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Mrs.Kim, Your Comments Can Be Heard

frustrated kook

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hello everyone
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it's my first chatstory
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hope you will like it
so let's start
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kookie
kookie
(what is this story)groan I can't believe 😪.I spent my entire night on this sad novel
kookie
kookie
this author is so bad in the description it's said fluff but this whole plot is sad
kookie
kookie
I wasted my entire night "sigh"
kookie
kookie
what time is it?
gets up to check the time
kookie
kookie
good now my phone is also dead
kookie
kookie
I will tell hyung not to invest in it
kookie
kookie
it's so frustrating 😫
while grumbling put phone on charger and goes to drink water
while pouring some water got on floor and phone start ringing another side
while reaching towards phone his foot slipped and he hit his in the corner of bed
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I know it's a very short chapter 😔
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but it's my first time writing
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and I really want to start story from 2nd chapter hope you will like
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it will be short story and will hope to write it good
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please read it further
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will update soon

Time travel

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Hello my cuties
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let's start our next episode
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kookie
kookie
Opening his eyes
kookie
kookie
my head hurts
while massaging his forehead
kookie
kookie
look around
kookie
kookie
while rubbing his eyes
kookie
kookie
why am I in hospital?
kookie
kookie
touches bandage on his head
kookie
kookie
slowly ember slipping and knocking the head
kookie
kookie
"oh that'why I am here. Hyung must have taken me to hospital"
hospital door opened, and few people came in
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Jungkook are you okay?
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Are you feeling pain?
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I will call the doctor
all the time Jungkook is looking at him dumbfounded
kookie
kookie
who are you Mr?
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Mr.Jungkook you don't me? I am Kim family butler jhope
jhope
jhope
I will call doctor right away
pressing the call button
meanwhile Jungkook watched him with wide eyes
kookie
kookie
who is he? Wait JUNGKOOK, KIM, JHOPE NO WAY, IT CAN'T HAPPEN, NOT TO ME..💭
kookie
kookie
I REALLY TIME TRAVEL INTO THIS EMOTION DAMAGING NOVEL AND ALSO BECOME A CANNON FODDER 💭
kookie
kookie
NO WAY, IT CAN'T HAPPEN TO ME
jhope
jhope
Mr. Jungkook are you okay? *worried*
kookie
kookie
ooh, I said it aloud
kookie
kookie
It's ok, I am okay *tight lip smile*
at that time Doctor came and start checking him
with them also came one man who is looking very handsome
doctor
doctor
Mrs Kim are feeling pain anywhere?
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Jungkook's doctor is asking you something .stop staring at me and answer him
kookie
kookie
No, I am not feeling pain
doctor
doctor
Mr.kim reports are normal. Mrs.kim just has injury on his head maybe that's the reason of his unusual behavior. there is nothing else. He can be discharged today
kim taehyung
kim taehyung
Okay, thank you doctor
kookie
kookie
So,he is the husband of this body
kookie
kookie
I remember in the novel. He is very unlucky guy.*sigh*
kookie
kookie
Just to promote main couple author really made them suffer
kim taehyung
kim taehyung
Jungkook, let's go.I already filled discharge paper
kookie
kookie
hmm ok
in the car
kookie
kookie
Every transmigratior gets a system where the heck is my system 💭
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You called me and I'm here
kookie
kookie
who's taking
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Hello kookie i am your cute Baby system at your service
kookie
kookie
Finally I got a system 💭
kookie
kookie
So,where is my space?
cute baby system
cute baby system
Mmmm, I don't have space
kookie
kookie
It's ok then where is mall?
cute baby system
cute baby system
N-no mall
kookie
kookie
then are you gossip system 🤔
cute baby system
cute baby system
n-no
kookie
kookie
🤨 then WHAT'S THE POINT OF HAVING A SYSTEM?
cute baby system
cute baby system
I can help you in mind reading others
kookie
kookie
and what's the use of this to me
cute baby system
cute baby system
you can know what others are thinking and will know there thought .if they are True to you or not
kookie
kookie
🤨 you can really do that
cute baby system
cute baby system
YES I CAN DON'T UNDERARM ME
kookie
kookie
Oh really , you look like a rabbit and talk like a baby.
kookie
kookie
And you are telling me to not to undermine you
cute baby system
cute baby system
Hmph, so what
cute baby system
cute baby system
I am cute and sweet. I also have power
cute baby system
cute baby system
you want it or not
kookie
kookie
Okay just give me
cute baby system
cute baby system
ok ready
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kookie
kookie
...
kookie
kookie
...
kookie
kookie
what the hell where is power?
cute baby system
cute baby system
...
cute baby system
cute baby system
😵
cute baby system
cute baby system
😵‍💫
cute baby system
cute baby system
He will kill me if he knows that I reverse the power now every one can hear his thoughts not other way around. 💭
cute baby system
cute baby system
what should I do 💭
kookie
kookie
what happened, why can't I hear there thoughts
kookie
kookie
🤨
cute baby system
cute baby system
😅 Actually I don't know. I am new system so let me check with main system
cute baby system
cute baby system
After finding out, I will come back.
kookie
kookie
till then what will I do
cute baby system
cute baby system
you can do it . I believe in you.
system escape from there
kookie
kookie
what a unreliable system *sigh*
kookie
kookie
Ok Jungukk let's recall this emotional ly unstable novel to stop your tragic end.
kookie
kookie
*sigh*
jhope
jhope
Mr.Jungkook why are you sigh this much today ? Are you feeling unwell?
kookie
kookie
No, I am okay.
jhope
jhope
that's good
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that's enough for today
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let's meet tomorrow for new update
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please like, comment
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so I will know if you liked it or not
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bye bye 👋

