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I Am Waiting

Chapter1

Veerlok was shaking all pariryan ran to shaurya.Baal pari came running to shaurya and asked in terrified voice : shaurya ...y...ye kya ho raha hai .

Dwani pari: haa shaurya ise tarah veerlok kaap kyu raha hai .kahi phir se kaal ne koi nai chal toh nahi chali hai.

Shaurya: nahi paryion ye veerlok kaal ke wajh se nahi vivaan ke wajah se hil raha hai.

All pariyan(shocked): vivaannnn!!

Shaurya: haa vivaan .

Ananaya(tensed):par vivaan ne aisa kya kiya hai ki veerlok kaap raha hai aur vivaan veerlok ko nuksan kyu pahuchayega .

Shaurya: vivaan veerlok ko nahi apne aap ko nuksan pahucha raha hai.

All: matlab!!

Shaurya: abhi ye sab ka wakt nahi hai hame vivaan ke pass jana hoga .All nodded and went yo vivaan what they saw shocked them no it didnt shocked them it broke their heart shattered into zillions.

Vivaan was standing on one leg near a tree and was chanting something.His body was shivering was becaming red.He was sweating very badly and his face was showing pain .They could feel from 2 feet that he body was burning in fever .vivaannnn,Ananaya and all shouted after returning from their shock.

And they tired to go near him but shaurya stoped them by making a suraksha kavach infront of vivaan so they could not go near him and veerlok also stopped shaking .They all looked at shaurya shocked.

Baalpari(little aggressive): shaurya ye apne kya kiya hame uske pass jane dijiye uski halat dekhiye use hamri zaroorat hai.

Shaurya(calmly):nahi baalpari ab bahut der hochuki hai agar ab apne use chua ya uski madat ki toh uski maut ho jayegi.

Now this was again a new shock for all of them they all gasped.

Ananaya composed herself and said : kyu shaurya.

Shaurya: main aap logo ko sab bata ta hoon par yaha nahi kahi. yaha se chaliye.

They all looked at vivaan with concerned eyes and nodded and all went from their.

Scene change :

All faires are looking at shaurya with serious expression waiting for him to speak

Shaurya: Hum baalveer ko zinda karne ka ek zariya hai.

All became shocked :kya!

Shaurya:haa

Ananaya:tu apne ab tak kisi ko bataya kyu nahi.

Shaurya:kyuki ye baat mujhe khud yaad nahi thi.

Balpari : aap ko yaad nahi thi par kaise aur ye vriksh hamre veer lok main phele toh nahi tha.

Shaurya: Ye phele se hi tha hamre veer lok main per ye adrishya tha.

Balpari:par kyu

Shaurya: main ap logo ko vistar se batata hoon.Ye vriksh hame kai saal phele vriksh raaj ne beth ke thi unhone kaha tha ki koi bhi jo iske samne tap karega use kuch bhi mil jayega .parantu unhone kaha tha ke iske samne kisi ko zinda karna ka kabhi mat magana warna parinaam ghatak hoga.sab ne ise baat ko mana aur ye vriksh sab ki murad puri karta gaya.par ek bar meri par dadi ik yudh main mari gayi mere par dadaji apne patni prem main shok main chale gaye par ek.din bina hame bataye unhone ise vriksh ke samne tap kiya aur apne patni mange hame jab pata chala hamne unhe rokne ki koshish ki jiske phal swaroop woh mare gaye .Tab mere dadaji ne gussa main ise vriksh pe zadu kiya jisse age koi bhi ise dekh nahi sakta aur hamere dimag se iski smriti mita de .Aur unhone ye bhi kaha ki jo bhi ise jadu ko tore ga use bhayanak parinam ka samna karna hoga .vivaan ne woh zadu tora hai aur ab uska parinaam kya hoga koi nahi janta parntu vivaan ka zinda pachana na mumkin hai.Aur pustakalay main bhi iska bare main kuch nahi hai .

All eyes became teary

Anu:kya koi upay nahi hai use bachne ka.

Shaurya : nahi ananaya koi upay nahi hai . Ab sirf intezaar ho sakta hai use tap.ke khatam hone ka .

Tears escape her eyes. Balpari was anxious .

Balpari:shaurya aisa na bole koi upay hoga na .

Shaurya:agar upay hota toh vivaan ko bachane ki koshish nahi karta kya?

All started crying sliently.

Ananaya rubbed tears from her eyes with some spark in her eyes and said with determination:nahi shaurya main apne bhai ko.marne nahi dongi main har nahi manogi .Main pustakalye jaa kar iska upay dondho gi.

Shaurya:vryart hai ananaya pustkalaya main nahi milege ka kuch bhi .

Before ananaya can protest balpari:parntu ham hath pe hath dare nahi bath sakte use marta hua nahi dekh sakte .MAIN APNE EK BETE KO PANE KE LIYE DUSRA NAHI KHO SAKTI.Ananaya looked at her emotionally.

Dwani pari and jawala pari :ham bhi jayegaa pustakalaya .

Ananaya :nahi dwani pari aur jawala pari.

They looked at her with confuse expression.

Ananaya:vivaan abhi tap kar raha hai aur is vakt kaal dharti pe hamala kar sakta hai isliye aap ko dharti pe.hona hoga .

They wanted to protest but they know that the earth needs them now so they nodded.

Balpari:haa aur dooba dooba tum jao dharti pe vivaan ban ke raho jise kisi ko shak na hoon ki vivaan gayab hai hmmm he nodded and she changed him to vivaan and teleported him to dharti.shaurya: vaise toh iska haal nahi hai par main bhi koshish karta hoon iska haal doodh ne ke liye .All went to do their respective work.

They ananya balpari and shauruya were busy in finding solution to save vivaan.

Dwani pari and jawal apari were guarding dharti lok and were praying for vivaan .

