A Ten-Year Old Promise
first day
AUTHOR
Hi fellow readers. This is my first work that I am doing... hope so you'll enjoy the story.
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P.S tell me if there's something I need to add or do ... your opinion matters 🥰
So this is a story about a boy named Jake. He is gentle,caring, and sweet. He is everyone's favourite and on top of that list is our little mischief maker Jane. She is talkative, clumsy and always creates trouble.
They are best friends and are always there for one another
Jane(FL)
For real !!!!??? It's 7 am already !!!! MOM !! MOMMA !!
Her first day in high school and she's already running late...
Jane(FL)
(shouting while she's wearing her uniform) MOMMA !!!!
Nessa(FL Mom)
(cooking in the kitchen and hearing Jane's shouts)
*And the drama starts now🤦🏻♀️ .... One, Two, Three*
As she finished counting in her head .. Jane came to the kitchen looking flushed with uncombed hair and untidy uniform
Nessa(FL Mom)
Oh for goodness sake.. would you look yourself in the mirror? You look like a crazy girl who escaped mental hospital.. Tidy up yourself.. will you?
Jane(FL)
(tidying her clothes) Whyyyyy didn't you respond when I called you???
Nessa(FL Mom)
Did you wake up when I ask you to? Didn't you say (funnily immitating her voice) "5 more minutes momma I still want to sleep"
Jane(FL)
Hahaha very funny mom 😑
Nessa(FL Mom)
(annoying her) I know dear .... Even you Dad says I should start a comedy show.. I think so I should. What do you say?
Jane(FL)
MOMMA !!!!! You can annoy me later but for now where is my breakfast? I'm late for school !!!
Nessa(FL Mom)
In the dining room obviously
Jane ran to the dining room... while she was running she almost slip and fell
Nessa(FL Mom)
(shaking her head) *what am I gonna do with this girl?*
Jane(FL)
(trying to eat fast)
*I'm late! I'm late! I'm sooo very late! Jake's gonna kill me this time for sure*
Nessa(FL Mom)
(seeing Jane eating and is looking around the room) Is someone stealing your food?? Why are you eating in a hurry???
Jane(FL)
I'm late for my first day momma and Jake's gonna be here any moment
Nessa(FL Mom)
mhmmm.... but eat slowly... don't rush I'll drop you today .. but only for today understand
Jane(FL)
REALLY mamma ??????
Thank you so much*hugging her*
Nessa(FL Mom)
He has gone to the office already
Jane(FL)
wow that's early .
Jane(FL)
(finishing her breakfast she ran to her room to take her bag) I'm ready. How do I look?
Nessa(FL Mom)
Like a person who don't know how to comb their hair ... look at the mirror
Jane(FL)
(looking at the mirror and seeing her messy hair and disheveled uniform she blushed )
Nessa(FL Mom)
(jokingly) looks like someone is planning to scare away all the boys on the first day itself 😆😆
Jane(FL)
(blushing hard) MOM !!!!!
Nessa(FL Mom)
I'm kidding I'm kidding... my love come here
Jane(FL)
(went and sat down near her mom) you know I don't have interest in anyone right?
Nessa(FL Mom)
(combing her hair gently) yes I know love .... but eventually one day you will fall for someone ?
Jane(FL)
(thinking about what her mother said)
I don't know but I don't want to talk about all that
suddenly she hears a whistle outside her house
Jane(FL)
It's JAKE !!!!! hurry up momma he's here
Nessa(FL Mom)
how do you know it's him?
Jane(FL)
I know that voice and he's here let's go now hurry, quickly
Nessa(FL Mom)
wait let me finish your hair a little bit .... now look at the mirror and see how you look 😘
Jane look at the mirror and saw herself
she hug her mother in joy thanking her and kissing her
Nessa(FL Mom)
aren't you late for school love ????
Jane(FL)
ohhh shoot ..... I forgot !!!!! byeee momma see ya later and love ya
AUTHOR
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Adoring
Jane(FL)
*hurrying to the door*
Crap I am so late Jake is going to kill me
Opening the door she saw Jake outside.
