Wow 👌🏻🤧❤ small and fantastic love story.... but u could hv show how they feel and more abt their childhood still its nice❤... .
2021-09-01
2
Akira-kun
This is the best short story/fairy tale I ever read
2021-07-06
3
maaku 😌 (MTSRC)
the story was cute and interesting but its too simple you could work on how they feeling for each other plus the story was a rushed to the ending its overall nice and good story also trying to describe more in the storyline like why the girls hate the female lead. your grammar was good and the story has a nice ending. I love reading the story and hope my review helps to improve your story more
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prerana pradhan
Wow 👌🏻🤧❤ small and fantastic love story....
but u could hv show how they feel and more abt their childhood still its nice❤... .
2021-09-01
2
Akira-kun
This is the best short story/fairy tale I ever read
2021-07-06
3
maaku 😌 (MTSRC)
the story was cute and interesting but its too simple you could work on how they feeling for each other plus the story was a rushed to the ending its overall nice and good story also trying to describe more in the storyline like why the girls hate the female lead. your grammar was good and the story has a nice ending. I love reading the story and hope my review helps to improve your story more
2021-06-26
3