And here vivaan's condition was deteriorating with every passing minute.

But he was still doing his tap.

His face was showing that he is feeling pain .But he was standing infront of that tree praying and praying just for his debu bhaiya to return back .

Time was passing and with every minute

he was losing his strenght to stand but he stubbling but he was still determine to bring his debu bhaiya back .here in library ananaya and balpari are searching for any even single clue to save vivaan .

Balpari who has a chance to get debu her son back was ready to lose it just to save vivaan her SECOND SON .

Ananya was trying to save her brother whome she met after years.

A brother was fighting to bring his brother .

A mother was fighting to save her one son at cost of other .

A sister was fighting to save her  brother .

A person whose sister were praying for his safety even when they were doing their duty .

And were craving to see him and hug him .

Balpari pov:-

Aisa nahi hai ki main balveer ko zinda nahi dekhana chahti par vivaan ki kurbani deke nahi .jaise.mere liye mera beta balveer hai waise hi vivaan hai.

Main agar aaj vivaan ke jaan jane di toh balveer mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karega .aur na main khud ko kabhi maaf kar paungi.

Balveer mujhe maaf karna jab tum ise duniya se gai main tumhe nahi bacha payi .par aaj vivaan ko zaroor bachaungi.

Bahut kateen hota jab ek maa ko apne do bete mai se ek chuna pare .

Ek maa apne bete ko bachane ke liye apni kurbani de sakti hai par apne bete ki nahi .aur main karuna ji se unka vivaan bhi nahi cheen sakti.

Beta mera sath dena .Aur tumhe wapis nahi la.payi isliye maaf kar dena .par tu chinta mat kar main na vivaan ko marne dongi na tera ana rukega.ab jab tera ane ka rasta hai toh jab vivaan bach jayega toh main woh tap karungi par .

Bas mera vivaan teekh ho jaye .

Ananaya pov:-

Aisa nahi hai debu ki main tujhe nahi bachana chahati

Par main janti hoon ke agara aaj vivaan ko kuch hua toh tum mujhe maaf nahi karoge .Aur main toh jete je mar jjaungi agar vivaan ko kuch hua toh.ye sach hai ki tum use mujhse jayada mante hoon par main bhi use kam nahi manti.uske liye jaan bhi de dongi.aur ye bhi sach ke main tumhe bhi bahut manti hoon bus kabhi kahe nahi payi.

Par tum chinta mat karo ek baar woh bach jaye phir main  khud woh tap karungi  tumhe lane ke liye .

Bas plz use kuch na ho.

And she continue her search.

Shaurya pov:-

Main janta hoon aap sab ye soch rahi ho ki vivaan ke bachane ke baad aplog ise tap ko karengi par phele baat vivaan ap main se kisi jaan khatre main nahi dale ga aur dusri baat ye tap jisne shuru jiske liye kiya hai woh hi samat kar sakta hai aur koi nahi.ise ka koi upay nahi hai.Hamne vivaan ko kho diya hai .

And tear escape his eyes.

But he still continue his search to save vivaan.

All were tensed .Because time was sliping from their hand like sand.And no one has any solution to save vivaan .

Suddenly Here shaurya baalpari ananya all pari felt like vivaan is in danger and they became shocked and immediately teleported to vivaan.And what they saw shocked them vivaan was falling on ground slowly they shouted vivaan !!!!!.And ran to him ananya caught him in her arms and layed him his head was in balpari's lap his breath was slow his face was sweaty his body was burning it was red .His fever was burning their hand but they were least bother they focus was on vivaan safety to wake him up.all were shouting his name .All were crying.

Balpari(crying): vivaaan vivaann utho beta utho.

Ananya (shaking him): vivaan plz uthoooo plzzzz uthooo she shouted .

Uthi vivaan .she shaked him desperately to hear didi from him .

Shaurya was standing at a distance crying .Knowing that vivaan will die in few hours.

All pari were shaking him in attempt to wake him.

All were crying and shouting.

But will he wake up?

Suddenly their was a glow of lighty near the tree and all became surprised as it almost blinded them as the light slowly started fading they tried to look

At source of light they saw a boy whose face was not clear its like his body was developing slowly slowly the boy's face became visible and it was non other than

BALVEER /DEBU.He smiled and said DIL SE BUALAYA BALVEER AYA.

They became happy and whisper debu/balveer .And tjen they looked at vivaan who was still breathing but very very slowly.They were confuse whether to feel happy after seeing their balveer /debu or cry after seeing their vivaan almost dead.

Finally they got their balveer/debu but maybe they lost their vivaan.Their eyes again filled up .

Debu was soooo happy after seeing them but..one sec why they have tears in their eyes and why.their face is sad.. Aren't they happy to see him alive .Suddenly his eyes fall on vivaan who was unconsious.

He became shocked .what happend to his brother why is he laying down .Is something ...no.his brother is fine .he is fine he thought.

Debu ran to vivaan shouting:vivaan!!! And hold him in his arms .shaking him:vivaan ankhen khol...vivaan  tu sun raha hai uth but he was still not waking .debu eyes teared up.

He looked at evryone and evryone has tears in their eyes.All heads were down .

He looked at balpari and said : kya hua maa vivaan ko .She chocked and tears started coming from her eyes .

He became tensed koi mujhe batau kya hua hai vivaan ko.

All were not saying anything all were crying after sometime shaurya gain courage and looked at debu and said main batat hoon all looked at him .He told debu everything.

Debu was shocked he was shattered .After so many days he came back only to lose his brother .He was not able to react till now his brother is breathing but will he will lose his brother in few minutes nooooo this cannot be true this false this is ....false....

He willl not lose him.He will.not.

To be continue .......

chapter2

Vivaan was laying in debu's arms .

