Hi guys this is story contains the first 2 draft chapters of my story, so it will be kind enough to know on what places I should improve in my story. Thank you.
"From today onward no one will look down on me and no one will hurt me from today onward I will be away from this greedy, selfish and competitive world and now I can rest forever" as I was thinking to myself when I was standing in the edge of the bridge trying to take my own life.
"Now at the count of three I will be jumping from this bridge 1, 2,...", As I was about to jump I had sudden feeling and kind of regretful feeling as well, I started to think to myself "Why should I kill myself? Why? Because I failed in life? Don't I get a second chance?, No I will fight myself up against this cruel world and have an happy ending to my life."
As I was thinking to myself I saw a man who was standing right at the end of the bridge shouting and showing me some signs using his hand, but I couldn't see him and hear him properly as he was far away from the place I was there so I got down from the pole, As I got down from the pole I saw the man raising and pointing his fingers up, I was bit confused but as he was shouting and telling me "look up kid" so I just looked up, It was the rusted steel cable, which is used to hold the bridge but It was shacking, Shacking to a level where it was about to break off, Then suddenly I saw a man shouting at me "There's an earthquake kid come, run and come out of that bridge, it is about to break off run".
"what! there is an earthquake! And the bridge is about to break off?" as I spoke to myself in a state of shock and fear, as more and more people were shouting at me, I didn't know what to do, then I heard a sound, the sound of something of something cracking up, I looked down it was the bridge which has got cracked down, "the bridge is going to break down "run boy, run" as a man was shouting at me and telling me to run before I die in the bridge.
Suddenly there was another crack in the bridge and it worsen the situation more, as more and more people were shouting and the bridge was about to break off from the earthquake ,I just started to run without being able to take the decision of whether to kill my self up in this perfect situation or to live.
As I was running thinking about what decision to make, the bridge started to shake more and more but however I got close to the end of the bridge, suddenly the bridge shook once more and the end part of the bridge broke off.luckily i was able to stop myself at the end part of the bridge where it broke off or else I might have fallen from the bridge.
The gap between the end of the part of the broken bridge and the land was so big,so big to a level where are normal human being will not be able to jump and survive.
But I had no choice other than jumping from the bridge all by myself as no one was willing to give me a helping hand as well.
"You can do it Scott, you can do it" I repeated, to encourage myself and increase my confidence into jumping this huge gap between the bridge and the land, I took three steps behind, took a deep breath and decided to run at the count of three."1,2,3 jump!" as I closed my eyes and jumped.
"ugh my head hurts like hell, I can't even feel my legs. what happened to me? As I questioned myself thinking why my body hurts and then I remember that my body hurts because I jumped from the bridge to save myself "maybe it's because I jumped from the bridge to save my self".
"oh, I am alive! What a relief, ahh! What has happened to this place?" I said as I looked around the place with a full of surprise and shock, "This place is destroyed, there's not even one single drop of water, what happened to the river? Did the river lose all of its water because of the earthquake?" I thought to myself after seeing the whole river turned into bare land or like a desert.
"I might have to get up, or else I will be stuck here till the next morning, why isn't anyone here to at least help me? What kind of people are they? I guess I will have to get up, all by myself! Again" after that, I tried to get up but I just couldn't get up because my leg was in gull pain but somehow, I tried my level best and got up and started to look around. I fired the woods but couldn't wait so I started to search all by myself
As I was looking around the town, I started to get more and more shock and scared as the whole town looked new and there was no one else to be seen at all, I just even had a feeling that was I the only survivor of the earthquake because the whole town was dead silent and the roads were also different there's not even one single tree to be seen all I can see is a lot of sands, I even searched and saw to see whether at least one person would have survived but to my shock there was no one, but as I was walking further and further I came across a Board which Welcome to the world of uncertainty, Feeling lost? Go to our helpdesk which is only one station away" then suddenly I heard a voice shouting, "to the help desk, to the help desk, the train starts in 5 minutes " I saw it and walked and entered inside the train, then the man stopped and asked 1 silver coin boy, coins I don't even have a dollar as I was going to show the empty pocket for him I was shocked to see that I had a silver coin in my pocket and I gave and got in and landed in the helpdesk as I entered the help desk and a man wearing a blue coat asked from me "how can I help you kid?" " well I want to go back to my town, you see the town salt lake" I explained to him in a rather desperate manner, but he replied to me saying "well kid you see, you might get shocked to know this but you are actually dead.
"what I am dead!" I shouted "yeah you are dead and this is the world of Uncertainty" he replied in a very calm way to me "what world of uncertainty!" " yeah kiddo you died from an earthquake you could have gone to heaven but unfortunately as you were trying to suicide your bad deeds got equal to the good deeds and since they are both equal you are in the world of uncertainty."
