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System: Ask For Forgiveness

Chapter 1

Doctor Trace
Doctor Trace
I would like to sadly announce that the patient will no longer last
Doctor Trace
Doctor Trace
Although I don't want to say this, but I recommend Euthanasia for Krez
Roxanne
Roxanne
d-doc, you can't say that
Doctor Trace
Doctor Trace
I too don't want to say it, but what can I do?
Doctor Trace
Doctor Trace
It's the least we can do to stop her from suffering
Roxanne
Roxanne
bu-but she
Doctor Trace
Doctor Trace
we've been waiting for her to wake up for more than 7 years, I hate to say this but the longer we wait, the higher the risk of her dying in pain
Roxanne
Roxanne
......
Roxanne
Roxanne
Alright, can you please wait until tomorrow? I no We still wanted to spend our time with her
Doctor Trace
Doctor Trace
That would be the best, thank you and I apologize. I'll take my leave now.
Roxanne, Krez's sister and best friend spends the rest of her time talking and holding Krez's hand
She didn't leave her side even if its midnight. Until 4:32, the doctor came
No one spoke when the doctor came, everyone in the room didn't dare utter a word as they are afraid the one they've been waiting for will suddenly disappear
Roxanne
Roxanne
....
Doctor Trace
Doctor Trace
Good afternoon, the documents of application of Euthanasia has been signed.
Doctor Trace
Doctor Trace
I am hoping that all of you here have spent your time with the patient
Roxanne
Roxanne
we did
Doctor Trace
Doctor Trace
I'll remove the oxygen gas and all the other medicine technology.
the doctor whom have spent most of his time treating Krez is in no mood, yet he knows how painful it is for Krez. Her body has become fragile and if she ever wakes up her body will eventually give up, and it will be extremely painful.
So he suggested Euthanasia
Killing the patient out of mercy to stop the patient from suffering any longer
the moment everything is removed, they knew that any second Krez will vanish
Doctor Trace
Doctor Trace
T-time of death: 4:56 pm at April 23
every one cried
but they don't regret it, they don't want to see Krez suffering too
Roxanne
Roxanne
Thank you doctor, for not letting Krez experience the worst case scenario
Roxanne
Roxanne
I have mustered the courage to continue living without her by my side
Roxanne
Roxanne
it indeed hurt but what can I do?
Roxanne
Roxanne
when I see her next time, I'll ask for forgiveness and understanding
Roxanne
Roxanne
She is an angle and my savior
Roxanne
Roxanne
thank you
Doctor Trace
Doctor Trace
I am sorry for your lost. and I also apologize
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•••••••••••••••••
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Krez
Krez
Hello?
Krez
Krez
Where am I?
Krez
Krez
The pain finally ended, but
Krez
Krez
where am I?
Krez
Krez
I probably died
Krez
Krez
is this heaven?
Krez
Krez
Or hell?
Krez
Krez
or purgatory?
Krez
Krez
I don't know, I hate this
Krez
Krez
why is it so dark
Krez
Krez
I miss them, my family, Roxanne
Krez woke up in a dark place
She keeps on running yet it seems like she was not moving at all
Until she gave up and decided to wait
and wait
and wait
she didn't know how many days have passed, how many months or years
She did everything to entertain herself
Exercise, running, singing alone, dancing
she even get as far as choking herself just so she can escape
yet nothing happened
she was delusional
Krez
Krez
I am certain I have died
Krez
Krez
but why?!
Krez
Krez
Why is it like this?
Krez
Krez
I'm thankful I died because I no longer have to bare the pain
Krez
Krez
But why am I here?
Krez
Krez
I can't even hurt myself, I can't feel anything at all
Krez
Krez
Am I really stuck here?
Krez
Krez
I don't deserve this
Krez
Krez
do I?
She was about to hurt herself again when she saw something
truly astonishing
Krez
Krez
that
Krez
Krez
is that a light?
Krez
Krez
am I finally free?
Krez
Krez
I need that light
Krez
Krez
huh
Krez
Krez
where is it going?
