Dusk Rewritten: Born to Bleed
Ep:1 The last breath
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
NOTE:
[...]IN MIND
(...) EXPRESSION/FEELINGS
*...*ACTIONS
Somewhere in a dark room.. Present a boy..weak, vulnerable..chained..
It was cold.
Not the kind that brushed against skin…
but the kind that lived in the air itself.
Sterile. Metallic.
The sharp scent of antiseptic burned faintly in his nose—
mixed with something heavier… something iron-like.
Blood.
Dim white lights flickered overhead, casting uneven shadows across the room.
Metal restraints dug into his wrists—cold, unyielding.
Somewhere beside him, a machine hummed steadily…
…and with every pulse—
something was being taken
[UNKNOWN SYSTEM LOG – ACTIVE]
Unknown 1
Increase the extraction..
The hum deepened.
A sharp sting spread through his veins—
like something was being pulled out of him… too fast.
guards
He won't survive this..
Unknown 1
He doesn't need to.
The words didn’t make sense.
But the pain did.
unknown 2
Ahh.. It hurts.!!
His voice barely rose above the mechanical noise.
Even speaking felt heavy.
unknown 2
I… I can’t feel my hands…
[System: Vital levels unstable.]
A monitor beside him flickered—numbers dropping too fast to follow.
The door at the far end creaked open.
Footsteps echoed—slow, deliberate.
And a silhouette came in to the view..
Unknown 1
Brother Ray… You’re still conscious?
Relief flooded in his heart… weak, but real.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Rennn...
You came…
I knew you would…
(weakly)
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
[If he was here, then everything would be fine.
It always was.]
The overhead light flickered again—
And for a second, his brother’s shadow stretched across the floor… distorted.
A thin tube ran from his arm—dark red flowing steadily through it…
Too steadily
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Ren.. Please take me from here.. I can't feel my hands anymore.. It hurts.. Its awful..
(in pain)
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
You really don’t understand anything..
Something cold settled in his chest.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
What..?
unknown 3
We don’t have time. Finish it.
Another set of footsteps.
Closer.
Familiar.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
You..!!!
She Hulk (Author)
Sorry guyssss
She Hulk (Author)
I know it's been long..
She Hulk (Author)
I disappeared
She Hulk (Author)
but now I'm back..
She Hulk (Author)
I hope you guys can support me.. And my work
She Hulk (Author)
And I hope you.guys like this..
Ep:2 Betrayal
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
calix..
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
You’re here too…?
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Did… did they catch you as well…?
The room felt smaller suddenly.
The walls too close.
Calix Heller (Mc's Ex) [DA]
...
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
He was never caught.
A drop in the machine’s rhythm.
Like something skipped.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Huh..? I..I..don’t… understand…
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
It's.. Brother.. It's time.. You get know the truth..!!
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Truth..?
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
You think..you were kidnapped..? And we are here to save you..?
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
(confused)
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
This place…This “kidnapping”…
It was all PLANNED
The words echoed louder than the machines…
Soft, almost calm—yet heavier than the mechanical noise around him,
sinking in slowly… until they shattered something inside him.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
That’s not… funny…
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
Hahaha.. Quite naive.. Aren't you..!!?
We are not joking brother..
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
Right baby..?
*looks at calix*
Calix Heller (Mc's Ex) [DA]
Yess babyy...
*puts his hand around varen's waist..*
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
(suprised)
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Baby..?
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
Yes...!!
*pecks on calix's lips*
(smiles)
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
(processing the things happening around him)
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
I..i .. why..?
(sadly)
*in broken voice*
Pain filled his throat—thick, suffocating, impossible to swallow.
But worse than the pain was the realization forming too slowly inside him.
Calix Heller (Mc's Ex) [DA]
Because you were useful
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*looks up at him weakly with tears in his eyes*
The tube tightened slightly—
or maybe it just felt that way.
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
you really thought.. someone like you would be anything else than a tool to use.?
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Bu..but.. We were family..
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
(laughs)
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
Family.. You say..?
Something inside him… broke quietly.
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
We were never a family.. How can someone like you can be our family..
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
(teary eyes)
Calix Heller (Mc's Ex) [DA]
You were too stupid.. But that's why you were easy to use..
(smiles)
Something inside him… broke quietly.
System: Heart rate critical.
The machine’s beeping became uneven.
Sharp. Urgent.
The hurt grew beyond what his body could process.
Even the sharp sting of the machines faded into the background.
As if his body had given up registering pain altogether.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
The...then…what about the wedding…?
Calix Heller (Mc's Ex) [DA]
A formality
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
For.. formality..? For..?
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
(glup the pain away)
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*looking at them- hurt, broken*
Calix Heller (Mc's Ex) [DA]
To control you.. easier..?
The engagement ring on his finger suddenly felt heavier.
Too heavy.
As if it had been waiting quietly all this time… holding something back.
And then—
the memories broke.
They didn’t return gently.
They crashed.
Laughter that now sounded wrong.
Hands that felt colder in memory than they ever had in reality.
Promises that twisted in on themselves like lies that had been alive all along.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*brush his finger on the ring*
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
You were never part of this family...
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
You were just here for a purpose.. And now.. it's over... so it's time for you to go.. brother..
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Th-then.. Who I am..?
someone
Extraction complete.
[System: Vital levels collapsing.]
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
I… can’t… breathe…
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
(in pain)
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*cluched his hand on his chest*
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
You could’ve… just told me…
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
I Would’ve… still helped you…
And that… was the cruelest truth of all.
[System: Cardiac failure imminent]
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Was there… even once…?
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
(weakly)
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*looks at calix with hurt in his eyes*
Calix Heller (Mc's Ex) [DA]
*looks at him*
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
We don't have time.. let's finish it.. our wedding will start soon..!
