My Adventure!
The Start
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Hi, this is my first chat story in English so- I'm not to perfect in it but I hope you enjoy it!
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Without wasting more time! Lets go to the story! ^^
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Ok Ok that's about it
(Maicol) <Yes, I had this theory! Not only me but my father too! What theory you may ask?... Well take like this. Here is a town, with normal things and stuff but there's this forest- And I myself had saw non-human things!>
<But no one believes me... No one believed me... But I'm here on my journey to prove them I'm right! But we're did I begin with my journey? Well...>
Maicol
*Opens His eyes* What?! Wha?!
[[Father||Gabriel]]
Oh Come on Champ
Maicol
Huh- *Sits down* Dad what are you do-?!
[[Father||Gabriel]]
*Chuckles*
Maicol
do-ing... What's so funny?- [😑]
[[Father||Gabriel]]
Nothing, Now come on... *Pats his shoulder* Get up, get dress... I'll wait for you outside *Smiles and leaves*
Maicol
*Watches him leave* ... Okay-
Maicol
[Already dressed] *Goes outside*
[[Father||Gabriel]]
[𝘗𝘪𝘱 𝘗𝘪𝘱 𝘗𝘪𝘱!!] Hope on Son!
Maicol
*Smiles slightly as he runs to the truck and gets in*
[[Father||Gabriel]]
Your a bit quiet Champ
Maicol
Um well... Is just- Mom always drives me to school and it's weird you- well driving me- You know- Because you work almost all day..
[[Father||Gabriel]]
*Sighs* I know son... But hey- We can have some fun today! And you know what?
[[Father||Gabriel]]
*Smirks*
[[Father||Gabriel]]
I got tickets for the futbol game! And for the new rollercoaster you waited
Maicol
[!!] Really?! *His eyes gets wider*
Maicol
I- I don't know what to say-Thank you Dad!
[[Father||Gabriel]]
No need to thanks Champ! All for you *Smiles warmly*
Maicol
Why hasn't he come-? He doesn't answer the phone either...
Kenneth
Just get In! *Frustrated*
Maicol
... *Gets in the car*
Maicol
*Opens the door* Dad! Dad! I'm here! Let's Go!
Maicol
Huh- Who are you peo-
Kenneth
*Touches his shoulder*... Maicol
Maicol
Where's Dad?.. *Without looking at him* Whe-Where is he?!
Kenneth
... *Looks down* He's... He's gone...
The Loss of madness
- - these are for actions
Kenneth
I'm sorry little guy... But Dad is... Gone
Maicol
Where.. -Trying to laugh it off-
Unknown prople
Poor kid.. -whispers-
Kenneth
What do you mean where. -Starting to lose patients(forgot how to spell the word, if it's wrong, mb, I'll change it later on)-
Kenneth
He's dead Mike. (nickname for him)
Maicol
You're... You're lying.
Kenneth
WHY WOULD I LIE?! -Angry and frustrated-
Kenneth
Ohhh! I just want to lie about father's dead to ruin your day?!
Maicol
Maybe.. Because you always do..
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Erm just so Yk, Ken kinda is of a bad brother, used to say a lot of stuff to ruin Mike's day as a lil kid
Kenneth
Just... Wow Maicol!-
Kenneth
Guess you never cared for father!
Maicol
I? Never cared for him?!
Maicol
Who waited for him to eat for dinner everytime at night but someone didn't let me!
Kenneth
Just Shut up you little twink -Whispers inside and approaches him-
Kenneth
You're just a kid!?
Maicol
I might be a kid!! -Cries- But at least I'm better than you! You never cared for him!! Or for me!?
Maicol
I HATE YOU! -Bites him and runs to his room-
[[Mother]]
-Grabs him from the ear- Stop it!-
[[Mother]]
Leave Mike alone!-
[[Mother]]
Don't you ever stop to think about his feelings at least once?-
Kenneth
-Gets away- I'm out. -Grabs his keys and goes outside-
[[Mother]]
... I'm sorry to all of you -talking to the unknown people-
Maicol
Father... -in pain-
Maicol
Why did you had to leave me here... -sniff-
Maicol
In this loss of madness...
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![[[Father||Gabriel]]](https://up-pic.mangatoon.mobi/contribute/fiction/7961916/avatar/46539938/1702854836896.jpeg-s200webp?sign=652de7c5f41fb1131ee3272d59162ff4&t=6a05bb43)
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