The Villaness's Edited Story
Accident
.. in front of a bungalow..
a girl is waiting with a 💐 and a ring 💍
Carla may
ha.. I know nicky likes me.. I am gonna propose him to marry me..
she opens the door... she hears strange voices
haa. umm.. yeah.. aah.. ah
Carla may
what's this weird noise? 🤨
Carla may
(this.. this .. it's my siso's voice??)
Annabelle may
honey... ah.. nickey... U r good
Nick samuels
baby... U r tight... ah.. mm
Annabelle may
nickey give me a hickey (teasing) 😜
Annabelle may
umm.. hah.. nick.. nick.... NICK!!
Nick samuels
bby.. what's up??
Annabelle may
someone is watching us..!
turns and looks at the door
Nick samuels
car.. CARLA!!
Annabelle may
..... (😈😈I know u would come)
Nick samuels
bby... bby... it's.. it's..
Annabelle may
siso.. sis.. carla.. pls..
Annabelle may
😭😭I and nickey love each other... pls.. he.. he didn't love you.. he acted just for.. for.. me😭😭😭
Carla may
oh... okay.. then..
Annabelle may
( this bitch why isn't she running away..! 🤬🤬)
Carla may
oh.. yeah.. thanks bella☺
Annabelle may
sis.. what for..?
Carla may
thanks for showing this scumbag's real face...
Carla may
I.. I.. bless you
Annabelle may
( she.. doesn't care about him??)
Nick samuels
( huh.. what happened now??)
Nick samuels
bby let's continue... come on..
Annabelle may
**** off.. 😡😡
Annabelle may
don't disgust me.. I just played with u cause I thought that bitch would be sad... 😡😡
Nick samuels
(this bitch... I thought she had a better figure.. ok.. let's call rita)
: hey darling.. what's up??
Nick samuels
bby I miss you.. where R U now.??
:I am at xxxx hotel room no. 569
Nick samuels
ok bby I am coming
: .. sure I am waiting.. ( kisses)
Nick samuels
*dress up and walks out of the room*
Carla may
I.. I... don't cry carla.. he is not worth it..
Carla may
don't let me see you.. I will cut ur chicken...
hears some strange voice..
Carla may
turns and see around..
Carla may
*finds no one around*
someone
help... help.. lady.. help
Carla may
hey.. where R U I can't see you..
someone
I.. I.. am he.. here.. pls.. save.. save me
Carla may
um.. hello... can U atleast wave ur hand??
Carla may
( strange ... I just someone calling for help..)
Carla may
*pain*.. aaagrh..
Carla may
( is this my end..??? )
slowly closes her. eyes..
Carla may
let me sle.. sleep for a moment.. 😞
Author. 😜
don't turn back I am talking to U* pout*
Author. 😜
this is my first novel.. I hope U like it.. next chapter will be an intro to some of the characters..
Author. 😜
stay tuned..... luv u😘😘
Author. 😜
( give me comments if U like this bold fl... also how U want ur fl to be..)
Author. 😜
also tell me ur favorite novel..
kiki?
Author. 😜
hi my lovely boo bears... I will introduce our characters as they appear in the story... luv u all
Author. 😜
I have taken a few pics from existing novels... don't be offended🥺🥺
Female lead:
name: Luna de Florence( Carla)
BEFORE:
description: a good for nothing.. hates Laura for stealing her parents love... loves prince arthur the most( she is a fan girl of him)
AFTER:
she loves eating and sleeping.. loves to disguise as a boy and flirt with girls... when drunk she becomes a lesb... ( practically she asks out every woman when drunk) hates cheaters, bitches and gold diggers
name : anna
description: a lovely girl who serves our fl luna... loves luna very very very.... infinity much..
name : James de Florence
description: father of Laura and adopt father of luna.. loves his daughter Laura.. has a sense of responsibility towards luna
name: Diana de Florence
description: mother of Laura and. adopt mother of luna... loves both of them equally..
name: Adam de Florence
description: brother of Laura... good at swords and draggers... hates luna... he thinks that our luna is a Pretending bitch... best friend of prince arthur
Name: Laura de Florence ( Annabelle)
description: loves wealth and power... loves to act very very much... a two faced bitch.. a slut... hates luna 'cause.... I will tell u later😋
Author. 😜
that's all for this chapter... see ya'll soon..