Krez
Krez
no! I'm here
Krez
Krez
*chase after the light
she kept on chasing, running and running until she was able to touch the light
System 342
System 342
_______________ ding! _______________
Krez
Krez
I'm not hearing things, am I?
Krez
Krez
there is a sound
System 342
System 342
a pleasant day for you dear soul
Krez
Krez
ha-ha A pleasant day too(?)
Krez
Krez
*confused
Krez
Krez
W-What are you?
System 342
System 342
First of, I am a guide
System 342
System 342
Many humans in your world has refered to me as "system" in their novels
Krez
Krez
and ah what's that?
System 342
System 342
I'm like a guide to help different souls
System 342
System 342
however
System 342
System 342
I can't really interfere in the world
System 342
System 342
so I need a vessel
System 342
System 342
to change the fate of unfortunate souls
Krez
Krez
If I'm not wrong with my understanding
Krez
Krez
I would be the vessel?
Krez
Krez
am I right?
System 342
System 342
indeed
Krez
Krez
then does that mean
Krez
Krez
I'm gonna leave here?
Krez
Krez
no my first question should be
Krez
Krez
where am I?
System 342
System 342
You are in a place where captured souls are put
Krez
Krez
captured souls?
System 342
System 342
The souls who unconsciously tried to escape their own world
Krez
Krez
Are there any other souls here? Beside me?
System 342
System 342
For now, there is none other than you,
System 342
System 342
You see, captured souls are rare.
System 342
System 342
There is only 3 captured souls who have appeared in what you humans called century
System 342
System 342
and you are included in that 3 human
Krez
Krez
Where are the other 2 then?
System 342
System 342
They have vanished
Krez
Krez
H-how?
System 342
System 342
Who knows
System 342
System 342
As I was saying, you are going to change the fates of the souls who are assigned to you
Krez
Krez
And if I refuse?
System 342
System 342
You can't,
System 342
System 342
you are bonded to me the moment my light and your hand collided
System 342
System 342
and even if you are able to find a way to destroy the bond
System 342
System 342
you are going to disappear
Krez
Krez
Then ah, can I perhaps have a list of the things that I need to know?
Krez
Krez
You know, like rules and regulations thingy?
System 342
System 342
I would give you around 4 books to explain everything.
System 342
System 342
but I'll take you to the base first
The moment the system has said its last word, the surrounding change
the surrounding became like the earth
buildings, trees, and things
Krez
Krez
T-that's my house
System 342
System 342
A copy of your world
System 342
System 342
the only difference is, there is no one in here
System 342
System 342
not even animals
Krez
Krez
This is still great
Krez
Krez
thank you
Krez
Krez
can I ask another question?
System 342
System 342
you are already asking
Krez
Krez
am another one
System 342
System 342
go on
Krez
Krez
What exactly happened to me in the real world
System 342
System 342
you died
Krez
Krez
I mean, I know that
Krez
Krez
what I'm asking is what happened before and after
System 342
System 342
You've been comatose for 7 years
System 342
System 342
while you are asleep, you are experiencing the same pain you would have felt when you are awake
Krez
Krez
ah so that explains the pain I've felt for so long
Krez
Krez
then it suddenly stops
Krez
Krez
that's when I died
Krez
Krez
right
System 342
System 342
indeed, to be more informative. The doctor has proposed the solution, Euthanasia. They remove everything that keeps you alive and let you die peacefully
Krez
Krez
that's great, it's a good decision that they did that
System 342
System 342
After you died, The girl called Roxanne takes over your business and lead everything successfully. She visits your tomb every morning
System 342
System 342
She live a happy life thinking that you are by her side
Krez
Krez
that's great
Krez
Krez
my mind is at ease now
_____________________
••••••••••••
_____________________
System 342
System 342
This are the books that you have to read before starting the journey
System 342
System 342
*shows 4 thick books
Krez
Krez
*jaw dropped
Krez
Krez
you said 4 books but because of the thickness it's like 30 thick books
Krez
Krez
.......
System 342
System 342
.....
System 342
System 342
....enjoy

Chapter 2

Krez
Krez
I'm tired
Krez
Krez
every single detail is important yet its boring
System 342
System 342
if you want to be cheated by me then don't bother reading
Krez
Krez
too late, I finished reading everything
System 342
System 342
then
System 342
System 342
step 2
System 342
System 342
be perfect
Krez
Krez
I already am
System 342
System 342
....
