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Anatomy of a Criminal

Episode 1

The hospital smelled of disinfectant and sadness. That's what Dr. Mendez always said with exhausted laughter when we left the operating room after twelve straight hours. I usually laughed with him, but tonight I didn't feel like it. My fingers were trembling after having sutured for the fifth time so far that day, and the knot of tension in the back of my neck seemed to have decided to stay there and live.

It had been only three days since I received the news: I was no longer a resident. I was officially a staff surgeon. I had dreamed of it for years. Years of insomnia, of studying while others slept, of sacrificing dinners, relationships, birthdays, Christmases... all to get to this point. And yet, tonight all I wanted was a hot shower, a glass of wine, and to turn off my brain.

I took off my coat, put my stethoscope in my bag, and went down to the underground parking lot with slow steps. The echo of my heels on the concrete accompanied me, solitary. As soon as I put the key in the car lock, I felt the cold click of something metallic on the back of my neck.

"Don't scream," said a deep voice, as if someone had smoked all their life and still wanted their voice to sound calm and melodious.

I froze. I thought about running, screaming, and above all that I was going to die.

"Get in the car. Drive where we tell you. And don't do anything stupid."

Three men, all dressed in black. One got into the back seat. Another sat next to me. The third disappeared into the darkness of the parking lot.

I obeyed, started the car, and drove where they told me.

The city lights faded with each street. We crossed bridges, highways, and roads. When the cell phone signal died, I understood that they were taking me very far. I couldn't say how much time had passed since my nerves had taken over, but the landscape became increasingly rural, then wooded, until a black and elegant gate appeared in front of us. The gate opened without anyone touching it, as if they were waiting for us.

The mansion, a little further from the gates, stood like a postcard from a Victorian nightmare. It had the beauty of something old... and the chill of something dangerous.

They got me out without speaking. They escorted me through carpeted corridors, illuminated by dim lamps and old paintings that seemed to watch me. Finally, a double door opened in front of me.

I was greeted by a woman.

Tall, with skin like porcelain and lips as red as a crime. She wore a long, fitted dress, without a single wrinkle. Her hair was chestnut brown, straight, impeccable. And her presence filled the room as if she were queen of something I couldn't understand.

"Doctor Alejandra Rivas," she said with a firm and melodious voice. "What a pleasure to have you with us so soon."

I didn't answer. I couldn't. My mouth was a complete desert.

She smiled, as if she knew exactly what I was thinking.

"Relax. We're not going to hurt you here."

The men around me tensed, but didn't move.

"What... what is this? Who are you?"

She took a couple of steps towards me. Her perfume was expensive and enveloping, like jasmine on a toxic night.

"We heard that you are one of the most promising surgeons in the country. You won the national award for medical innovation in laparoscopic surgery six months ago. Your thesis was published in two international journals. And you saved the life of Senator Pranfor's son after a car accident."

"How do you know...?"

"We have eyes where we need to have them. And now... we need your hands."

The door behind her opened. Two men entered, carrying a stretcher. On it, an motionless body. Covered in blood. With several makeshift bandages and a metallic smell that made me recoil. The patient's face was covered, but I could see his bare torso, his tattoos... and the wounds.

"I present to you Mr. Reginald," said the woman with a certain nostalgia in her voice. "Our boss. Our king, my son, and your new patient."

"This is madness. Take him to the hospital, I'm not a private clinic, I..."

"There is no hospital that can receive him without everyone in the waiting room ending up dead, darling."

She clapped her hands and the men pushed me towards the stretcher.

"What we are going to tell you now must be very clear," the woman whispered, leaning close to me, so close that I felt the brush of her lips on my ear. "You are not leaving here until he is healed, and if he dies, you die with him. So don't even think about letting him die, understand?"

I swallowed.

I nodded.

Because the only thing stronger than my fear... was the oath I had made years ago in front of an auditorium full of doctors and relatives: To heal. Do no harm. Save lives.

Even that of a possible criminal.

Even if it meant risking mine.

"I'll need an operating room. Light. Instruments. Suture. Morphine. Antibiotics. And an anesthetist."

The woman applauded slowly, as if I had just done a magic trick.

"I knew that choosing you was the right thing to do."

