the dinning room
Aon (Jack's mom)
Don't be shy
Aon (Jack's mom)
You look skinny eat more
Aon (Jack's mom)
(put food in plate)
Luki
(put food in Jack's plate)
You eat too
Aon (Jack's mom)
Suck a good boy (lower voice)
Jack
(angry more and more)
Luki
Aunt I will wash them
Go to rest aunt
Aon (Jack's mom)
Are you sure? Luki
Aon (Jack's mom)
Jack help Luki
Aon (Jack's mom)
I am going to my room
Aon (Jack's mom)
Don't bully Luki
Jack
Luki don't act good yourself in front of mom
Luki
I amn't acting (wash dishes)
Luki
If you aren't going to help,
please rest in your room
Luki
I need to turn off the light
Luki walk to the light switch
Jack
(pull him in his room)
Jack
Do you think I am a dump?
Jack
You make me wait and you don't care me at all
Jack
I already told you (grab his chin)
Jack
(ripe off Luki's shirt)
Jack
Don't call me (take the caddle
and light it)
The Jack tied Luki's both hands and hit him with whip
Jack
(put clothes in Luki's mouth)
Jack hit him again and again
Jack
Stop acting you f**ker
Jack
Are you going to make to mom hear this? huh
Jack
I told you get out (kick him)
Luki
(fall outside Jack's room)
Luki
(tears aren't stop dripping)
Luki
(slow walk to his room)
Luki can't lay on the bed
His back has many wounds and bleeding
He can't reach his back and he clean clearfully
He can't sleep that night
Chapter 2
Luki
(lying face down on the table)
Boy in class
(hit Luki's back)
Boy in class
I don't mean to hurt you
Jack
(saw them)
(the one outside the class👉)
Boy in class
(saw blood on Luki's back)
Boy in class
I will help you to the nurse room
Boy in class
(hold Luki's hand)
Boy in class
I hit you so
I will take you to the nurse room
Luki
(can't deny and go to nurse room with him)
Jack
How can he be so good at seduce other?
Luki goes in the nurse room and this room has many beds and they are so white and clean
Karria (Jack's Gf)
Come sit
Karria (Jack's Gf)
What's happen to you?
Karria (Jack's Gf)
(just saw Luki's face)
Karria (Jack's Gf)
You were at that day
Karria (Jack's Gf)
Your back
Karria (Jack's Gf)
Can you take off your shirt?
Karria (Jack's Gf)
I can't do it with this
Karria (Jack's Gf)
You already dressing all over your back
Karria (Jack's Gf)
(remove the dressing)
Karria really scare of Luki's back
Karria (Jack's Gf)
(look at Luki)
Karria (Jack's Gf)
I can't believe you fall
Karria (Jack's Gf)
If you want, you can tell me
Luki
This is my matter
Can you force dressing on my back?
Luki
If you aren't, I am going to do myself
Karria (Jack's Gf)
Hold on
After she throw the dirty cotton
Karria (Jack's Gf)
Can I ask you something?
Karria (Jack's Gf)
Aren't you childhood friend with Jack?
Karria (Jack's Gf)
Why I always saw you two are no longer friend
Karria (Jack's Gf)
Did something happen?
Luki
I think you should stop
Karria (Jack's Gf)
(shut her mouth)
Jack
(saw Luki with Karria)
Jack
(walk in and pull Karria)
Jack
Don't try to let your hand on her?
Jack and Karria are lovely doney everyday
He bend himself on the bed and under the blanket
He was going to have fever
Aon (Jack's mom)
Go to wake Luki
Aon (Jack's mom)
It is about school bell ring
Aon (Jack's mom)
He isn't like this
Jack
(touch Luki's back with his toe)
Jack
a. ..don't make me late
Jack
(pull Luki's blanket)
Jack
Mom told you to get up
Luki
(hold Jack's clothes)
Luki
Can you tell me teacher that I can't go. ..(sentence isn't done yet)
Luki
(feel hot and cold at the same time)
Luki
I should go to school
Luki
I will be late for schookwork
Jack is already arrive at school
They aren't at the same class
Luki is so tired and feel weak and he can't anymore
Luki
(can't see clearly and pass out)
He wasn't at the near school
So this chapter done there
my granmar skill isn't good
I will update everyday one chapter
Chapter 3
Luki
(wake up and hold his head because of headache)
Noah
I bought you some meal
Noah
You're lucky because I am the one who found you
Noah
If will other, do you think they will take you there
Noah
What are these on your back?
Luki
(look away)
I don't think I should tell to you
Luki
I know you save me but
Noah
*What is this? Oh may be*
(thinking dirty)
Noah pov : Luki was hitting by someone and Luki said '' hit me more I like this ''
This is just Noah thinking
Noah
(face turn red)
*What am I thinking so dirty?
He is still student*
Noah
(wave his face because become hot)
Noah
(saw on Luki's lip has rice)
Luki was eating and brought by Noah
Luki
(totally innocent and look at Noah)
Noah
(wipe rice and put it in his own mouth)
Luki
(surprise and stare at Noah chewing the rice)
Luki
(pull Noah's clothes)
Noah
huh.... Do you need something?
Luki
(lift the meal plate)
Noah
a. ..don't you like it
Noah
(don't understand)
a. ...how can I eat?
Luki
(scratch his own cheek with his finger)
Luki
It is a lot for me
You can eat
I found you are just chewing one rice so you don't need to shy...and you can eat mine ☺
Noah
(embrassing)
*I got caught*
Noah
*He is just my type
I like him but he looks younger than me I still don't know his name*
Luki
Can I know your name?
Luki
You saved and I still don't know your name I am Luki
Noah
Can you give me your number?
Noah
You should treat me a meal for this
Noah
*hehe I got his number*
Luki
Thank for saving sir Noah
Noah
*He just call me sir*
Noah
I will give you a ride
Luki
You help me too much
So, I'm worried that I won't be able to pay back
Noah
*He is such a good boy
I want him. ....aaa
how should I get him?*
Noah just left and didn't say anything
Luki
(sad)
Did I make him sad?
Aon (Jack's mom)
Where is Luki?
Aon (Jack's mom)
Why are you coming back alone?
Aon (Jack's mom)
Go find him
Aon (Jack's mom)
You two are brothers
Aon (Jack's mom)
You should take care of him
JACK GO FIND HIM
HEY JACK DON'T IGNORED ME
Jack
(go out from the home)
Jack
(angry)
*Who the f**ked is him?
What is he doing with my luki?*
Jack
How dare he smile to other?
Author
I am getting sleepy
Author
So let's stop there
Author
See you tomorrow at the next chaper
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