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The Devil and Me

broken promise

(When Louis was young) in their house
Ophelia
Ophelia
Louis don’t go to that dark house over there ok?
Louis
Louis
Ok…. But what if I can make a friend there?
Ophelia
Ophelia
No means no Louis *says frowning*
Louis
Louis
*looks down sadly* ok mom I won’t go
Present time *Louis is talking to his friends
Max
Max
Hey let’s go to the creepy house it’ll be fun
Louis
Louis
*looks at max* max you know I’m not allowed there……
Max
Max
Come on still listening to your mom grow up man
Louis
Louis
Why do you want to go there anyway?
Chris
Chris
There have been stories that the house is haunted that’s why
Louis
Louis
Seriously max *looks at him with furrowed eyebrows*
Max
Max
Oh come on don’t be a chicken it’s not like the stories are real *says jokingly*
Francise
Francise
Yeah I’ll come too
Nancy
Nancy
Me too
Chris
Chris
Come on the girls are also coming……….or are you saying your weaker than the girls?
Louis
Louis
Fine fine let’s meet at max’s house
Everyone says ok
.
..

Louis!

Ann
Ann
Hey max! We’re here,open the door! *calls out*
Max
Max
Ok ok coming!
(At maxs house)Opens the door
Max
Max
Great let’s get going
Near the dark house
Ann
Ann
Hey….this feels….. weird
Chris
Chris
how to open the door *says looking at the door*
Max
Max
Don’t worry I have a key
Max
Max
*unlocks the door* Louis~ you first
Louis
Louis
Why me!?! *says looking surprised*
Max
Max
*smirks*You were the only one who hesitated that’s why
Louis
Louis
F-fine *walks in*
*Door closes by itself*
Louis
Louis
HEY this isn’t funny *calls out scared*
Ann
Ann
W-we didn’t do anything we’re trying to open the door! *calls out*
Ann
Ann
Louis?!?
The door opens
Ann
Ann
Louis!
Ann
Ann
?
No one’s inside…
Nancy
Nancy
Max where is Louis *asks scared*
Max
Max
I-I
Max
Max
I don’t know *scared
Max
Max
I don’t know *scared
Chris
Chris
Let’s go to their house and tell his parents
Francise
Francise
Yeah!
Ann
Ann
*looks down*Oh Louis what happened to you?
Max
Max
L-let’s go
Starts walking to Louis’s house

the meeting of noah

At Louis’s house
Ophelia
Ophelia
You did what!?!
Ophelia
Ophelia
Max! Don’t you know that he’s not allowed there!?
Max
Max
I’m sorry but we just wanted to explore
Max
Max
But he’s not there now
Nolan
Nolan
Oh god
Nolan
Nolan
*walks inside*
Nolan
Nolan
it happened again?
Ann
Ann
Again? Wait this has happened before?
Ophelia
Ophelia
Yes Ann
Ophelia
Ophelia
You all were lucky but my poor Louis *falls to the ground and starts crying*
Meanwhile…..
Louis gets transported in another dimension
Louis
Louis
*holds his head* oww w-what where am I?
Noah
Noah
Ohh~look who I found
Louis
Louis
W-who are you
Noah
Noah
Noah nice to meet you?…
Louis
Louis
Louis
Noah
Noah
Ah Louis
???
???
Hey what’s taking you two so long get the prey!
Louis
Louis
P-prey?!
Noah
Noah
I’m sorry Louis
Louis suddenly falls on the ground unconscious
???
???
*standing behind Louis holding a rod* heh got him
Noah
Noah
.
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Author
Author
Hey I’m sorry that there are no pictures 😅
Author
Author
I just don’t know how to get the pictures so can some authors please tell me how to?
Author
Author
Anyway hope you enjoy this
Author
Author
Comment please
Author
Author
And thank you Eva Castillo
Author
Author
For being the first one to read my book
Author
Author
Btw Felix and Louis are the main characters

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