*grabbing calix's arm*
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
Let's goo..
Varen Ashford (Mc's brother )[O]
*left along with calix*
the faint hum of dying machines remained
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*broke into tears*
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
So this is the end..?
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
that's how I'm going to die..?
So that was it.
Not betrayal.
Not misunderstanding.
Not mistake.
Just… usage.
The machines kept beeping.
Faster now.
More urgent.
But even their sound felt distant.
Like it belonged to someone else.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
I..i..
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*breathing heavily*
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
I’m … tired…
Machines beeped frantically
The engagement ring slipped slightly on his finger as his hand trembled.
He stared at it.
Not with sadness anymore.
Not with denial.
Just understanding.
Cold. Empty. Absolute.
The room blurred.
The lights above him stretched into pale lines of white.
The voices faded into something meaningless.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*close his eyes*
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
[I wish.. If i had a second chance.. I would pay them back.. And find my family..]
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
[who..?]
The sound reached him like it belonged to another world.
A world he was no longer part of.
His vision dimmed.
The machines faded.
The pain… finally stopped existing.
And in the last breath he didn’t fully take—
he understood something too late to matter.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*breathing stopped*
He was never family.
He was never chosen.
He was only used.
Ep:3 Lunar echoes
There was nothing.
No pain.
No light.
No sound.
Just an endless darkness that seemed to stretch beyond thought itself.
And yet—
he was still aware.
Why…?
The question drifted through the emptiness weakly.
Broken.
Just like him.
He remembered dying.
He remembered the cold metal restraints digging into his skin.
The machines.
The voices.
The betrayal.
Family.
The word alone made something ache violently inside him.
A sharp pain rose in his throat again.
Not physical.
Something worse.
Why did it hurt this much?
They had used him.
Lied to him.
Destroyed him.
So why—
why was a part of him still searching for warmth in those memories?
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
[I felt the pain.. It was real.. I remember dying..but I still hope it was all just a bad dream..]
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
[ why do I still hope that... It was just a nightmare.. and I'm still there with them.. ]
someone
Because you loved them..
His breathing faltered.
Or perhaps he only imagined breathing now.
A pale silver glow slowly appeared in the distance.
Soft.
Gentle.
Nothing like the harsh white lights of that room.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*look around*
Warmth.
That was the first thing he noticed.
Not pain. Not the suffocating cold of death he remembered moments ago—only warmth wrapping around him like a quiet embrace.
Slowly, he opened his eyes.
The room around him was unfamiliar. Soft golden light flickered nearby, casting shadows across wooden walls while silence pressed heavily in the air. It looked real enough… yet something felt off.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
[ where am I..?.. This doesn't feel like hell.?? Am i in heaven..?]
The walls faded into silver mist, the floor beneath him turning into a dark glass-like surface reflecting endless stars above. There was no sky. No earth. Just an endless space suspended between light and darkness.
Confusion crashed into him.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
(confused)
Then a presence appeared before him.
A woman cloaked in pale silver stood quietly in the distance, moonlight bending around her form.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
(mesmerized)
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Who… are you…?
someone
I'm someone who created you with love.. But they choose to break you rather than cherishing you...
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Huh.??
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
[is she..?she does look like what they described...]
*looks at her like inspecting*
someone
Yes..you are right..!! I am-
Moon goddess ✨
The moon goddess..
Moon goddess ✨
*says while patting her pet*
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
(surprised)
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*glance at the creature*
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
[A rabbit.]
Its snow-white fur shimmered like fresh moonlight poured over silk, glowing faintly against the endless dark. Delicate feathered wings rested along its back, moving slightly with every calm breath it took. Tiny glowing petals drifted around the creature as though the air itself worshiped its presence.
It looked impossibly pure.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*brushing of the thoughts about the creature..he asked*
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Where am I..?
[Am I dead..?
Am I in hell..?
No..this doesn't look like hell..!
Am I in heaven..?
Nah..i probably can't be that lucky..!!]
Yutu [moon rabbit]🐇
Are u sure he is the one..?
*says to moon goodess*
Moon goddess ✨
Yes.. Ik he is a bit.. Um.. But I'm sure.. He is the one..
I created him.. How can I forget..!!
*to yutu*
Moon goddess ✨
“You are neither alive nor dead right now,” she said softly. “This realm exists between both… a place I created to speak with you before fate takes its course.”
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
so..why am I here..??
A long silence followed.
Not cold.
Not empty.
Patient.
Moon goddess ✨
Because your story was never meant to end like this..
The words shook him more than they should have.
Not meant to end?
What else could it have been?
Everything he had ever known was false.
His family.
His engagement.
His life.
Even now, the memories clung to him painfully.
His brother smiling softly while adjusting his blanket.
His fiancé placing the engagement ring onto his finger.
Warm hands.
Gentle voices.
False love wrapped so perfectly that he had never questioned it.
And somehow—
that hurt more than dying.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
What more.? Wasn't all that enough..?
The question came out smaller than he intended.
Almost childlike.
The moonlight flickered softly around him.
Not cold.
Not pitying.
Just… quiet.
Moon goddess ✨
You speak as though your suffering was all your life was meant for.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Wasn't it..?
The darkness around him trembled faintly.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
I gave them everything. ..
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
My blood.
My trust.
Myself.
His voice slowly cracked apart with every word.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
Even when it hurt..
And that was the cruelest part.
Not the betrayal.
Not the death.
But the fact that if they had asked again—
he might have still given them everything.
The realization made him feel sick.
Rayden Ashford (MC) [O]
*staring above with blank eyes*
She Hulk (Author)
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