Debu was freezed after hearing that his brother can die any moment.His brothers face was showing so much pain in this unconscious state also he was in pain.Vivaan's face was red he was taking heavy breaths.His body was very hot .it was so much hot that debu can feel his hand burning but he was least bother about his hand his focus was on his life who was laying in his arms and maybe..maybe was cou tung his last breaths.

Debu was holding vivaan and was looking at vivaan lost.His eyes was waiting to see vivaan smiling.His ears craved to hear bhaiya from his bacha.

He remember every moment he spend with vivaan. Everything flashed in his mind.He can hear someone calling him but he didn't want to respond.He want to

This to be dream.He yearn to see his family his brother for many days but he got the chance at the cost of his brothers life .He wanted to cry to shout to hug his brother and cry his life out but but he was not able to respond .He cannot lose his brother like that he cannot.He heard ananya saying:-dabbu dabbu plz kuch bolo hamara vivaan ham...e .....cho....r ka...r j...aa....raha..... hai ...plss..he wated to shout nooooo nothing will happend to vivaan .But his voice betrayed him.Suddenly he hear some childrens voice BALVEER BACHO BALVEER BACHOO....His trance broked .

All pari were looking at debu and vivaan with tears in their eyes .They were shocked to see debu not responding to anything nor he was crying neither he was reacting to anything he was just staring at vivaan and was holding him firmly.They excpectef him to shout to cry but here he was just lifeless.How can he not be after all vivaan was his life .All tried to make him respond all called him ananaya(teary):- dabbu dabbu plz kuch bolo hamara vivaan ham...e cho....r ka...r j...aa....raha..... hai plzz ...kuch bolo use ....roko use ...plzzzzz. All looked at her sadly .She was also suffering.She was losing brother whom she met after years .And may be ...maybe she will lose her only friend debu...too....because debu cannot live without vivaan

Baalpari also tried to break debu's trace but he was like in some kind of shock.Maybe ...he didn't want go respond to all of them.Tears escape her eyes.Few months ago she lost her one son but she stood strong for other son today again she lost one son and again she has to be strong for the other son and maybe for her daughter too.She looked at debu teary eyes and it breaked her heart but what can she do the only person who can make him smile is laying lifeless in his arms.she knew what vivaan is in debu's life .vivaan was one who gave him a ray of hope when debu lost everything and became a strict person with strict personality. Vivaan gave him beautiful family which debu lack.He made him realise that balveer can also show his feelings because balveer is also human .debu at very young age lost his friend manav and meher he lost his rani pari maa he lost his her also for sometime.

At that time vivaan gave him hope and became his everything and today his hope is laying in his arms fighting for life.She has seen debu crying when vivaan was in that gola .A single scratch on vivaan and debu would create havoc he never ever let vivaan go in problem alone .It was not that he dont trust vivaan but debu was too much protective towards vivaan.He returned his debu to her not once but many time .Today also he returned her debu sacrificing himself.

But she cannot afford to lose her vivaan .

Her son who has special place in her heart.she can never choice between debu and vivaan both are her heart two parts .His cuteness used to made her day .She looked at ananya she was begging to vivaan to wake up she was begging to debu to ask vivaan to wake up.She looked at all pari they were also crying their eyes out fir vivaan .In this small time this boy made his place in all their hearts.Her eyes fall on shaurya who never cried was having teras in his eyes their  eyes met this was the impact vivaan have on them.

Suddenly they all hear BALVEER BACHAO BALVEER BACHAOOO.

They all looked at each other shocked .They were all were trying to cope with one shock now another trouble await them.

Jawla pari composed herself and said :- ye awaz toh dharti pe se aa rahi hai kai waha koi musibat to nahi.

Slowly everyone compose themself except debu who was still ot looking up he was still siting down with vivaan in his lap.

Shaurya:- hame abhi dekhna chaiye ki dharti wasi lok ko kya hua hai.

He closed his eyes and what he saw shook him to the core and he opened his eyes with a jerk.

Baalpari(worridly) :- kya hua shaurya .

Shaurya:- dharti vasi bahut badi musibat main hai aur hame abhi unhe bachana hoga.Waha pe kaal ne aisa jadu kiya hai ki har insaan ki andar ke burai uske ache swaroop ko maar rahi hai .yaha tak ki jise woh sabse jayada pyar karte hai unhe bhi maar rahi hai .Hame un sab ko bachana hoga nahi shristi ka vinash nishchit hai.

They all looked at each other and then at debu who was still carsing vivaan's hair .

Their eye teared up.Baalpari went to debu and slowly called him "balveer".And debu looked at her with such a painful  and tearful gaze that her heart broke infact everybody felt pain.They all know he is emotionally vulnerable as he got a chance to be with his family again now only he have came back from death and now only his losing one of his precious relations .And all of them knew a balveer can also need time to stable his emotions.

And now debu needs that so shaurya said:- abhi ham pata nahi ke kaal ne kis tareka ka jafu kiya hau isliye phele ham jake dekte hai jake ke dekte hai phir zaroorat pade to balveer ko bulayenge.Aur jwala pari aur ananya aap dono yaha ruke aur vivann ke bimari ka ilaz dhoondne ke koshish kare.

All nodded .Everyone left except ananya,jwala pari,debu and offcourse vivaan.

HERE IN VEERLOK:- Ananya and jwala pari went to debu slowly touched his shoulder and said:- debu hame vivaan ko palag pe letana chaiye...

Debu looked at them with red eyes his eyes contain tears but it was not falling

But he nodded.They slowly picked him up and made him lay on the bed .

THERE IN DHARTI LOK-

When shaurya and rest pari reached  they saw a chaos their.They saw that  evil form of all people were trying to kill the good form of the people and also they were trying to kill all their loved once as well .And their actuall body were laying on ground because their was fight going on between their bad and good version.All pari and shaurya were shocked .shurya:- aisa hi chalta raha toh ye burai jeet jayegi aur dharti lok pe burai ka raaj hoga hame kuch karna chaiye.