introduction

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Hello dear readers
let's start
kookie
kookie
SO this novel was about how cold ceo fall in love with talented protagonist and chased after him and to highlight protagonist brilliance kim family were used as scapegoat 💭
tae+jin
tae+jin
???
tae+jin
tae+jin
Who is talking? It sounds like Jungkook but his lips didn't move then from where sound came
kookie
kookie
I really feel bad for them. Just to outshine protagonist author used the kim family members as sacrifice 💭
kookie
kookie
kim taehyung is genius business man but in the end his company got bankrupted just so ml can become the richest man 💭
kim taehyung
kim taehyung
my company got bankrupt 💭
kookie
kookie
Wait I remember it's today that he got in accident when going to construction site, in the way when drunk driver crashed his truck with his(tae's) car. he was in coma for 3 years from then. kim family down fall also started from there💭
kookie
kookie
Jungkook's bad time also started from there because of his introvert nature and cold face many people already hate him but his status is high so,they can't be able to do anything with him. After kim taehyung accident he started to work at company to help him but was accused of fraud and being new in the family no one believes in him💭
kookie
kookie
So I have to stop the accident. If I recall right then the accident happened on ×××road💭
kim taehyung
kim taehyung
What does he mean by I will have accident today and company will be bankrupt and HOW THE HELL CAN HEAR HIM TALKING WHEN HIS LIPS DOESN'T EVEN MOVE💭
kim taehyung
kim taehyung
Did he hit his head by falling and start hallucinations 💭
kookie
kookie
Jhope can be go from xxy way.
kookie
kookie
In this way we can avoid the accident. Kookie you are a genius 😊💭
jhope
jhope
We can Mister Jungkook
kim taehyung
kim taehyung
I think we have to taking him to hospital again for a check-up his brain 💭
kookie
kookie
I hope this works or else I don't know how i will survive in this novel 💭*sigh*
kookie turn to Tae side for water and saw him reading documents
kookie
kookie
oh right what's his character like in novel 💭
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Kim Taehyung Age - 24 CEO of kim cooperation Had invested in many Bussiness Cold, talk less love his family members has 3 siblings Married(4months)
NovelToon
Kim (jeon) Jungkook Age - 20 Want to be a Actor Cold, Introvert (misunderstood as arrogant), kind hearted respect everyone Married (Arrange Marriage) Doesn't have friends
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Jeon Jungkook Time Traveler Age - 26 CEO OF Entertainment company Got Transmigrated in the novel while Cursing it Funny, kind hearted, Talkative, Dramatic
kookie
kookie
Ahh It's so boring in here. Who works all the time *looking at tae*💭
kookie
kookie
Jhope can you turn on the radio
kookie
kookie
At least it will reduce this deafing silence 💭
jhope
jhope
Sure Mr.Jungkook
Jhope put radio on
After some time it started broadcasting news
News
News
Due to a Truck driver drunk driving, Truce hit the side of the road and got in the accident.
News
News
It's good that road was empty so Noone else got hit.
News
News
But road was being blocked so please avoid using ×××road and be safe
kim taehyung
kim taehyung
What Jungkook thought really happened.
kim taehyung
kim taehyung
Might be a coincidence only.
jhope
jhope
Second Young master, we have arrived.
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that's it for today
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please like and comment
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meet in next episode
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bye bye

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