"A Quiet Devotion"
EPISODE~1 (ashamed about clothes)
someone
*leans over the pickup counter* Ic still making the best coffee in the city
Ollie (O)
*stops pouring milk n look at her*
Mie (O)
Hello Ollie *smile* 😊
Mie (O)
Long time no see 😊
Ollie (O)
mieee!! It's been months!! *smile *
Ollie (O)
So how have you been? *excited to see her *
Mie (O)
fine!! fine!! What about u? 😊
Ollie (O)
I'm absolutely fine ☺️
customer:Excuse me, sorry to interrupt. Is the order ready yet?"
Ollie (O)
Oh yes! Just finishing it up right now sorry about the wait 👀
Ollie (O)
sorry mie wait a minute 🤧
Mie (O)
Till then I will meet my uncle 😊
Mie (O)
Is your work finished? 😊I have something to say!!
Ollie (O)
my work is almost finished u say 👀
Mie (O)
I’m throwing a massive party tonight and you have to come 😊
Ollie (O)
Um- Tonight? I don’t know I close late and- *cuts by her*
Mie (O)
Please!! Just for me It won't be any fun without my favorite person there. I'll pick you up at nine *puppy eyes*
Ollie (O)
Um 🤧 okay okay I'll be ready at 9
Mie (O)
I'm hereee!!! *looking at him*
Ollie (O)
Ohh hey mie🤧 Am I looking good?
Mie (O)
Yeahh cute as always (。•̀ᴗ-)✧
Mie (O)
guys meet ollie about which I had told 😊
Ray(B)
So this is the guy you were so desperate to bring tonight? *looking him up n down*
Ollie (O)
Uh-hi 😅*nervous*
maya (O)
*rolls her eyes* 🙄 why does he dress like a grandpa?
Ray(B)
Right? I mean who wears a faded, oversized thrift-store sweater to a VIP lounge? *said rudely*
Ollie (O)
Uh- I- I didn't have time to go home so I changed at the cafe after closed *pulling the sleeve of his shirt nervously*
Ray(B)
🙄 u should just stay home You’re ruining the aesthetic of our VIP table People are literally staring at us *smirk*
maya (O)
Ikr 😂 Mie seriously how do you even know someone like him? *laugh*
Ollie (O)
* Feeling ashamed n sad* 🙁
Mie (O)
stop it guys 😤*acting angry*
Mie (O)
stop it guys stop making fun of him, he looks good in those clothes and dont say anything useless he is so sensitive 😤*😏*
Mie (O)
Sry ollie don't take those nonsense in ur heart *fake smile* ☺️
Ollie (O)
it's okay * trying to smile but still upset*
Mie (O)
Let's all go eat 😃
Maya n ray said at the same time : yeah
Ollie (O)
*eating slightly*
Mie (O)
*Saw him n rolled her eyes*
Mie (O)
*think something n smirk*
Mie (O)
ollie can you pass me the soup *look at him*
Ollie (O)
Yeah sure *take the soup n was going to give him soup then-*
Mie (O)
Ow- wth r u doing!! *scream n pulled her hand away *
Ollie (O)
I'm so sorry! I thought you had a good grip on it ( Shocked n freezing in place)
Mie (O)
Why did you let go so fast? I wasn't even holding it yet! I know my friends were being mean about your clothes earlier but you didn't have to ruin mine on purpose *angry *
Ollie (O)
I'm so sorry it's my mistake I should have been more careful *panicking n trying to touch her hand *
maya (O)
*came between n push ollie hardly* 😠Get away from her Haven't you done enough!!
Ollie (O)
*fell down n got hit on his hand* 😣 wait It was an accident!! I didn't mean to-
Ray(B)
*Glaring at Ollie*Seriously, look at what you did to her hand This is why people like you don't belong in places like this 😠
Ollie (O)
I'm sorry I didn't mean to- *holding his tears*
Everyone is enjoying the drama..
Ray(B)
Ohh shut up!! U clumsy idiot!! *looking at him with disgust *
Ollie (O)
*teary eyes* no please belie-
maya (O)
*steps infront of him n said* Don't lie You did this on purpose because you were jealous of her!! She was so kind with u but u such a shitty Nature u have!!
Ollie (O)
*looking down n tears flowing from his eyes*
Ray(B)
can't believe!! get lost now or u wanna hurt her more!!? Get out of our sight before we call security *glaring at him with pure disgust *
Ollie (O)
Sry- I'm sry *runs from there while crying*
Koko(author)
I hope you guys will like this chat story 🤧
Koko(author)
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Episode~2( faith )
Koko(author)
No one is reading my chat story 🥲 I'm so sad
Ollie (O)
*walking in rain while crying* I-I did-n't -
Ollie (O)
*fall down n head starts bleeding*
Ollie (O)
*tears flowing from eyes* Is everything going to end like this?