They tried  to control it but as soon as all pari tried their magic they realise that their magic is not working .baalpari(tensed):- shaurya hamara shakti to  kaam nahi kar rahi hai.

Ab ham inhe kaise bachaye..

Shaurya:-bachana to inhe hoga hi baalpari shaktiyan nahi toh buddhi shakti sahi par hame haar nahi maan sakte.

They started trying ways to stop them.

But they were unable to stop them.They looked at each other tense.Now what can they do.They tried to teleport but they were unable to do so .

Baalpari:- ham apni grah pe wapis kyu nahi jaa pa rahe hai.

Shaurya:- kyuki yaha pe ek kavach lagya gaya hai jo in ankhon seh hame nahi dekha aur ham phas gaue hai uski wajah se  ab yaha  se jaa sakte hai na yaha kisi ko bula sakte hai apne antar maan se.

Aur kisi ko bhi bulana vyrat hai kyuki jo yaha ayega woh aise hi phas jayega.

They were stuck their and were helpless to see human being being destroyed.

Now they cannot save earth.

For the first time shaurya was feeling helpless he could not save vivaan nor could he save earth.

They were thinking how to inform balveer about it .

Suddenly they saw BALVEER COMING towards them with a unusual sword in his hand .Seeing pari were shocked because they knew that when he will come here he will also be caught here.

Shaurya was also shocked but for some different reason he murmur:- to isliye vivaan ne woh tap kiya.Wah vivaan wah tum aaj jeet gaye .and he smiled.

All pari were going to stop him by informing him about the danger.Shaurya stoped them .

Shaurya:- nahi pariyon balveer sab janta hai .Aur ye upchar leke aya hai.

All looked shocked at shaurya .

All :- lakin kaise??

Shaurya:- vivaan ne ise bataya.ye upchar bhi vivaan ne hi diya hai.

Baalpari(happily):- kyaaa iska matlab woh teek ho gaya.

All looked with hope .

Shaury(sadly):- nahi ab woh bach bhi nahi sakta.

Baalpari(angrily) :- ye kya bol....

Suddenly they saw as soon as balveer kept the sword infront of him they all saw the kavach and he broked the kavach with his sword.As soon as he broked they all got their powers back.He came towards them and said :- aap sab theek hai na .

They all nodded .He did some magic  and now they could see who is bad version and who is good version of a person.

He started fighting with them and started killing them.

Baalpari:- hame balveer ki madat karni chaiye.

Shaurya:- nahi ye ladai hamre do jaabaz balveer ki hai .ise ham nahi lad sakte.

Vayu pari :- matlab??

Shaurya(giving them some power):- khud hi dheek lo.

They closed their eyes and

FLASHBACK:-after debu ,ananya and jwala pari layed vivaan on bed .

Jwala pari:- ananya ek kam karte hai hum jake ke dava kaksh se iske upchar ke liye kuch jadi buti bana ke leke atte hai.hmmm

Ananya nodded .They both looked at vivaan and debu who was holding his hand protectively.They know they dont need to be worried for vivaan as debu is their to take care of him.They looked at each other and left.

Debu who was looking vivaan teary.

Slowly carses his hair .The voice BALVEER BACHAO is still ringing in his ears.But the moment with vivaan is also flashing in his mind .He remember saying "ye dharti vasi hamra pariwar hai".Then he remember " Bhaiya you are the best","vivaan sirf kuch ghante rahega hamre sath".His mind said go they need you .A thought came in his mind said  :- par waha shaurya ,maa aur baki pariyan hai.

Then next second another thought came in his mind said:- par waha tumahri bhi zaroorat hai.

He know he should go to save earth as they are also his family.But he want to stay with vivaan also.

He looked at vivaan And said softly:- vivaan main janta hoon tum bura nahi manoge par main phir bhi sorry bulta hoon.Hame kabhi apne pariwar main kisi ek ko nahi chun sakte na vivaan .Hame sabka khayal rakna hot hai ..hai na?.Isliye main abhi hamre pariwar dharti vasi ko bachane jaa raha hoon.Maa khushi dadji sabko.

Main janta hoon tum bura nahi manoge akhir A scene flashed in his mind "mujhe chota mat bolo bhaiya"and he smiled tearily akhir tum bade jo hoge gaye hoon na .Tu...tu mera intezaar karega na bacha...bhaiya jaldi aa jayenge.Aur...tu....jaldi theek ho jayega haa.He kissed his forehead.Tears were flowing from his eyes.

Only he know how much pain he was feeling in his heart when his heart dont want to leave vivaan alone .But he have too.He got up to leave after informing ananya and jwala pari and tried to leave vivaan hand which he was holding from long but his eyes fall on vivaan's bracelet in it was a paper he looked at it confuse and slowly took the paper out.

He unwrape the paper and read.