Luna de Florence (FL)
shut up minky..
Author. 😜
this is unfair..
Luna de Florence (FL)
shut up... don't blabber U chatter box.. let them read my story..
Author. 😜
tch.. ( shameless woman this is my story... 😭)
Luna de Florence (FL)
still not gone??
Luna de Florence (FL)
story starts... pls don't mind that stupid author ☺☺
Luna de Florence (FL)
aah.. ( what's wrong.. was I saved??)
maid Anna
my lady R U awake..?
Luna de Florence (FL)
my lady...?? (tch.. where am I??)
maid Anna
yes my lady.... pls rest until I come.. I will inform the duke..
Luna de Florence (FL)
( duke..??)
she gets up from her bed and walks towards the mirror..
Luna de Florence (FL)
this... this... have I become the villaness??? of all characters why should I possess her.. 😫😫😫
Luna de Florence (FL)
( now she is 14 years old.. at 15 yrs she will be engaged to that prince and at her age comming ceremony she will die..)
Luna de Florence (FL)
(shit.. this is unfair.. ) AAAH...
James de Florence
dear.. what happened..!!
Adam de Florence
*tch( that bitch just pretends... let's just accompany mom and dad..)
Adam de Florence
Luna??? ( fake caring)
Diana de Florence
honey can U call the mage again... I am worried about her... pls.. 😟😟
James de Florence
yes.. SAM...!!
James de Florence
Go and contact the magic court... tell them to send a mage...
Butler Sam
( just a fake lady.. do we really need to be this expensive??... waste of money...)
: don't worry Mr. duke... she is alright..but....
Luna de Florence (FL)
( are they talking about me..?)
James de Florence
but WHAT??
: but she might have lost her memories.... pls take care of this child... she is weak.. 😔
Luna de Florence (FL)
( weak.. who... me??)
James de Florence
yes okay.. we will take care of her..
Luna de Florence (FL)
(wtf... U think I would believe U?? he killed this woman just becoz she tried to kill his daughter.. he is gonna take care..??)
Luna de Florence (FL)
( looks like I need to remove those death messengers and leave this place for good..!!)
Diana de Florence
looks like we R disturbing her.. let's not do that...
anna inform me as soon as she wakes up... okay??
maid Anna
yes your grace...
Luna de Florence (FL)
(diana 😍😍😍.. one of my favorite side characters.. sadly she dies since Luna poisoned her since she doted on Laura more... *sigh*)
Luna de Florence (FL)
( let's get an autograph and hug of each of my favorite characters and retire from this place..)
at the same time.. somewhere in the kingdom..
*unknown*
ha.... finally I can sense you my love... this time I will protect you from all those people....
he can't sense her aura anymore..
*unknown*
what.. whats happening why... why can't I sense her...?? no... not again.. pls.. 😢😢
Luna de Florence (FL)
AAAH...
Luna de Florence (FL)
* huff* *huff* ... what's happening... aaha.. I.. I. can't... umm. ann.. na..
Luna de Florence (FL)
this.. this.. where am I??.. *shivering*..
kiki
hello my lovely master.. 🥰🥰
Luna de Florence (FL)
*search for voice source*
Luna de Florence (FL)
hey who R U... where R U 😑😑
kiki
master see up.. I am flying
Luna de Florence (FL)
*astonishing* U.. are an owl??
kiki
nope.. I am ur system ..my name is Kiki.. welcom to 'EDITED STORY SYSTEM'
Luna de Florence (FL)
what..??
kiki
ok... I know u R a little confused... *smirks* kiss me... I will clarify ur doubts..
Luna de Florence (FL)
U...
Luna de Florence (FL)
Are shameless 😑😑😑
kiki
host.. how could U say that...
Luna de Florence (FL)
don't waste my time be quick and tell me how I came here and how to go back to my world
kiki
that... host... I can't tell U how U came here.. it's customer privacy... but U can gi back to ur world if U change ur fate..