Driver: ma'am maybe someone came in front of the car!! *breaks*
someone
Whattt!!! *came out of the car immediately *
Ollie (O)
*laying there bleeding from head*
someone
OMG!! Are you blind, can't you see???? *went to him while shouting at driver*
Driver: My apologies, Ma'am the brakes slipped because of the rain *scared*
someone
I will see you later😠but first I have to see him he is bleeding from head!!! Help me carry him!!! *holding his arm*
someone
*Look at him*sweetheart I am so sorry My useless driver caused this... (in mind:he is so beautiful n innocent)
Victor flynn( A)(dr)
I'm here madam what happened? 😭*came running there *
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Check him quickly he is bleeding from the head *worried*
Victor flynn( A)(dr)
*starts treating him*
Victor flynn( A)(dr)
The bleeding has stopped Madam It's just a minor concussion he is completely stable and will wake up in an hour🤧*came outside while saying*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
okay okay u can go now I will call you again when needed *said in worried tone*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*went inside the room*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Wake up 😔 soon cutie I'm really sorry *cares his face n left*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*Came inside of room with food in his hand*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*cares his head n said in a soft tone* wake up cutie 😄
Ollie (O)
*slowly open his eyes*
Ollie (O)
*look here n there n shocked* 😱 AM I KIDNAPPED???!!!
Ollie (O)
Ahh- my head hurts 🤕
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Ahem-🤧😃
Ollie (O)
*look at him * 👀 r u also kidnapped Beautiful? 👀
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
No no my dear 🤧😭(aww so cute) *tell him everything*
Ollie (O)
Oh- that's why my head hurts well thank u for treating me 😞 * sad cause he remembered everything*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
no no it's my driver's fault I'm really sorry for ur loss 😔
Ollie (O)
no it's okay um see I'm fine 😀 so I should leave now *going to stand*
Ollie (O)
*head spinning* 😵
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*hold him * u u should rest 🤧 now don't go now and it's raining outside
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Here eat some food 👀 will give some energy n after u have taken medicines too *pats his head *
Ollie (O)
*felt warm n sad * 😔 yess
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Here eat now 😋 okay? I'm going for now *pat his head n left *
Ollie (O)
*starts eating* nom nom 😋
Ollie (O)
(so 😋 tasty but still my head hurts 🤕)
Ollie (O)
ding:new messages
Ollie (O)
*saw his sister's text* (where r the fuck r u???!! Stop playing the victim and pick up your phone Mom is furious. Stop roaming around on the streets like a loser and come back )
Ollie (O)
*sadly bites his lower lip*
Ollie (O)
*didn't reply n lay in bed*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
guys I wanna tell u guys something 😅
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
I brought someone cause
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
👀?? *looking at him* cause?❄️
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
My driver accidentally hit him in the rain tonight when he was injured, so I brought him straight to our mansion the doctor treated him and he is resting upstairs *said worriedly*
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
Ohh 😧
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
that's great but his background should be checked who knows if this is all a plan *cold* ❄️
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
😒shut up!! ur nonsense talks
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
He is sooo innocent n beautiful 😍 perfect for our son 😍
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
*Chokes on food* 🤧
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
drink some water brat ❄️
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
what are you saying it's impossible ❄️🤧
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Shut up I don't know 😠 he will be my son in law n stop talking in cold voice!!! *angry*
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
Sorry my Queen 🤧
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
😅 but mom broth-
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Shut up!!
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
😠
someone
Ahem- *nervously looking at them* 👀😅
Ollie (O)
I... I just came to return the plates... I'll leave now 😅*slightly trembling cause of nervousness*
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
*look at Conrad* 👀
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
*look at his dad*👀
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
Ahem- 👀 what's ur name boy?❄️ (he is really cute proud of my wife)
Ollie (O)
* flinched n stuttering* I'm..I'm ollie..
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
WOW WHAT A NICE NAME!! *suddenly yell* 😁
Ollie (O)
*suddenly drops on his knees trembling n covering his head ,tears flowing down*
Ollie (O)
I'm I'm sry I'm really sorry please don't don't hit me I will not do this again please don't hit me *trembling while crying badly*
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
Shocked*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*same*
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
*Same*
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
😟Oh no wait! I'm so sorry I didn't mean to scare you I was just excited *Going to held his hand*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*Still in shocked*
Ollie (O)
No please... don't touch me! Don't hit me... I'm sorry I'm so sorry!! *crying badly* 😭
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
Hey shh... look at me dear You did nothing wrong No one is angry here *kneeling down n held his hand*
Ollie (O)
*scared n snaps his hand away*😭 nooooo!! No please don't hit me
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*speechless n angry at the same time but in soft voice * hey cutie.. Don't cry no one will hurt u *cares his head*
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
um *looking down*
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
*Pat his head* it's okay
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*hugs her * it's okay 😟 it's okay
Ollie (O)
*faith while crying*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*shocked* call the doctor!!!! Now!?!