DEAR BHAIYA:-

YE CHITTI MAINE ISLIYE LIKI HAI KYUKI MAIN JANTA HOON KI JO TAP MAIN KARNE JAA RAHA HOON USKE BAAD MAIN NAHI BACHUNGA.BHAIYA KAAL NE BAHUT BADA PLAN KIYA HAI USNE EK AISA JADU SIKHA JO CRORE SAAL MAIN EK BAAR KAR SAKTE HAI .AUR WOH YE PLAN PURSO PURA KAREGA.WOH EK AISA SURKASHA KAWACH TAIYAR KIYA HAI JISE HAME MAIN SE JO BHI USKE ANDAR JAYEGA USKI SHAKTI KHATAM HO JAYEGI WOH WAHA  ATAK JAYEGA.ISE JADU SE LOGO ANANDAR BURAI AUR ACHAI KI LADAI HOGI AUR BURAI JEET JAYEGI .DHEERE DHEERE EARTH PE USKA RAAZ HO JAYEGA.AUR TAB USKE LIYE HAPPY BHAIYA KI SHAKTI KI ZAROORAT BHI NAHI PADEGI .TAB WOH UNKI SHAKTI APNE BURE KAM KE LIYE USE KAREGA .HAM USE ROK NAHI PAYE KYUKI HAMRA DHAYAN BHATKA DIYA.HAME LAGA WOH HAPPY BHAIYA KO MAREGA PAR USNE WOH MANTRA CHUPKE SE LE LIYA.AB ISE EK TALWAR HI ROK SAKTI HAI WOH BAHUT SHAKTISHALI TALWAR HAI JISE AAJ TAK KOI NAHI BACHA .AUR WOH TALWAAR SIRF AAP CHALA SAKTE HOON KYUKI APKI SHAKTI KAAL KE PASS HAI.AUR APKO ZINDA KARNE KE LIYE MAIN KAAL SHAM KO USE SUBH MUHURAT MAIN TAP KAROUNGA .MUJHE ITNA KAISE PATA YE MAT PUCHNA PLZ WAKT ANE PAR APKO PATA CHAL JAYEGA.

JAIYE BHAIYA MAIN EK YANTRA BANAYA HAI AAP ABS EK BAAR ZOOR SE JO USE PED KE NECHE HAI JAIYE AUR LE LIJIYE WOH TALWAR

AUR BHAIYAA.....

MAIN KAHI NA KAHI SELFISH HOON KYUKI MAIN APNE LIYE BHI APKO ZINDA KARNA CHAHTA THA .PATA HAI MAIN UPAR SE NE APKO MAA DIDI DADJI AUR HAMRE VEERLOK KE PARIWAR KE SATH KUSH DEKENA CHAHTA HOON.

PAARI MAA NE BATAYA THA APNE ZINDAGI BHAR APNE HAR KHUSIYAN  SACRIFICE KAR DIYA .

AB APKE BARI HAIN KHUSHI PANE KI.

MAA BAHUT YAAD KARTI HAI APKO KHUSHI DIDI RUTI RAHETI HAI.DADAJI MISS KARTE HAI KYUKI AB KOI UNKE GYAN PATIENTLY SUNTA.

AUR BHAIYA AB ANANYA DIDI KO PROPOSE KAR DENA HAA.AUR INTEZAAR MAT KARNA .MUJHE PATA HAI YOU LOVE HER AND SHE TOO LOBE YOU BHAIYA.MAIN UPAR SE SAB DEKHUGA HAA.AUR BHAIYA SORRY MAIN APKEUMEDO PE KHADA NAHI UTTAR PAYA MAINE APKA ACHA CHILA NNMAHI BAN PAYA KAAL SE APKE HAMSHAKAL KO NAHI BACHA PAYA.

I AM SORRY.

AND  THANK YOU.

PATA HAI BHAIYA BACHPAN SE PITA KA PYAR NAHI DEKHA PATA NAHI THA PITA KYA HOTA HAI.PAR JAB SE AAP AYE HOON LAGTA PAPA APKE JAISE HI RAHE HONGE.PITA KA PYAR DE DIYA BHAIYA APNE.

PATA HAI BHAIYA JAB AAP THE KABHI KOI KAMI MAHSOOS NAHI HOYI.

KOI BHI NAHI.YOU WERE MY FRIEND .YOU GUIDED ME LIKE A BIG BROTHER.YOU SCOLDED ME LIKE A FATHER .BHAIYA RISHTA JORNA AUR NIBHANA BHI APNE SHIKAYA AAP.

SAB KUCH DE DIYA AP SAB NE MUJHE BHAIYA .AB ZINDAGI KO ALVIDA KHANE KA WAKT AA GAYA HAI  BHAIYA.

BHAIYA MAA KE SAMNE DOOBA DOOBA KO VIVAAN BANA KE RAK DENA .ANANYA DIDI KO BAHUT KUSH RAKHNA PATA HAI SAALO BAAD EK AUR  BEHEN MILI THI UNSE JEE BAR KE BAAT NAHI KAR PAYA MAIN MERE TARAF SE SORRY KEHANA.MERI SARI PARI BEHNO KO BHI SORRY KEHNA AUR KEHNA MUJHE YAAD KARKE ROYE NA BALKI SAB LOG MUJHE YAAD KARKE MERI COMDEY PE HASNA .MOM KO BHI KHUSH RAKNA BHAIYA UNHONE TOH APNA SAB KUCH KHO KE BAAD KAI SAAL BAAD MUJHE PAYA THA .KASH THORA AUR WAKT MILTA.

DOOBA DOOBA KO KEHANA ROYE NA MERI JAGAH MERI MAA KE HATH LE LADOO KAYE MAIN DEKUNGA UPAR .AUR GOD JI SE PRAY KARKE AP LOGO SE MILUNGA BHI BHAIYA.

SHER JI SE KHENA KI AB TU THORA MAZAK KARNA SIKHE EK DAM SERIOUS REHTE HAI.ACHA BHAIYA MAIN CHALTA HOON .

SAB KHUSH RAHNA HAA.

GOOD BYE BHAIYA ..

AUR MAIN BURA NAHI MANUGA AGAR APNE MERE AUR DHARTI MAIN SE DHARTI KO CHOONA .

BYE BHAIYA AND MOVE ON IN LIFE.....

YOUR BEAUTIFUL LIFE IS WAITING FOR YOU BYE...

After reading this letter debu became red with crying .He hugged vivaan and cried cried his heart out .

Plzzz vivaan dont leave me i will die...plz vivaan ......vivaan main tere bina khush nahi rah paunga....plz vivaan ....mere teri baat maunga har baat par wapis aaaja na chotuuu.

After repeating same thing for sometime he composed himself and said:- main teri wish zaroor puri karunga use kaal ka kaal aa raha hai.