Jake(ML)
*smirking* About time you showed up kitten. I thought you're still asleep
Jane(FL)
Yea yea whatever 🙄. I woke up a little late today but I made up my mind that this year will be my year 😤
Jake(ML)
*taunting her* Ohoo someone's in a determined mood. But sorry to burst your bubbles kitten, but the school bus just left a minute before you came out, so we're going to be late on the first day.
She looked down the road and she saw the school bus at a distance already moving further away from them.
Jane(FL)
*panicking* Oh my Gosh. I can't be late on my first day. How are we going to reach on time?
Nessa(FL Mom)
Are you done panicking love?
Turning around she saw her mother coming out of the house with sunglasses and keys on her hand
Jane(FL)
Where are you going mom?
Nessa(FL Mom)
I'm going to drop my panicking daughter and her friend to school since she missed the bus
Jane(FL)
*excited and jumping at her* Oh right! You said you'll drop us off. Thank you so much mom.
Nessa(FL Mom)
*hugging her* Anything for my little cupcake
Jake(ML)
So when we're done with this sweetness can we move now or we're seriously going to be late.
Nessa(FL Mom)
*smirking at him and wearing her sunglasses* You bet we are going on a sweet ride.
Jane(FL)
*hesitant* I don't like this .......
Nessa(FL Mom)
*imitating the GPS voice* We've arrived at your destination. Please rate us and give us 5 star reviews.
Jake(ML)
*excited* Woohoooo that was a sick ride. Thank you so much for dropping us.
Jane(FL)
*getting pale and carsick* That was the most terrifying experience I've ever had. I thought I almost died three times already
Jake(ML)
*In unison* But you didn't
Nessa(FL Mom)
*In unison* But you didn't
Nessa(FL Mom)
That's right my boy 😌
Jane(FL)
*Rolling her eyes and getting off the car* You two are seriously two peas in a pod
Jane(FL)
My goodness. Stop it I'm getting goosebumps hearing you two talk like the same person. Also and mom please drive slowly on your way back and not like a maniac
Nessa(FL Mom)
That's the charm love. And also have fun on your first day okay. *Looking at them fondly* I love you my little Cupcake and take good care of yourselves okay Jake
Jane(FL)
I love you too mom
Jake(ML)
*looking at Jane's mom* Love you too boss and drive safely back
When she left, they were looking around. Everything is new. The new building in front of them, new people going in and out the gate, With the cool spring breeze blowing, they looked at each other and smiled.
Jane(FL)
Yeah. Let's go. To new unknown future!
Jake(ML)
*looking forward* to new future
AUTHOR
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First day
When they entered the building there were chatters, laughter and people walking up and down to their respective classes.
Jane(FL)
*looking at Jake* well see you after school
Jake(ML)
*smiles at her* see you after school
At the same time jane heard screams from a distance. Looking she saw girls screaming at Jake's smile
Jane(FL)
so much for first impression 😑
Jake(ML)
Can't blame them for liking me *smirks*
Jane(FL)
*walks away* ughh I feel sour in my mouth
at that moment someone jumped and hugged Jane
Jane(FL)
*pushing the person away* Remy !!
Remy
Hi babygirl. I missed you. I haven't seen you in years. *looking at her up and down* my my you've turn out to be such a pretty lady
Remy is Jane's friend and her ex crush. He's a basketball player and loves cats.
Jane(FL)
*blushing and thinking* He called me babygirl
Jane(FL)
which class are you in ?
Jane(FL)
Smiling and excited* We're in the same class
Remy
*smiling at her* You don't say
Remy
*pats her head* let's go to class then
Jane(FL)
wait ..... I have to wait for Jake too
Remy
*his smile drops a little* Jake? He's here too?
Jane(FL)
*smiling at him* yes he applied to the same school as me. But where is he?
She spotted him surrounded by a bunch of girls talking to him. He saw her and wave at her mouthing the word "Wait for me"
Jane(FL)
*annoyed* You know what let's just head first to class. I don't wanna crash his fan meeting
Remy
*laughing* You two are still fighting till now.
They went to class and sat in their respective benches
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