Episode 2

My mother used to say that nothing good happens after midnight. If only I knew how true that was now.

As I followed the men down the mansion's endless hallway, I felt every beat of my heart as if it were hitting me in the ribs. My footsteps echoed on the polished marble floors, and the slight squeak of the wheels of the stretcher where the so-called Mr. Reginald lay felt like an alarm that only I could hear.

I didn't know what awaited me… but I would never have imagined this.

When the double doors at the end of the hallway opened, I thought I was hallucinating.

What I saw was an operating room. A real and complete operating room. High ceilings, sterilized walls, high-end articulated surgical lamps, perfectly arranged steel surgical instruments on metal trays, turned-on vital signs monitors, and a hydraulic stretcher prepared in the center. The air had that same penetrating antiseptic smell that one learns to love and hate during the residency years.

And yet, we were not in a hospital.

We were in a mansion. In the middle of nowhere. Surrounded by silence and threats.

I stopped dead in my tracks.

"How…?" I muttered, not really expecting an answer.

One of the men nodded for me to move forward.

I felt like an actress entering a stage where she didn't know her role, with a script that changed every second. But I moved forward.

They pointed me to a small dressing room on the side, with a surgical gown hanging and sterile gloves prepared on a metal tray. I locked myself in there for a few seconds longer than necessary, just so I could breathe. I leaned against the cold wall and tried to find in myself that version of myself that had earned every merit, every shift, every surgery. I had to show up. Because if I failed, I wasn't just going to lose a patient. I was going to lose my life.

I tied my hair back with trembling hands, then washed my arms, my fingers, my nails, with the automatic precision of someone who has done this a thousand times... but never under these conditions.

When I returned to the room, the stretcher was already ready, the patient uncovered from the chest down and three figures were waiting for me.

An anesthesiologist—tall, thin, young, with a tense expression—manipulated the tubes and controls of the respirator. Next to him, two nurses—a middle-aged woman with deep dark circles under her eyes, and a man with tattoos on his forearms who tried to hide his nervousness behind a false sense of security—prepared the trays with scalpels, the electrocautery, and sutures.

I greeted them with a nod.

"Good evening…" I said, and I could barely hear myself. "I'm Dr. Rivas."

They nodded, wordlessly.

The anesthesiologist was the only one who dared to speak.

"Gabriel."

"Clara," the nurse chimed in.

"Mateo," the other replied.

The three of them looked at me as if I were their only hope… and I could see in their eyes the same thing I felt in my gut: fear. Real, tangible fear, as heavy as lead.

This was not just an operation. This was a sentence suspended by a surgical thread.

Then, a voice interrupted the silence like a knife.

The door opened, and there again was the woman who had greeted me.

She took only one step closer, with her silhouette outlined by the dim light of the hallway behind her.

"Doctor," she said with a venomous calm. "That man on the table is my son, my only son."

Her voice had a hidden edge that chilled the skin.

"If he lives, we all live."

She paused.

"If he dies… there will be no door, tunnel, or prayer that saves you. Not you, nor those who are here."

She said this last and closed the door with a dry click.

No one spoke.

No one breathed for a few seconds.

The monitors beeped with their regular sounds. The patient, unconscious, had several bleeding wounds in the abdomen, one on the right thigh, and another, more worrying, just below the sternum, which was bleeding even more, not too much, but enough to worry me.

I took a deep breath once more and looked at the team.

"We're going to work fast and precise. Gabriel, I need you to keep the patient stable and adjust the ventilation to 14 per minute. Clara, pass me the scalpel and have the clamps ready. Mateo, I need you closer for suction."

They looked at me. They nodded.

For an instant, the fear dissolved into the familiarity of the surgical ritual.

"Scalpel," I asked, and Clara handed it to me without hesitation.

And there, under the white lights, with the pierced chest of a stranger in front of me and the life of everyone in my hands, I remembered that it didn't matter where I was, or who he was.

I was a surgeon.

And someone was going to live—or die—because of what I did in the next few minutes.

And although my legs trembled inside… my hands remained steady.

Episode 3

The scalpel tore through the skin as if it were wet silk.