Bus tu mera intezar karna plzzz.

Aur theek hona tujhe meri kasam..

Chal chalta hoon.and he left to inform ananya and jwala pari about his leaving.He didn't said anything about this letter because he know they will be shattered.

He took the sword closed his eyes and played vivaan image in his mind and left to kill kaal.

Knowing that maybe his brother will not survive but still ready to save world.

He thought:- mujhe vishwas hai tu meri kasam nahi todega.

The flashback end.

All pari were crying and looked at debu who was fighting with kaal puppets.

They wanted to hug him it is not easy to resume your duty when you know you heart is going to die.

Yes heart vivaan was debu's  heart.

Shaurya(sadly):- vivaan ne jo talwar layi hai woh bhi usne tap karke layo hai jise uski body weak hai ab woh kuch ghanto kuch minute ka mehmaan hai.

Baalpari(teary):- aisa bat khaiye shaurya.

Vayu pari(crying):- haa sharuya  hum sab jante hai ye ki vivaan balveer ka kasam nahi todega kabhi nahi.

Shaurya:- jo kabhi nahi hua woh hoga .isbar vivaan ka bachna mumkin nahi.

They all were shocked and looked at debu who was still fighting willing to win to save earth and to fulfill his brother's wish so that he can go back to his brother only if je knew vivaan will not get up ever again.

And in  veerlok ananya and jwala pari are trying everything to save vivaan but maybe vivaan is counting his last breath.

      

TO  BE CONTINUED...

CHAPTER 3

It was a beautiful full moon night.

A man was sitting in his balcony sipping tea.Suddenly he felt someone behind him he smile and said peche mat khadi rah aja age aja idhar beth ja pointing towards the chair infront. she nodded and came forward and sat beside him.He sliently passed her a cup of tea with was already present on table.She smiled at him and took the tea they both were drinking their own tea without uttering a word.After few minutes the man spoke up :- aaj phir debu usi jagah gaya hai na .

She nodded .The man sigh sadly :- Ananaya Tujhe kabhi dar nahi lagta kya ki dhere dhere woh isme khota jaa raha hai.Ananaya smiled and said looking at sky :- dar lagta tha .....bahut dar lagta tha ....aisa nahi maine use roka nahi roka....jab maine use pucha kyu jate ho waha toh usne pata hai kya kaha?

Man:- kya.

Anu:- usne muskara diya kaha ek wakt tha jab woh mere wajh se woh dard main tha ab main apni use bhool ka saja katne jata ho waha jise ek din woh mujhe maaf karde aur mere pass wapis aa jaye .jab maine use pucha woh hi jagah kyu kya milta hai udhar tu usne kaha waha vivaan ne akhiri pal mere sath bitaye hai waha uska akhiri ehsaas hai jo main waha har roz mehsoos karne jata hoon aur har pal jab uski akhiri har lafz yaad ate hai na dil dard se bhar jata hai ki main use bacha nahi paya uska akhiri wakt ke har lambhe ankhoon ke samne daud parte hai aur dil dard se bhar jata hai .phir usne mere taraf dekha aur masumiyat se kaha vivaan bhi jab jab mere hamsaklo se milta hoga use bhi meri maut yaad ati hogi na isliye mujhse naraz hai dekhna jab main roz saja katonga na tab woh ek din mujhe maaf kardega aur mere pass wapis aa jayega hai na?Uski ankhen main pani tha par hoto pe smile thi.main use age kuch bol hi nahi payi ray.she said and looked at ray.whose eyes were teary he hold her hand and said :- maine tumse aur dev se tum dono ka bhai cheen liya phir bhi tum mujhe apna bhai maan ke roz mujhe aur debu ko ek karne kyu ati ho?

She smiled :- kyuki ye mere vivaan ke akhiri icha thi ki ham sab kush rahe .

Ray:- usne mera naam kabhi nahi liya tha.

Anu:- usne ye baat mujhse woh tap karne se phele kahi thi.

Ray(smiled):- debu bhi sab apni maut se phele janta tha na.

(jab debu last time mara tab ki baat ho rahi hai)

Anu:- woh sab ek din phele hi jaan gaya tha ki tum uski bhai ho.aur yehi baat usne vivaan ko bata di thi.aur use vada liya tha ki ye sach kisi ko pata na chale .tumhe bhi nahi.par.....

Ray:- par vivaan ko pata chal gaya bhaymar aur kaal ko ye pata hai aur woh log use yudh ke baad mujhe mar dalenge isliye usne mujhe bachane ke liye use din mere samne sach kaha tha par main buddhu ye baat kaal ko bata aya aur ...a tear slip his eyes aur kaal kr plan ke mutabik maine vivaan ko use kitab ke bare main bata diya jisme woh tap aur use talwar ke bate thi .kyuki main janta hum jante the ki aaj tak koi use tap ko pura nahi kar paya jo kiya uski mau....anu and ray closed their eyes and tear slip their eyes.ho gayi thi.They sat in slience .They ray said with regret :- kash maine vivaan ke bato ko sach amni hoti tu woh zinda hota .aur itne sab ke baat bhi tumne mujhe maa...anu cutted him.

Anu(teary):- main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti ray iske liye .ray looked at her with tears and regret but not with shock because somewhere he know that.anu(composing herself):-par tum debu ke bhai ho aur vivaan ke bhi isliye main tumhe bhai maan chuki hoon aur woh bhi dil se mana hai aur ek bhen apane ek bhai ke liye dusre ko nahi chod sakti .Aisa vivaan khatha tha.Ray smiled with tears and said :- kya kabhi usne mujhe apna bhai ke tarah pyar kiya kya.