Victor flynn( A)(dr)
*came outside after checking him*
Victor flynn( A)(dr)
*sighs* Madam his physical wounds are minor but his mind is exhausted he didn't just faint his body shut down from a severe panic attack his heart rate was dangerously high..
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*worried* Is he going to be okay?Why was he so terrified?
Victor flynn( A)(dr)
*said in a sad n worried tone* he is carrying an immense amount of trauma and chronic stress It looks like he has been living in constant fear for a very long time His mind treated a simple loud voice as a life-threatening danger..
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*shocked*😟
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
*shocked n said* What do we do now? ❄️
Victor flynn( A)(dr)
Right now, he needs absolute peace. No loud noises, no sudden movements, and most importantly he needs to feel safe If he wakes up to another stressful situation, him mental health could completely break 😟
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
We will take care of it thnks for coming ❄️
Victor flynn( A)(dr)
my pleasure*bow n left from there*
Koko(author)
Tell me How was it? 🥺
Koko(author)
do u guys like it?? 🥺
epsiode~3 (Whose pheromones is this?)
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Look how terrified he is... Who did this to my cutie? Who made him feel like a criminal just for existing?😡 *angry*
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
Calm down calm down we will find out who made him like this😠 *angry but controlling it*
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
Um I'm sorry dada I didn't mean to scare him I was just excited 😟
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
It's okay my boy *hugs him* next be careful around him okay?
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
Yup dada! *hugs him too*
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
Hey brat leave my wife now!! 😾
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*glares* 😒
someone
papa!!!! Dadddd!!! *screaming*
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
we r backkkkk!!! *runs n jump on her papa(dada) *
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*hold her * don't jump on me like that 😾
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
Hehe sowwy *hugs him*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
How have u been? *looking at evie*
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
Nice dada 😁
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
Ahme- we r also here but I guess my daughters forget her dad *acting sad*
both at the same time : how can we!?!
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
*Hugs him * 😌
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
*hugs him too*
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
Hey hey I'm here too
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
Brother Conrad!!!! *jump on him*
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
*hold her* aishhh!! 😱 u monkey why r u jumping on everyone like this!!!
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
hump!! I missed u guyss 😩
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
😌 Now that everyone is at home let's have a party
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
these kids!! 🤦🏻♀️
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
Buttt Frederick brother is not at home now 👀
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
He will be home by night 😌
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
first of all listen here girls!! *serious tone*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*explain everything about him and that is how he brought him here *
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
And Listen to me carefully the boy upstairs didn't just get hurt in a minor accident he is carrying an immense amount of trauma he fainted because he had a severe panic attack right in front of us.. *serious n worried tone*
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
*shocked * A panic attack? Just from a loud voice?
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
*shocked n sad*
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
*pat Clara head* it's okay he is safe now *whisper*
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
*nod*😟
Alexander thorin(E)(Ml's dad)
So When he wakes up there must be no sudden movements, no loud noises, and absolutely no crowding him. We need to make him feel completely safe ❄️
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
Um can we see him?
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
😊 sure but first goo and fresh up
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
aww he is soo cutee 😍*whisper*
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
😩🥰 cuteness overload *happy*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
I know right 😌 I'm thinking him making my son in law
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
Woww 😍 yes yes
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
wait! What!! 😱 dada you know Frederick brother na!!
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Shhhh!! You will wake him up from sleep-
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
dada angel is awake now 😍 *looking at him *
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*look at ollie*
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
*Same*
Ollie (O)
*opens his eyes* uh- 👀
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
how are you feeling now? *checking his temperature*
Ollie (O)
I'm fine ☺️ don't worry but *look at them*
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
*Looking at him happily*
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
Hey angel! I’m Clara I brought you some soup cause papa said you skipped lunch *excited* 😆
Ollie (O)
Wh-at!! An-gel*shocked n shy to hear that*
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
🤧 aww so cute I'm evie Don't worry about anything if u need anything just tell us
Ollie (O)
*looking at Ryan* 👀
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
😌these are my daughters they’ve been dying to meet you
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
Btw do u feel any pain? 👀
Ollie (O)
Nooo I'm fine 😌 don't worry about me *said with smile*
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
😍can I hug u??? 🥺 please
Ollie (O)
Yuppp 😗*hugs her*
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
*hugs him tightly* wowww u smell like warm milk 👀😍
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
Now now leave him clara let him eat something 🤧
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
Yessss
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Here, have some soup later when dinner is ready clara will call u for dinner ☺️*pat his head*
Ollie (O)
But- I have to leave soon 🙁*said sadly*
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
No need!!
