When the Creatures Come for Her
Her birthday
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.In a quiet town surrounded by old stone walls and busy markets, lived a girl named Éloise Durand. Her parents worked at the royal palace and came home only once or twice a year—just
Enough to remind her that she existed, yet never enough to make her feel loved.
To them, Éloise was nothing more than a small mistake they had been forced to keep.
Now twenty-two, Éloise spent her life alone in a small house at the edge of town. But today was her birthday, and for the first time in years, her parents had come home. That alone was enough to make her heart feel lighter.
She walked down the crowded street with her friend Camille Moreau, weaving through vendors and colorful stalls. The smell of roasted bread, flowers, and spices filled the air.
camille (fl bf)
What are you wearing this evening?
Camille asked, nudging her shoulder.
Éloise looked down at her simple dress
Eloise (fl)
I don’t know… maybe I’ll just wear this.
Camille stopped her right in the middle of the street, grabbed her hands, and stared into her eyes.
camille (fl bf)
Éloise, you are not wearing this.
camille (fl bf)
You can wear one of my dresses,
camille (fl bf)
I know you won’t buy a new one,
camille (fl bf)
So this time try mine
She smiled warmly and tugged Éloise forward.
Eloise (fl)
I don’t need any of your dresses
Eloise (fl)
My parents are here for my birthday…
Eloise (fl)
That’s all I want today.
Camille muttered, rolling her eyes.
camille (fl bf)
Do you know your parents don’t even like you?
camille (fl bf)
And you still love them so much.
Eloise (fl)
Can we not talk about this today?
Éloise whispered as she opened the door to her house.
She turned back and hugged Camille.
Eloise (fl)
Everything is okay.
camille (fl bf)
If you say so
Inside, her parents were decorating the small table, hanging a few paper ribbons behind where the cake would be placed. When her father noticed her, he gave her a rare smile.
Eloise's father
Let’s cut the cake.
She pulled Camille along with her.
Night fell quickly. They cut the cake, shared a few awkward laughs, and celebrated as if they were a normal family. But Éloise saw the wine bottle emptying fast. She noticed the way her parents’ eyes grew hazy, the way their smiles turned loose.
Eloise (fl)
You should go home now
camille (fl bf)
Yeah… it’s getting late
Camille nodded. They walked to the door together, shared a quick hug, and Camille left.
When Éloise returned to the table, she heard her parents talking. She paused, hidden in the shadow near the doorway.
Her mother stood up from her chair and sat on her father’s lap, her hands resting around his neck.
Eloise's mom
We should hurry
Eloise's mom
The girl is getting older.
Her father kissed her mother’s neck.
Eloise's father
The buyer will come tomorrow.
Eloise's father
He’ll take her away.
Eloise's father
Then we can live happily.
He said and her mother was opening her father's pants zip and She lifts up her dress while sitting on his lap, and her dad looks at her mom with a smile. and her mom sits on his legnth pushing it inside her, and both moans
Her father kissed her mother on lips deep lingering both helding eachother and she trembles then both pulls back,
Her mother’s voice came out breathless
Eloise's mom
Yes… after she’s gone.
Eloise's father
Let’s continue this in our room
They stood, still kissing, and disappeared down the hallway.
Éloise had heard every word.
And she was not shocked. Not even surprised.
Silently, she gathered the plates and cleaned the table. She had lived with their cruelty her whole life—this was simply another page of the same story.
Just as she stepped into her room, a loud sound echoed through the house.
Eloise's mom
Honey don't push it hard
Eloise's father
Yeah but only for today, we have to go back tomorrow
Eloise's father
So let me do this
He pin her on bed tigthly and and he spread her legs, both looks at eachother and he leaned in pushing his length more inside both moaning but not satisfied as there body pressed together her father leaned in to kiss her mother's body, both can't even move at all cause they were stuck at one place because his length was inside her hole,
Eloise's father
I'm not satisfied hold me tight
She hold his neck and he push himself, he was on top of her body, moving twitchily, and fixing himself tightly inside her.
Eloise's mom
After she is gone
Eloise's mom
we can do this daily and as much as you want
Eloise's mom
It feels good
He smirked and held her tigthly shaking his body on her up and down and leaned in to kiss on her lower body
Éloise pressed her hand to her forehead and sighed
Eloise (fl)
Can these people not stop?
Eloise (fl)
What will the neighbors think…?
Without another glance, she entered her room and closed the door.