Anu smiled:- bahut pyar karta tha woh tumse haa debu jitna nahi kyuki uske jitna pyar woh kisi se nahi karta .par haa jab tumhe woh sach bata ke aya tha na toh bahut umeed se usne kaha ki didi dekhana ab hum sab khushi khushi aur sath raheng .Ray's eyes filled up.Anu smiled sadly:- aaj sab sath hai kuch khush hai kyuki sach nahi jante kuch dukhi kyuki sach jante hai par sab sath hai par woh nahi hai yaha aaj ye sab dekhne ke liye.anu :- khair kaal mere aur debu ki shadi ke 5 salgirah hai aana zaroor.

Ray:- debu chahta hai ye.

Anu smiled:- woh tumse nafrat nahi karta ray bas vivaan uski zindagi main bahut mayne rak ta tha.....ham sab se zayada....she wiped her tears and said:-nafrat karta toh tumhe har liy ye ghar nahi kharid ta .

Ray smiled sadly and said:- aunga sab ke liye aunga par vivaan ke liye sab se phele aunga .Anu and ray looked at sky smiled sadly  and continue drinking tea.

Anu(think):- umeed karti hoon tu kush hai vivaan tune kaha tha tu upar se dekh ge ga.dekh debu ne tri har icha puti kar de .maine debu ne shadi kar le .ray hamre sath nahi rahta par hamre pariwar ka hissa hai .par tu chinta mat kar ek din ray bhi hamre sath rahega main koshish kar rahi hoon.aur karti raho gi aur tujhe pata hai karuna maa aur mom ko aj tak pata nahi chala teri bare main doba doba aaj bhi vivaan bana ghum raha hai jaise tu chahta tha ab tu kush hai na tu.she smiled looking at the sky though her eyes has tears.

She will be waiting a sister will always wait for him even though she know he will never return to her.

She closed her eyes and saw a happy face of vivaan infron her smiling and saying .

"Didi you did right"

She felt.peace.

Ray looked ta sky and saw vivaan face smiling at him.He so miss his smile .

He wanted to hear ray bhaiya from vivaam.But alas he lost this right the day he planned to kill vivaan.

He so wanted to fullfill his last wish but alas his guilt and regret are still their.And he know even though debu pretend to forgive him still.somewhere he was still hurt after all his blood brother killer his heart .

Vivaan was not only debu's brother but his heart .

For once he wanted  to change the past but alas the time doesnot come back.

He will be waiting for god forgivness.

Maybe he was not good but he loved that boy dearly

Scene change to a cliff where a man was sitting at one direction and remembering something .tears were flowing from his eyes but he was sitting like a dead man looking at the same direction .He ears where ringing with only one  word "debu bhaiya".He was remembering that one soft call which used to make him happy.

The smile with which vivaan used to call him used enlighten his day.

He still remember the day that snatch his life his heartbeat from him.

And the day still brought tears to his eyes still breaks his heart in zillion pieces .

The last words of vivaan was roaming in debu's ears.

"Bha..iya..plz....mujhe...apne..kasam...se..mukt ...kar....dijiye....plzz....main ....ye...dard....bardash....nahi...kar...paa....raha....hoon....plz...bhaiya..main...apni...maut...ka..bheek....mangta hoon."

He can still remember in the pain in his brothers voice.The tears in his brother's eyes.

He had always promised himself to save his brother but that day his brother asked him to grant him death that thought gave him chills.

He used fulfill all his wishes but this was the the toughest wish his brother ever asked him.

He produce his mobile from phone and looked at the screensaver which was the face of smiling vivaan .

'Teri har icha maine puri ki vivaan .

Tune jo manga diya use din tune mujhse mau...he paused and closed his eyes tears were flowing from his eyes.maut mangi woh bhi di kya tu ek bar meri baat manke dubara nahi aa sakta kya.

Tune kaha sab ko kush rahkana main sab ko kush rakhne ki puri koshish karta hoon .teri har baat mani maine vivaan tu kyu meri ek baat nahi maan sakta.

I miss you vivaan i miss youuuuuuu

He shouted on top of his lungs.

He was crying like a child hugging the phone.

He was remembering each and every moment with vivaan .His heart said :-vivaan bhi aise dard zhell raha tha .

He felt vivaan's voice in his ears:-

"Bhaiya...i lo..ve you...."

The words were ringing in his ears slowly after crying for many hours he felt weak he felt dizzy due to this emotional stress.He felt his heart empty.He slowly closed his eyes falling on ground the his finder fall on a audio which was pop up as  remainder.

And the audio played a song

Surmayee ankhiyon main

Nanha munna ek sapana de jaa re

Surmayee ankhiyon main

Nanha munna ek sapana de jaa re

Nindiya ke udate paakhi re

Ankhiyon maon aaja saathi re

As soon as debu heard it he felt his mind goes in past and smiled appear on his face.a flashback came infront of his eyes.

FLASHBACK:-

DEBU WAS READING SOMETHING SITTING ON BED SUDDENLY VIVAAN CAME RUNNING TO HIM AND SAID:- BHAIYA MAIN AA GAYA AB CHALO SO TE HAI NA .

DEBU LOOKED AT HIM AND SAID HO GAYA TERA DO MIN .VIVAAN SMILED CUTELY WHICH MADE FELT PEACE .DEBU KEPT THE BOOK ON SIDE TABLE AND SAID DEBU:- CHAL SONE .HE LAYED AND MADE VIVAAN LAY AND HUGGED HIM .AFTER SOMETIME SUDDENLY VIVAAN GOT UP AND DEBU LOOKED AT HIM IN SHOCK .

VIVAAN  BROUGHT  DEBU'S MOBILE .DEBU WAS STILL LOOKING AT HIM IN CONFUSION.

VIVAAN :- BHAIYA CHALO GANA GAO NA .

DEBU WHO WAS TILL NOW CONFUSE NOW LOOKED AT HIM SHOCKED .

DEBU:- GANA PAR KYU.

