It is my first novel. Please help me to be improved my story.
It is a cold girl and a cold boys love story.
A girl who lost her mother form her childhood time . She was her mother dead with her no eyes. so the killer want kill the girl. so her father tell her to go abroad and study. she have 4 brothers. when she was 7 years old she go to abroad. now she reach her home town for 10 years ago.
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