Luna de Florence (FL)
my fate... U mean luna's fate??
kiki
yes host... and I will help.. you to achieve ur goal.. I can also give u supplies...
kiki
this is ur storage house... U can store anything other than living thing here...
Luna de Florence (FL)
U want me to die from freezing..?? 🤬🤬
kiki
host this is a spet space that changes according to what u think....
Luna de Florence (FL)
oh.. really 🤨
kiki
yes host... U can try thinking ur city.. it will change iys background... also this is a 10000*10000sq.m storage room..
Luna de Florence (FL)
oh.. kk. ( I will try thinking my bridge)
suddenly the theme changes
Luna de Florence (FL)
WOW😲😲😲
Luna de Florence (FL)
ok how can I enter and exit this space...
kiki
U just need to summon me... call my name and I will be there U can ask me for anything.. 🤗
Luna de Florence (FL)
oh.. k.. what ur name again??
kiki
I just now told my name.. * hic* *hic* 😢😢 master doesn't love me.. 😭😭
Luna de Florence (FL)
hey... ok. ok... just for fun .. kiki
kiki
U thunk it's funny to play with me??
Luna de Florence (FL)
( omg.. I think I got this thing angry..!!)
Luna de Florence (FL)
that.. that's... I am sry.. U R cute when. U R crying..
kiki
( this woman.. is really one of the kind.. 😶😶)
she is again in her room...
Luna de Florence (FL)
um.. looks I have to eat.. I am hungry... ( aww.. I miss my pizza 🍕🍕 so much..)
she goes to dinning room...
Author. 😜
hey boo bears... guess what happens next..
Author. 😜
a) she eats with her *family* and gets indigestion..
b) she eats everyone's food and leave like nothing happened..
c)she goes straight to kitchen for her meals..
Author. 😜
what do u think will happen next..??
Author. 😜
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Author. 😜
hi boo bears... let's jump into the story
Luna walks down and enters the dining room.
James de Florence
* silent ** eating*
Diana de Florence
*silent** eating*
Adam de Florence
*silent **eating*
Laura de Florence ( villaness)
*looks luna and gives a warm smile*
Luna de Florence (FL)
*😖😖😖*( creepy ... guess I will have my food in my room)
she turns back and goes to her room..
maid Anna
my lady.. shall I go and get U food??
Luna de Florence (FL)
yes pls... I am really hungry
anna exits the room.she is in corridor
this is how the view is..
: hey.. isn't this anna!!..
maid Anna
who? *turns back*
maid camila
U forgot me... so soon
maid Anna
that.. that.. pls.. I... need to take food to my master
maid camila
U can take but take what I give U..!!
maid Anna
pls.. pls.. don't be like this.. my master is too a human.. pls
this is what camila gives her..
Author. 😜
ewww. that's gross... this is little unfair...
kiki
yeah but U r even more gross than that...
kiki
s I am little... now get out of the story
kiki kicks the author out
kiki
sry... let's go into the story..
: what's happening here!!
: all maids bow.. who were in the corridor..
Adam de Florence
what's this all fuss..?
maid camila
that. that.. young Duke.. this maid is not doing her work.. that's why I was lecturing her..
Adam de Florence
( this.. isn't she that bitch's maid... what's she doing here..)
Adam de Florence
what are you doing here.. can't you..
notices the food she is holding..
Adam de Florence
( what's this... who would eat this... gross)
Adam de Florence
look don't cause a fuss here.. 😤😤
maid Anna
( what... didn't young Duke see the food.. guess I have to bring this to master)
Luna de Florence (FL)
eww.. don't call me like that.. it's giving me goose bumps.
kiki
(≧∇≦)/ ... ur first task...!!
Luna de Florence (FL)
what's that..
kiki
win ur brother's favor and go to the festival together.... reward for completing this task is.... one redemption card.. U can use this card to redeem any one of the following..
-body memory
-health portion
-anti poison pill
-memory pill
- random skill card
body memory- helps to remember luna's memories..
health portion- helps to improve health condition
anti poison pill- can be used as an antidote for any kind of poison.
random skill card- will have complete comprehension over any random skill
Luna de Florence (FL)
woww..... exactly what I need
Luna de Florence (FL)
wa.. wait..!
