The Devil and Me
broken promise
(When Louis was young) in their house
Ophelia
Louis don’t go to that dark house over there ok?
Louis
Ok…. But what if I can make a friend there?
Ophelia
No means no Louis *says frowning*
Louis
*looks down sadly* ok mom I won’t go
Present time *Louis is talking to his friends
Max
Hey let’s go to the creepy house it’ll be fun
Louis
*looks at max* max you know I’m not allowed there……
Max
Come on still listening to your mom grow up man
Louis
Why do you want to go there anyway?
Chris
There have been stories that the house is haunted that’s why
Louis
Seriously max *looks at him with furrowed eyebrows*
Max
Oh come on don’t be a chicken it’s not like the stories are real *says jokingly*
Francise
Yeah I’ll come too
Chris
Come on the girls are also coming……….or are you saying your weaker than the girls?
Louis
Fine fine let’s meet at max’s house
Louis!
Ann
Hey max! We’re here,open the door! *calls out*
(At maxs house)Opens the door
Ann
Hey….this feels….. weird
Chris
how to open the door *says looking at the door*
Max
Don’t worry I have a key
Max
*unlocks the door* Louis~ you first
Louis
Why me!?! *says looking surprised*
Max
*smirks*You were the only one who hesitated that’s why
Louis
HEY this isn’t funny *calls out scared*
Ann
W-we didn’t do anything we’re trying to open the door! *calls out*
Nancy
Max where is Louis *asks scared*
Chris
Let’s go to their house and tell his parents
Ann
*looks down*Oh Louis what happened to you?
Starts walking to Louis’s house
the meeting of noah
Ophelia
Max! Don’t you know that he’s not allowed there!?
Max
I’m sorry but we just wanted to explore
Max
But he’s not there now
Ann
Again? Wait this has happened before?
Ophelia
You all were lucky but my poor Louis *falls to the ground and starts crying*
Louis gets transported in another dimension
Louis
*holds his head* oww w-what where am I?
Noah
Noah nice to meet you?…
???
Hey what’s taking you two so long get the prey!
Louis suddenly falls on the ground unconscious
???
*standing behind Louis holding a rod* heh got him
Author
Hey I’m sorry that there are no pictures 😅
Author
I just don’t know how to get the pictures so can some authors please tell me how to?
Author
Anyway hope you enjoy this
Author
And thank you Eva Castillo
Author
For being the first one to read my book
Author
Btw Felix and Louis are the main characters
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