A Tale Told Where The Sun Sets
prologue
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hi evreyone. Im your cute author❤
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let's start our story😚
They say that it feels great to have a bestfriend
there's someone who would protect you
there's someone who would make you happy
but are you willing to risk the friendship
in exchange for the love that you've always dream of?
star smith (mc)
my name is star
star smith (mc)
Ever since grade school Jack has always been my clasmate
star smith (mc)
Our parents are good friend that's why where ever I am, jack's there as well
star smith (mc)
In good times and bad times
star smith (mc)
in spirited times and in times of trials
star smith (mc)
that's who he is
star smith (mc)
jack is my partner in life
star smith (mc)
but things change....
star smith (mc)
can i get back my loving and sweet bestfriend? or should I stay away from him and live my life to the fullest?
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introduction
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let's go for the introductions of our character's
Star Smith (mc)
Age; 17
Personality; cute, bubbly, innocent, cry baby
Likes; sweets, anything that he thinks cute, his family, and jack❤
Dislikes; ****, bully, bossy, etc.
Take note guys, his super cry baby and super sweet❤
Jack Anderson (ml)
Age; 22
Personality; cold (even to star...but he will gradually love star), super strict to our baby star, possessive, bad*ss
Likes; ofcourse star and nothing else😂
Dislikes; ****, gold digger, too much sweets, star getting hurt
Jack was a supper sweet bestfriend of star before, but growing up....things change. He became cold to anyone. Don't worry, as I said earlier...he will graually become soft and sweet to our baby star❤
diana anderson (mother of ml)
Diana Anderson (mother of our ml)
Age; 40
Personality; sweet to her husband victor and to our baby star, a caring mother
Likes; she always spoil ourbaby star
Dislikes; Same as her son
victor anderson (father of ml)
Victor Anderson (father of our ml)
Age; 46
Personality; strict to his son but a good father figure
Likes; his wife
Dislikes; same as his son. Like father like son😂
eva smith (mother of mc)
Eva Smith (mother of our mc)
Age; 40
Personality; caring mom to our baby star, and a good bestfriend of diana
Likes; our baby star and her husband
Dislikes; cheater and a *****
lorenz smit (father of mc)
Lorenz Smith (Father of our mc)
Age; 46
Personality; cold to anyone who approach his son, love his wife and our baby
Likes; his wife
Dislikes; gold digger, b*tch etc.
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chapter 1 [baby star]
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just to clarify some things....star is 4 and jack is 9 when they first met. Let's skip the baby part okey?
Eva and Lorenze Smith was a happy couple. They travel around the world and mostly they stay in abroad
Things change for them when Eva get pregnant with her first baby
They stay in New York for her pregnancy because ofcourse pregnant women can't travel. And because Eva has some complications during her pregnancy, Lorenz decided to stay in New York
Eva is super sensitive during her pregnancy and because it's her first time
eva smith (mother of mc)
Hey hon, do you think our baby will looks like me?
lorenz smit (father of mc)
ofcourse hon, our baby will be cute just like you *then hug her*
I forgot guys, this symbols represent;
*-things they do
()- thinking in their mind
× - whisper
eva smith (mother of mc)
I hope so😚
Eva was so happy because she is 8 months pregnant with her cute baby but unexpectedly,
eva smith (mother of mc)
hon I want some milk, can you get it for me? pretty please😙
lorenz smit (father of mc)
ofcourse my love. Just wait a minute. I'll get it for you
Then lorenz get up from his sit and walk to the kitchen to make a glass of milk for her lovely wife
he heard some shout from the sala
eva smith (mother of mc)
aggggggh!? *in pain
eva smith (mother of mc)
Lorrrennnnnnze!?
Then lorenz run as fast as he can to eva who was shouting in pain
lorenz smit (father of mc)
what's wrong my love!? *worried
eva smith (mother of mc)
I-i think the baby is c-coming!?
eva smith (mother of mc)
ahhhhh!?
lorenz smit (father of mc)
what!? but it's not your date yet!? how is that possible!? *worriedly asking his wife
eva smith (mother of mc)
idiot!? I don't know!? Just get the car already!?
aagggh!? *shouting in pain
lorenz smit (father of mc)
okey...just wait i'll get the car
then lorenz run as fast as he can to the garage and get his car
nurse
sir, you are not allowed to enter. Let's just wait for your wife here *then bow
Lorenz just sit in the waiting area and cry....
lorenz smit (father of mc)
please save my wife and my baby😟
after some hour's of waiting
doctor
who is the husband or the family of eva smith?
lorenz smit (father of mc)
I am doctor *stand up
lorenz smit (father of mc)
how's my wife and my baby?
doctor
Your wife is fine Mr Smith. But because your wife gave birth prematurely there is a possibility that it will have an effect on the baby
doctor
We will observe your baby first. But let's pray that it has no effect. We will first place your baby in the incubator for further inspection
lorenz smit (father of mc)
thank you doctor
doctor
We will move your wife to a private room and you can visit her now
lorenz smit (father of mc)
*nod
Eva was sleeping in her bed. And lorenz was siting silently for eva to wake up
eva smith (mother of mc)
hmmmm *waking up
lorenz smit (father of mc)
Eva!?
eva smith (mother of mc)
L-lorenz
lorenz smit (father of mc)
do you want something? water? doctor? are you in pain? *lorenz asked
eva smith (mother of mc)
t-the baby.....where's our baby!? *teary eyes
lorenz smit (father of mc)
calm down love. the baby is fine. you gave to our baby prematurely but their observing him right now
eva smith (mother of mc)
thank god *teary eyes
eva smith (mother of mc)
Eva sleep again because she was tired
doctor
Good morning Mr smith
lorenz smit (father of mc)
good morning doc. How is my son?
doctor
the problem is.....
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