System 342
System 342
You'll be stuck here to practice every skills there is to exist
System 342
System 342
including skills that doesn't exist in your knowledge
System 342
System 342
like magics and abilities
Krez
Krez
That's exciting
Krez
Krez
but
Krez
Krez
as in ALL?!
System 342
System 342
an in
Krez
Krez
Can I regret bonding with you
System 342
System 342
no
Krez
Krez
uwaaa
Krez was stuck
going in every room after mastering skills
Time doesn't exist in the copy of her world so she's been learning everything in not even a second
Krez
Krez
wahhhh
Krez
Krez
I'm so tired
Krez
Krez
overflowing
Krez
Krez
overflowing
Krez
Krez
I'm like a mushroom
Krez
Krez
no I just want to be a mushroom
Krez
Krez
My head is spinning because of everything I've learnt
Krez
Krez
I thought I can atleast enjoy here in this copy of my word
Krez
Krez
but why am I suffering
Krez
Krez
wait, copy of my world sounds too long
Krez
Krez
I'll call this world, Creasly
Krez
Krez
yep totally random
System 342
System 342
are you done
Krez
Krez
If I say I am are you going to add more pain?
System 342
System 342
who knows
Krez
Krez
...
System 342
System 342
Step 3
System 342
System 342
Learn everything
Krez
Krez
am I going to read hella thick books again?
System 342
System 342
somehow
System 342
System 342
you are going to read every details of different worlds
System 342
System 342
including their culture, tradition, history
System 342
System 342
as in every thing
Krez
Krez
....
Krez
Krez
I'll take my leave, I don't wanna be here
System 342
System 342
You have no choice
System 342
System 342
and before I forgot
System 342
System 342
you have been given rewards for bonding with me, it arrived just s few moments ago
Krez
Krez
finally some rewards
System 342
System 342
It's memory pill, perfectionists pill, workshop, library, and Inno pill
Krez
Krez
most of the name explains the function of the pills but
Krez
Krez
what is Inno pill?
System 342
System 342
It's more like a space than a pill
System 342
System 342
it has a different name but they created a "nickname" for the pill
System 342
System 342
it's a pill that give you access for the innovative future technology and things
System 342
System 342
It's like a space containing different and advance things or technology from different worlds
Krez
Krez
that would be helpful
Krez
Krez
then if I swallow all this pill, I'll permanently have this right?
System 342
System 342
yes
System 342
System 342
however
System 342
System 342
every pill has a side effect
System 342
System 342
you would experience hallucinations and extreme pain for every pill
System 342
System 342
since every pill are S+ grade, the pain might be unbearable. Have I mentioned that I am an SSS rank system thus you can enjoy everything and that includes higher grade materials, skills and lesson.
Krez
Krez
Well every success has hardship. *ignore the narcissistic side of her system
Before the system can say anything, Krez swallowed all the pills. all at once
Krez
Krez
it really is painful
Krez
Krez
ackk
System 342
System 342
did you swallow the pill so that the step 3 would be cast aside?
Krez
Krez
how did you....
System 342
System 342
right after the side effects sre gone
System 342
System 342
we will continue
Krez
Krez
(pain like this are nothing to me, I got used to it when I was still alive)
Krez
Krez
I'll just enjoy not being forced to read everything
Krez
Krez
wait no, memory pill gave me memory skills but I've already enhanced my memory skills at the training room for step 2
Krez
Krez
then what happened now? If I have 2 similar skills
System 342
System 342
apply what you've learned in step 1 then you'll know
Krez
Krez
can't you just say it?
System 342
System 342
I can but I don't want to
Krez
Krez
I'm in pain remember
Krez
Krez
won't you help me then?
System 342
System 342
no
Krez
Krez
.....