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
😐
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
I mean I mean 🤧😅Your health is bad right now, so stay here for a few days *said nervously*
Ollie (O)
Um- I have to tell my parents about it otherwise they'll h- *stop in the middle* 😣
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*notice it*
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
Then tellem naaa 🤩 stay with us naaa
Ollie (O)
Oka-yy *worried about something*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Now u rest we r leaving 😊
Ollie (O)
Um- can I can I *hesitating*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
yes what? Cutie? 😊
Ollie (O)
Can I also come with u? 😣 I'm little bored here
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
but u r injured 😟*worried*
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
*look at her dada * 👀
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*sighs* okay come with us
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
aww 😍🥰
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Ahme ahem-
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Let's go downstairs 🥰
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
*Helping him to stand-up *
Clara Thorin (O)(Ml's younger sis)
*hold his hand*let's goo
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
😊Sit here cutie *pat his head*
Both daughters also sit with him
Ollie (O)
*looking here n there* 👀
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*cooking something*
Ollie (O)
*stand n walk near ryan * can I help u? 👀
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Aww it's fine maids r here na 😁 but if u want then u can set plates on table
Ollie (O)
*grab some plates n walks to the dining table*
then someone came there...🌝
someone
hey give me some water!!! *in cold voice* ❄️
Ollie (O)
*flinched n slightly trembling*
Ollie (O)
Ye-s w-ait plea-se*stuttering*
*gives him a glass of water but it spills on his hand*
Ollie (O)
*shocked n scared*
someone
What the F**k! Can't you do one simple thing right? ❄️*angry *
Ollie (O)
*starts trembling in fear*I'm I'm sor-ry i di-dn't mea-n to-
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*shocked* Frederick!!!!
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
*came there tooo *
Frederick Thorin(E)
DADA!! WHO THE HELL IS HE?!! *releasing his angry pheromones*
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
brother calm down 😟
Ollie (O)
*trembling badly n tears flowing from eyes *
Ollie (O)
*leaking his Chamomile and Warm Milk pheromones cause of Ml's pheromones*
Frederick Thorin(E)
*freeze as ollie pheromones hits his nose*
Frederick Thorin(E)
Wait!! What is this scent coming from!? ❄️
Ollie (O)
*Hear it n freeze on the spot*
Ollie (O)
*suddenly runs from there*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
Omg omg, it shouldn't have happened like this *panicking*
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
dada relax relax *went n hug him*
Frederick Thorin(E)
what happened??❄️
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
lemme tell u❄️
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
*explain him everything* ❄️
Frederick Thorin(E)
And u guys believe him???! ❄️ like wth
Frederick Thorin(E)
Dada *look at him*
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*angry glares at him* FIND HIM NOW!!
Frederick Thorin(E)
*shocked but angry* OK!! FINE!!
Ollie (O)
*crying badly* no..no do-n't do-n't hic hic please
Frederick Thorin(E)
*pheromones hit his nose again*
Frederick Thorin(E)
(here u r) *went inside that room*
Ollie (O)
*crying badly n trembling*
Frederick Thorin(E)
Hey!! ❄️ why r u acting like this!! stop crying!! *said in anger*
Ollie (O)
*crying more n releasing his pheromones*
Frederick Thorin(E)
ah- stop ur pheromones!!!!Now!!!
Ollie (O)
😭*crying more* so-r-ry I-I sor-ry plea-se do-n't hit me
Frederick Thorin(E)
*sighs*
Frederick Thorin(E)
*said in a soft n warm tone*Hey look at me*grab his face softly*I'm not going to yell Stop crying
Ollie (O)
Hic hic *look at him with teary eyes* I'm I'm-
Frederick Thorin(E)
*wipes his tears n releasing his calming pheromones*
Ollie (O)
*felt his pheromones*
Frederick Thorin(E)
Relax *cares his face*
Ollie (O)
*hugs him suddenly while crying*
Frederick Thorin(E)
*shocked but didn't push him*
Frederick Thorin(E)
*patting his back*
Frederick Thorin(E)
*face red cause of ollie's pheromones n controlling*
Frederick Thorin(E)
*Carry him downstairs *
Conrad thorin (RA)(Ml's brother)
*Saw n shocked*😦
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
same
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
*Same but said* how is he? 😟
Frederick Thorin(E)
Fine he is fine just fell asleep *in normal tone*
Evie Thorin (A)(Ml's sis)
*Shocked *😱 bro r u okay? u can speak normally?!!
Frederick Thorin(E)
*rolls his eyes annoyingly* 🙄
Frederick Thorin(E)
*sits on the sofa while ollie is on his lap *
Ryan Thorin (A)(Ml's dada)
👀 if it's troublesome or heavy for you, you can lay him down right here on the sofa , I'll call the maid for help *said shockedly*
Frederick Thorin(E)
No! It's okay I'm fine*holds him closely *
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