Morning arrived quietly, with soft sunlight slipping through the thin curtains of Éloise’s small home. Her parents had already left for the palace, rushing out without a word—as if last night’s conversation had never happened.
Éloise sighed and stepped into her daily routine.
Behind her house grew a cluster of rare plants and healing flowers. Humming softly, she walked through the small garden, plucking a few leaves and blossoms with gentle fingers. She carried them inside and arranged them on her wooden table.
As she crushed the herbs into powder, her thoughts darkened.
Eloise (fl)
If someone comes to take me today…
Eloise (fl)
What will I do?
Eloise (fl)
I want a life surrounded by nature,
Eloise (fl)
Full of freedom.
Eloise (fl)
I Can’t go anywhere with anyone.
She paused, staring at the mixture in her bowl, then exhaled slowly and returned to work. By the time the sky turned a soft orange, her medicines were ready. She wrapped each small pouch carefully and placed them in a cloth bag.
Eloise (fl)
Let’s go, Éloise
She whispered to herself.
She locked her door and stepped out, humming a tune as she walked. Her smile was bright enough to lift the mood of the entire street.
She waved at an old man selling flowers.
He waved back with a warm grin.
Éloise talked to several townspeople, cheerful as always, before reaching her first customer’s house. She handed over the medicine with a polite bow.
Eloise (fl)
If you ever need anything else,
She said, then walked away toward the next house.
Éloise called, waving her hand energetically.
camille (fl bf)
Where are you going?
Eloise (fl)
Delivering medicines,
She linked arms with Éloise, and they continued the deliveries together, chatting nonstop.
After a while, Éloise’s smile faded a little.
Eloise (fl)
My parents said someone will come to take me away.
Eloise (fl)
They sold me to someone.
Eloise (fl)
What should I do?
Camille stopped walking, stunned.
camille (fl bf)
Éloise… what?
camille (fl bf)
You can come to my house,
camille (fl bf)
I Won’t let anyone touch you.
camille (fl bf)
Then what are you going to do?
Camille asked, genuinely frightened.
Eloise left her house
Éloise took a deep breath.
camille (fl bf)
I’ll think of something.
camille (fl bf)
Sit down first
Camille said, dragging her toward a bench on the side of the road.
They sat. Camille held Éloise’s hands tightly.
camille (fl bf)
So? Tell me.
Eloise (fl)
I’m leaving for another city
Eloise (fl)
They have better herbs there.
Eloise (fl)
I Can work in a store, sell my medicines
Eloise (fl)
I want to live freely, Cami. That’s the only way.
Eloise (fl)
I’ll come meet you sometimes.
camille (fl bf)
I can’t stop you…
camille (fl bf)
And I think it’s best for you.
Eloise (fl)
I’m going tonight
Eloise (fl)
So no one notices.
Eloise (fl)
I’ll be far away.
camille (fl bf)
But be careful.
camille (fl bf)
There are magical creatures outside the town.
camille (fl bf)
Do you have enough money to survive alone for a few days?
Eloise (fl)
You’re the best,
Eloise (fl)
I’ll miss you so much.
camille (fl bf)
I’ll miss you too.
camille (fl bf)
And whenever you need help
camille (fl bf)
Just think about me,
Eloise (fl)
A magical creature?
Eloise (fl)
Will you run to me if I think about you?”
Camille didn’t answer—just smiled.
Eloise (fl)
Okay then… I’ll think about you
Éloise said, laughing again.
Éloise waved, running backward as she headed home.
Camille called after her.
For generations, magical creatures—half human, half animal—had been hunted by humans. They could shift into full human or full animal forms, and their magic made them feared across every kingdom.
Whenever a creature was discovered inside a town, the humans burned it alive.
The war between them had lasted for years, and no one knew when—or if—it would ever
Éloise walked back toward her home, clutching her bag of medicines close to her chest. On the way, she noticed a small crowd gathered at the corner of the road—people whispering loudly, arguing about something.
She took a few steps closer, then sighed.
Eloise (fl)
Maybe they’re just talking as usual…
She murmured and turned away.
She unlocked her door and stepped inside.
Eloise (fl)
I should take only a few things with me.
Eloise (fl)
This house… isn’t mine anymore anyway
Éloise whispered, tears filling her eyes.
She quickly packed her clothes into one small bag. In the kitchen, she searched for food but found almost nothing.
Eloise (fl)
Great… they probably took everything with them
She muttered, holding a packet of stale biscuits.
