Hey guys this is my first novel criticism is welcome but please help me improve my writing skills.

Nancy looked at her next target. A handsome men who walking with small group of people and all of them speak luxury through there clothes. But she didn't get scared because She was a thief (a beautiful thief who stole many people's heart :)

She looked at group of people and select her target as one of the leading men and get into action but little did she know that this encounter gonna change her entire life.

Tony didn't even notice that he is a target of beauty. after all no one has guts to stole something from him. A men who reached hight of success.But nancy got good money from other party just for stole small pendrive from him. Getting into action nancy walked through crowd and hugged tony acting like long lost lover but on other hand tony blanked for a minute and coming back to his sense's he throughout look at his sectary.

Sectary looked at bodyguard and when bodyguard got signal he forced nancy to leave tony. Nancy acted like she got wrong person and apologized to tony and walked away. But that beautiful thief smiled and looked at pendrive in her hand.

In conference room everybody was in bad and also stunned. because its first time that someone Dare to stole from there devil boss but he didn't even noticed it. He ordered everyone to find that damn girl so he can teach her lesson for massing with him his assistant was on call from very long time because they can't find anything on that girl it's like She vanished into thin air but he know that if he didn't find her in time consequences will be bad so he ordered his subordinates to look into all city.

On the other hand Nancy was very happy because she got 10,000 for just small pendrive.

update will be depend on popularity so please don't hesitate to like my novel its just sample as 1st chapter i will try to update more chapters in future so stay tuned.