VIVAAN:- MUJHE RECORD KARNA HAI PLZ.

DEBU:- PAR KYU RECORD KARNA HAI.

VIVAAN:- OHO KABHI BINA SAWAL PUCHE BAAT MAAN LIYA KARU .KHAIR WOH MAIN GAYA THA MAMA KE GHAR TOH UNKE CHOTA BETA HAI NA EK DIN EK GANA SUN RAHA THA MAINE PUCHA KISKA GANA SUN RAHE HO TU USNE KAHA KI APNI BADE BHAIYA KA JAB WOH BHAR JATE HAI TU MAIN UNKA RECORD KIYA HUA GANA SUNTA HO.

DO DIN BAAD AP BHI MISSION PE JAOGE NA TU MAIN APKA GAYA HUA GANA RAAT KO SUN KE SO JAUNGA .KYUKI AAP NAHI RAHOGE NA HUG KATNE KE LIYE.WAISE BHI JAB AAP MISSION PE JATE MOBILE MUJHE DEKE JATE HO NA.

DEBU FELT EMOTIONAL :- THEEK MAIN GAUNGA LAKIN KAUN SA GANA GAU .

THEY STARTED THINKING .

SUDDENLY VIVAAN SAID ARE APKA FAVOURITE HAI NA LORI TYPE SONG HAI NA WOH GAO USE MAIN SO BHI JAYE KARUNGA  KAUN SAAAA SONG THA...UMM...UMM HE WAS THINKING .

DEBU:- KAUN SA SURBMAYI ANKHIYON MAIN WALA.

VIVAAN:- HAA .

DEBU:- TUJHE TOH WOH PASAND NAHI.

VIVAAN:- AP GAO GE TOH SAB ACHA LAGTA HAI CHALO JALDI GAOJALDI.

DEBU:- LAKIN TUM BHI GAO LAKIN SATH MAIN.

VIVAAN :- OK CHALO GAO AND HE STARTED THE RECORDING AND DEBU BROUGHT HIS GUITAR.

THEY BOTH STARTED SINGING.

Surmayee ankhiyon main

Nanha munna ek sapana de jaa re

Surmayee ankhiyon main

Nanha munna ek sapana de jaa re

Nindiya ke udate paakhi re

Ankhiyon maon aaja saathi re

Raa ree raa rum o raaree rum

Raa ree raa rum o raaree rum

FLASHBACK END

Surmayee ankhiyon main

Nanha munna ek sapana de jaa re

DEBU SMILED REMEMBERING THIS SONG AND FELT VIVAAN HAND CARSING HIS HAIR.

Sachcha koi sapanaa dejaa

Mujhako koi apanaa dejaa

Anajaana sa magar kuchh pehchaana sa

Halka phulka shabanami

Resham se bhi reshmi

Surmayee ankhiyon main

Nanha munna ek sapana de jaa re

Nindiya ke udate paakhi re

Ankhiyon maon aaja saathi re

HE SLOWLY  CLOSED HIS EYES AND LEANING ON THE ROCK .TEARS WERE PRESENT ON HIS FACE .

Raa ree raa rum o raaree rum

Raa ree raa rum o raaree rum

VIVAAN AND MOMENT CAME INFRONT OF HIS EYES.

AND PREPARE HIMSELF FOR NEXT DAY.

Raat ke rath par jaane vaale

Neend ka ras barsaane vaale

Itana kar de ki meri aankhen bhar de

Ankhon main basthaa rahe

Sapana ye hasthaa rahe

HE FELT VIVAAN NEAR HIM.

Surmayee ankhiyon main

Nanha munna ek sapana de jaa re

Nindiya ke udate paakhi re

Ankhiyon maon aaja saathi re

HE MUMBLE:- TUM MERE BINA JEE LIYE MAIN NAHI JEE PAUNGA.

YOU WERE AND ARE MY EVERYTHING.

Raa ree raa rum o raaree rum

Raa ree raa rum o raaree rum

Raa ree raa rum o raaree rum

Raa ree raa rum o raaree rum.

FLASHBACK END

OLD RAY IS SEEN SITTING IN THE SAME BALCONY WITH A BOY SITTING NEXT TO HIM.

BOY:- PAPA PHIR KYA HUA VIVAAN CHACHU KA DEATH KAISE HUA AUR WOH USE CLIFF PE KAISE PAUCHE.

RAY:- KUCH BATE SIRF UN DONO BHAIYON KE BECH HAI JO KOI NAHI JANTA .AUR KOI JANEGA BHI NAHI.

BOY:-PAR PAPA MAINE BAHUT SARE SACHE LOVE STORY SUNE HAI PAR BHAIYO KA SIRF PROPERTY KE LIYE JAGDHA SUNA HAI KYA SACH MAIN VIVAAN CHACHU AUR DEBU CHAHU AISE THE KYA?

RAY LOOKED AT HIM AND SMILED.

SCENE CHANGE TO A ROOM:

OLD DEBU LOOKING AT A PHOTO AND SAID :- I AM STILL WAITING VIVAAN. AND I KEPT MY PROMISE VIVAAN NOBODY TOOK YOUR PLACE EVER IN MY LIFE.

RAY POV

NOBODY WAS EVER ABLE TO TAKE VIVAAN'S PLACE IN DEBU'S LIFE HE IS STILL WAITING LIKE LAST 20 YEARS.

SHAYAD YAHI JEVAN  LOG CHALE JATE HAI PAR YADIEN RAHE JATI HAI .

LIFE GOES ON BUT HEART STOPS.

WE SAY THAT TIME HEALS.

BUT SOMETIME TIME IS ALSO HELPLESS.

ONE DAY MAYBE VVIVAAN AND DEBU MEET.

THAT DAY MY REGRET AND REPENT WILL BE OVER .

THE END~~~~

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