She packed whatever was left—biscuits, bread crumbs, and a little fruit.
One bag for clothes, one bag for food.
Eloise (fl)
It’s time to leave,
She stepped outside, looked around—no one was there.
She locked the door and hid the key in the same secret place she used since childhood. Her parents would find it eventually.
Then she slipped quietly down the dark road.
She walked for a long time. The sky darkened, the forest thickened, and eerie noises echoed through the trees. She held her lamp tightly, fear creeping into her steps.
Eloise (fl)
I need a place to rest…
A small bar appeared near the edge of the woods. The lantern lights flickered warmly, so she walked inside.
The place was crowded—people entering and leaving constantly.
Eloise (fl)
Strange… there was no one on the road a moment ago.
People stared at her as she stepped in.
Éloise felt her cheeks warm in embarrassment.
She said softly with a polite smile.
A girl approached her immediately
Isabe
Come here, sit with me
Éloise followed her and sat on a stool near the counter.
Eloise (fl)
My name is Éloise.
Isabe
I’m Isabe. This bar belongs to me and my husband,
Isabe
Sit here, I’ll get you something to drink.
A handsome guy kissed me
Then her eyes fell on a boy performing magic at the center of the room.
Everyone seemed charmed by his tricks and his smooth words.
Éloise smiled to herself.
Eloise (fl)
He’s… pretty handsome
The boy looked at her immediately—like he had heard her thoughts.
He jumped off the table and walked straight toward her.
lucien (ml)
Did you just fall in love with me,
He said dramatically, bowing.
Éloise burst into laughter.
Eloise (fl)
I Don’t randomly fall for strangers.
lucien (ml)
Do you even have a heart
lucien (ml)
Miss Stranger?
Eloise (fl)
I do. Just not for you—or anyone else.
lucien (ml)
What’s your name?
He sat beside her, very close.
lucien (ml)
Well… I’m Lucien.
He held her hand to kiss it, but she pulled it away quickly.
lucien (ml)
You’re not like others.
lucien (ml)
Do you know that?
Eloise (fl)
What’s special about me?
Eloise (fl)
Why did you say that suddenly?
lucien (ml)
I just… felt it.
lucien (ml)
I can tell by your face—you’re meant for something big.
Eloise (fl)
Can you tell me more?
He said with a mysterious wink.
But before she could speak again—
Two men stormed inside, shouting.
We heard there’s a magical creature here! Is it true?
The bar went silent instantly.
The men were armed—guns pointed straight at the crowd.
Lucien grabbed her wrist.
lucien (ml)
Stay behind me
The men yelled again, threatening to kill everyone. People screamed and scattered. Chairs fell, glasses shattered.
Lucien pulled Éloise along.
She grabbed her bags and followed him through the chaos.
They reached a back door—but it was stuck.
They stood so close Éloise could hear Lucien’s heartbeat.
Their faces were inches apart.
lucien (ml)
You’re pretty gorgeous
Lucien smirked, slid an arm around her waist—
Éloise’s mind went blank.
She kissed him back, her hands gripping his shirt.
They forgot the danger, forgot the shouting behind them.
The door suddenly creaked open—
And both of them fell out onto the ground.
lucien (ml)
You taste good
He leaned down, kissed her one last time
And by the time she looked up…
Eloise (fl)
Where is lucien
Éloise grabbed her bags and ran.
The forest shook with distant noises—heavy footsteps, wings flapping, animal roars.
A group of creatures ran past her—half horse, half human.
Eloise (fl)
A magical creature…?
A horse with a human’s upper body galloped past her.
She turned and ran toward her town.
She tripped, fell, her bags rolling ahead.
She picked them up and kept running.
Up ahead, flames burned bright—humans were fighting creatures.
One creature was thrown into the fire.
Eloise (fl)
They’re attacking…
Éloise whispered, horrified.
When she finally reached the town, chaos had already begun.
Creatures had captured some humans, tying them up.
Éloise hid behind a wall—
But someone grabbed her from behind.
Eloise (fl)
Ah—! Let me go
They dragged her forward and forced her to sit with the others.
Eloise (fl)
Hey! Leave me!
Her escape had turned into a nightmare.
A deep voice roared from the shadows as magical creatures surrounded the area.
Humans screamed in panic, lines of fear running through the crowd.
Eloise stepped forward, shaking but brave.
Eloise (fl)
Let us go! We didn’t burn anyone—go find the one who did
A creature with glowing eyes glared at her.
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