The first incision was clean, firm. As I was taught. As I've done hundreds of times… though never like this. Never with such a literal threat looming over my back.

"He....They say he's the head of the English mafia," Mateo stated without stopping his sucking. "They're going to kill us all, even if we save him."

That would explain a lot. The man had multiple wounds. Two bullets were still lodged in his body. One of them had possibly compromised an artery.

"Active bleeding, I need more compresses," I said, with the exact tone between order and urgency.

Clara reacted effectively. Her movements were precise. She was trained. But it wasn't just training… there was something else in her. There was panic hidden behind every gesture she tried to control. I saw it in her trembling fingers when she handed me the forceps.

"Where did you learn to work like this?" I asked quietly, just to break the tension.

"St. James Hospital, London… years ago. Until…" She hesitated, "until they brought me here."

I didn't ask more. I couldn't. Not now.

"Mateo, hold the lamp for me, I need more light in this area," I said, pointing to the abdominal wound.

He moved quickly, but his eyes didn't leave the patient's face.

Gabriel, the anesthesiologist, kept his eyes fixed on the monitors.

"Pressure dropping. He's losing more blood than we calculated."

"I'm going to clip the artery. Hold it here."

Clara's hands lowered the retractor precisely. With my other hand, I inserted the hemostatic clamp. I felt the hot jet against my gloves just before tightening it. Blood splattered my forearm and for a second I froze watching the monitor.

"Pressure stabilizing," Gabriel announced.

I sighed. Not in relief. But to keep from screaming.

It was a damn choreography. A waltz between death and science. And every false step could be the last.

As I worked, I noticed something I didn't expect. The man's body… was full of scars. Not just bullet wounds. Old, poorly closed, some even with signs of having been treated without anesthesia or medical technique. Clean cuts in strange patterns. Old burns. A scar crossed from his eyebrow to his right eye, a long, straight line, under the collarbone.

"Has this man… been operated on before?" I asked, more to myself than to the others.

"We don't know," Mateo said, in a very low voice.

"How long have you been here? How do you not know? Shouldn't they have at least given you the medical history of this man?"

Gabriel turned to me, without releasing the respirator valve.

"Here, no questions are asked, Doctor. Only work is done."

That, more than anything else so far, gave me chills.

I concentrated again. I identified the bullet lodged near the small intestine. I cut carefully, freed the tissue, and extracted the projectile.

Clara handed me the holding clamp and Mateo cleaned the area as if he knew exactly what to do before I said it. He was certainly new to working in operating rooms, no doubt. I knew it from the way he looked at my movements, as if he didn't quite understand them, but recognized them.

I extracted the second bullet from the thigh, reconstructed the muscle tissue, sutured layer by layer. Time ceased to exist.

When I finally tied the last knot and removed the gloves, my arms were trembling as if they were made of paper.

I stepped away from the table. Clara cleaned the blood from the patient's abdomen and covered him with the sterile sheets. Gabriel turned off the machine and adjusted the serum. Mateo began to organize the instruments, in silence.

The room was silent, except for the constant beeping of the monitor.

Constant.

Rhythmic.

That meant he was still alive.

"Is he going to live?" Clara asked, as if her soul depended on my answer.

"For now, yes." I took off the mask. I took a deep breath. "But we'll know for sure in the next twelve hours. I need antibiotics, constant monitoring, absolute rest, and—"

The door opened with a dry thud.

The woman.

Still impeccable. As if the night and part of the morning we had been here hadn't affected her at all. Neither fear. Nor blood.

"Well?" she asked from the entrance.

"He's alive. But he needs care. It's not just a matter of taking out the bullets. He has internal damage. He needs—"

"Will he live?"

"Yes. If there are no complications."

She nodded. A smile barely curved her lips, but it didn't reach her eyes.

"Good."

She walked to the stretcher. She leaned over and placed her fingers on the forehead of the unconscious man.

For the first time, I saw in her something more than control and threat.

I saw love.

Fierce, brutal, and savage love.

Of a mother.

Then, she turned to me.

"Now, Doctor Rivas…" she said in a soft voice, "you have done your part."

She paused.

"But this is not over."

And she left again, leaving the door open this time.

As if to imply that I had crossed a threshold and there was no turning back.

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