Krez
Krez
I'll check later
Soon after the side effects are gone
Krez
Krez
Status
_____________ ding! _____________
NovelToon
Name: Krez Eztrale Age: died at the age of 25 occupation: soul vessel past occupation: architect, engineer, and fashion designer relationship status: single World: Earth 52 Skills: Flexibility- SSS grade Singing skill- SSS grade Dancing skill- SSS grade Poetry- SSS grade Cooking skill- SS grade Language skill- SSS grade Communication skill- S grade Manners- SSS grade Appearance- SSS grade Medical skills- SS grade Inno Space- S grade Healing ability- S grade Mana circulation- SS grade Air profanity - S grade File Profanity - SS grade Ice profanity- SSS grade .... see more ______ search
Krez
Krez
* clicked the search button
Krez
Krez
Memory skill
____________ ding! ____________
search result:
Memory skill
history: memory skill attained through step 2 , congratulations for your hardwork in the training room.
history: You have received memory skill from memory pill
history: You have received advance memory skill
[would you like to continue to upgrade memory skill?]
Krez
Krez
continue
________________ congratulations ________________
you have upgraded memory skill to advanced memory skill
would you like to name it?
Krez
Krez
yes
What would you like to name the new skill?
Krez
Krez
details of the new skill first please
Advanced memory skill: everything that touches you would give you every knowledge. How to use: touch a book or anything and receive every details
Krez
Krez
heh I won't suffer any longer
Krez
Krez
I would like to name it
Krez
Krez
I know everything skill
________ ding! ________
You have named it "I know everything skill"
System 342
System 342
.....
System 342
System 342
I'll request a new training room for naming skills
Krez
Krez
....
Krez
Krez
it's a good name though
System 342
System 342
....
System 342
System 342
I'll request for that room to have intense training system
Krez
Krez
....
Krez
Krez
I'm ready for step 3
Krez
Krez
go on
Krez
Krez
HAHAHAHA
System 342
System 342
step 3: Learn everything
System 342
System 342
Please go in that room to see everything you have to learn
Krez
Krez
*look in the direction of arrow
Krez
Krez
....
Krez
Krez
in that room?
Krez
Krez
as in?
Krez
Krez
as in comfort room? bathroom?
Krez
Krez
that room?
System 342
System 342
yes
Krez
Krez
it's where the book is located?
Krez
Krez
are you sure?
System 342
System 342
...yes
Krez
Krez
....
System 342
System 342
...
Krez
Krez
...
Krez
Krez
I think the arrow has made the mistake
Krez
Krez
do you need a map?
System 342
System 342
It's in that room
System 342
System 342
all the books and antique things that would give you knowledge
Krez
Krez
alright then
Krez
Krez
*step forward
Krez
Krez
are you sure you are not pranking me?
System 342
System 342
...I'll take my leave
System 342
System 342
Take your time learning in the bathroom
Krez
Krez
.....
Krez
Krez
*go towards the bathroom
Krez
Krez
This-
Krez
Krez
is this really a bathroom?
Krez
Krez
why is it bright?
The bathroom is like a library with a chandelier, the walls of the bathroom is also covered with shining brown gems
Krez
Krez
seriously? who designed this? Why would you put an almost perfect library in a bathroom?
When she fully entered she started touching books and antiques, making sure that she has fully attained every knowledge there is
Krez
Krez
heh now I'm sure I'm the smartest
Krez
Krez
ah ya finally done. now I'm overload
_____________________ ••• _____________________
Author
Author
I have a problem
Author
Author
uwa
Author
Author
This is my first time creating a story and planning to continue it
Author
Author
however
Author
Author
How do this work?
Author
Author
how do the other author change the lead roles?
Author
Author
Like for example my lead role is Krez so she will appear in the right side with green background for her lines
Author
Author
however I need to change it so that in the next chapter there will be a different person taking the lead roles
Author
Author
Do you guys know the system story? I want it to be like that
Author
Author
i tried experimenting but everytime I tried it's either the character got deleted or change appearance on the first chapter
Author
Author
like for example:
Author
Author
NovelToon
Author
Author
this is the female lead right?
Author
Author
but she needs to possess people so I need to change it into this:
NovelToon
Author
Author
i need to change the person like that
Author
Author
I wasn't able to do it, Lhea came from a different story
Author
Author
uwaa help me

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