Luna de Florence (FL)
(this damm owl... how can I get that monster's favour....* sigh*)
door opens and anna comes in with a long face..
Luna de Florence (FL)
ANNA... MY FOOD...!
Luna de Florence (FL)
what happened..??
shows the food.. to her..
Luna de Florence (FL)
again..??.. *sigh*... bury the food in the same place anna..
maid Anna
my lady... why don't you tell the Duke.. they are too much... 🙁
Luna de Florence (FL)
haha.. you think they would care.. .. I am just a replacement for their daughter.. now she's here I should be ready to leave the house any moment..
someone
(What's happening.. I thought she would throw a tantrum.. )
Luna de Florence (FL)
( someone is watching.. he is not an enemy.. so it must be someone I know)
Luna de Florence (FL)
( let's play with him..)
someone
(where is she going now.. is she going to steal food?)
Luna de Florence (FL)
anna I will take a walk in the garden...
Luna de Florence (FL)
ha.. it's soo beautiful...
Luna de Florence (FL)
*goes near a lonely tree*
Luna de Florence (FL)
R U Lonely too.. see I was bought as a cure to the Duchess as she was cured and their daughter returns they didn't care bout me at alll😭😭
Luna de Florence (FL)
I love them very very much... why don't they give me a little bit of warmth.. if I had known this I.. I. would have gone somewhere when those guys kidnapped me...
Luna de Florence (FL)
😭😭😭😭
someone
(what.. is she telling..!! )
kiki
( yo master.. you are such an actor..)
Luna de Florence (FL)
( U damm owl... don't come out.. I wil stew you and eat..)
Luna de Florence (FL)
*pretend to faint*
Adam de Florence
luna..!.. 👈the someone who was hiding in the corner..
Adam de Florence
* carry her to her room*
Adam de Florence
father.. I want to speak with you
James de Florence
Adam... where's your manners.. is this how U barge into ur dad's office..?
Adam de Florence
my apologies dad.... dad pls tell me the truth..
James de Florence
what... what do u want to know
Adam de Florence
did you bring luna as a replacement of Laura...???
James de Florence
*sigh* looks I can't hide from you... yes.. I told her that I am adopting her under the name Laura..
Adam de Florence
*shocked*WHAT!!
James de Florence
*sigh* I don't know where my daughter is.. 😭😭
James de Florence
my wife is sick at home.. Laura.. my baby where are you.. 😭😭
Lil luna
excuse me sir....
James de Florence
*shocked*
Lil luna
can U give me some food if you have.. pls.. I have not eaten for 5 days.. pls sir..
guard
go away you filthy creature..
Lil luna
you no need to give me for free sir...I would do any kind of labor sir.. pls give me some food sir. ..!
guard
I said you to go away..!
James de Florence
what are you doing...!!
James de Florence
little girl.. will you do anywork for food??
Lil luna
yes sir.. I am good at cleaning sir..
James de Florence
then will you come with me I want you to act as my daughter Laura..
James de Florence
my wife is sick...
Lil luna
sorry sir... I am not willing to..
James de Florence
little girl pls.. pls. consider
James de Florence
find me that girl
in front of a shabby house
luna's father
U bitch.... where did you run off..
Lil luna
dad... I am hungry pls.. pls don't beat me
luna's father
bitches like you should die...
throws a bottle... it breaks at luna 's head
luna becomes bloody like this
(don't mind the background)
James de Florence
stop it...
luna's father
who R you... I beat my daughter... who R U to interfere
James de Florence
stop it.. I want to adopt your daughter... tell me how much U want.
luna's father
give me a two hundred thousand gold coins.. I will sell my daughter
Lil luna
*gasp* da.. dad...!! 😢😢
luna's father
shut up bitch..
James de Florence
here is the cheque for the money U asked for.. now give this child to me...
he takes luna and leaves..
James de Florence
little girl R U alright??
James de Florence
look I will tell you... pretend to be my lost daughter ... I will provide you food, shelter and clothes... okay??
James de Florence
don't call me sir.. call me dad..
Lil luna
*shy* dad( a little happy)
Adam de Florence
( what have I done..!)
he realises that he faulted an innocent girl..
Author. 😜
hope you like today's episode...
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