More than alive

I see the world

I feel the pain

understand nothing

I feel so high

when I try to find someone

for I don't need to lose me

but still living alone

I walked on a long path

with my empty heart

but when I met you

I start feeling

more than alive

I just try try no more believe in life

but you make me feel more than alive

I don't wanna tell you but can't deny

when I find you I meet a different world

now darkness evilness don't bother me

I ignored the reality

I trapped in the darkest night

the new world's night have brightest sky

its moon and stars make feel more than alive

you invite me in a time where

I feel more than alive live live

more than alive

being with you is the feel more than alive

I wrote this song how is it ?