You Broke Me!
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Rose Grey - 21 years old. Has a terrible past. Broken but strong. Last year of college. Majoring in Culinary ( She hopes to become one of the most renowned bakers in the world some day). Orphan, used to shift here and there in foster homes. Height - 5'6 feet.
Vincenzo De Luca - 26 years old. Broken like Rose. Shows his emotions only to his family. Loves his family and can do anything for them. Boss of the Italian Mafia. Only sole purpose of his life is revenge! Reason - unknown. Height - 6'5 feet.
Domenico De Luca - 24 years old. Brave and wise. Loves his family a lot and can do anything for them. Underboss of the Italian Mafia. Height - 6'3 feet.
Amato De Luca - 21 years old. Joker of the family. Amato means Angel but can be ruthless when he wants to. Loves his family and can do anything for them. Consigliere of the Italian Mafia. Height - 6'3 feet.
Sofia De Luca - 20 years old. Loves her family a lot. Hates betrayers just like her mother and can go to any extent when someone harms her family but she is an overall sweet and a kind girl. Knows about Mafia. Height - 5'4 feet.
Ariana De Luca - 48 years old. A headstrong woman. Grieves about her past every day. Loves and adores her children a lot. Hates betrayers.
Maria Grey - 53 years old. A very wise and a kind hearted woman. Loves and treats Rose like her own child. Doesn't know about Rose's past.
Antonio De Luca - 51 years old. Ex Boss of the Italian Mafia. Smart, ruthless and strong. (Will not go into details right now but in later chapters. )
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Trailer
Rose Grey
( Today is the last day of my internship, phew )
Vincenzo De Luca
( Walks in )
Vincenzo De Luca
( Looks at Rose and mesmerised by her beauty )
Rose Grey
You are the best Vince!
Vincenzo De Luca
( Smirks teasingly)
Vincenzo De Luca
I know stellina! ( winks) ( little star)
Vincenzo De Luca
Mi amor, will you marry me and make me the happiest bastard in the world? ( My love )
Rose Grey
A thousand times yes, Vincy!
( Just before the wedding ceremony)
Domenico De Luca
(Runs) Vince! Look what we found! (Breathing heavily)
Vincenzo De Luca
What, Dome!? Today is my wedding day! I don't want anything to do with work! (Sipping champagne from the glass)
Domenico De Luca
Just look at this! (Speaks impatiently)
Vincenzo De Luca
(Takes the file)
The wine glass slips from his hand shattering the glass as well as his heart into million pieces.
Vincenzo De Luca
Oh stellina! You just chose the wrong man to mess with! (Little star)
Vincenzo De Luca
Let the game begin neonata! (Babygirl)
Is this the end of their love story or the start of their destruction?
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Chapter 1
De Luca Mafia's Torture Chamber ( warehouse )
Screams of agony can be heard from miles and miles. Begging for mercy only brings satisfaction on his face.
The fact that he has the upper hand, the superiority, the power but most importantly he has the coldest heart ever when it comes to Mafia ! The monstrous demeanour of his when he enters the chamber can even bring Satan to his knees.
Traitor
Please! Please leave me! Please! I beg you ,my king. I made a mistake. The hunger for power made me a greedy bastard, I agree but please don't do this!
Vincenzo De Luca
(in a calm yet deadly tone) Tsk tsk! You should have thought that before you double crossed me, you son of a bitch!
Vincenzo De Luca
Oh the fun I'm going to have today. It's been a long time. Let me just warm up.
Vincenzo De Luca
Guards bring me the whip. ( takes it)
Vincenzo De Luca
You must have already been aware of this that I always like to punish traitors by myself.
Traitor
My king! Please! I beg you! I have my wife and two daughters at home. Please leave me and I will never come in front of you again.
Vincenzo De Luca
(Whips his back)
Traitor
(Screams in pain and agony)
Continues to do it until it's been 250 times
Vincenzo De Luca
Already given up? I'm not done yet
Vincenzo De Luca
( Takes his tool box and sits in front of him )
Vincenzo De Luca
You see this!? ( takes the knife and stabs him in both the thighs, thrice each)
Traitor
(Tries to shout but no voice coming out)
Vincenzo De Luca
(Takes another tool and gauges his eyes out)
Traitor
(Blood flowing out of his eyes)
Vincenzo De Luca
(Takes a butcher knife and cut his fingers and toes one by one)
Vincenzo De Luca
( Gradually cutting his arms and legs slowly )
Traitor
(Thinking) Oh how much I wish to die right now!? Why did I have to be so much greedy?! Now my whole family will suffer because of me! Financial loss and my death will cause them so much distress and pain. If only I would've walked on the right path in my life, I wouldn't have ended up here!
Vincenzo De Luca
Leave him here for 2 hours and Domenico will finish him up!
Traitor
(Thinking) Please someone kill me and free me from this misery!
Domenico De Luca
I might just grant your wish, you motherfucker! Remember one thing,
Domenico De Luca
WE HATE TRAITORS!
Domenico De Luca
(Shot him on his forehead)
Domenico De Luca
Done brother!
Vincenzo De Luca
Good job Dome!
Vincenzo De Luca
(Phone suddenly rings) Hello?
Ariana De Luca
Where are you two? You both promised me that you will be home for lunch! I have been waiting for the past half an hour. Come here or else I will eat it without the two of you! Amato and Sophia are already home.
Vincenzo De Luca
(Chuckles) Sorry Ma! Just got a little carried away. Will be home soon! Love you😚❤️!
Vincenzo De Luca
(Hangs up) Let's go home before those two foodies finish all of our food made by Ma!
Domenico De Luca
I'll take out the car!
Vincenzo De Luca
That was a good warm up, wasn't it?
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