War Side story is well described that's great in chapter and Pictures were Used in Good good places that's cool enough and chapters are lil bit of small so author I want it a lil bigger than usual your writing
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2021-09-02
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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
No offense but their were mistakes in this chapter as well...Like there is no word "Banded" but Banned, you wrote "Lotus Village Villagers" instead of this writing "Villagers of Lotus village" Or "People of Lotus village" will be more good to use..And their were more mistakes too...The story is going good and it is intriguing too read but these mistakes makes the story plotline less and less effective so try to improve these...!!
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War Side story is well described that's great in chapter and Pictures were Used in Good good places that's cool enough and chapters are lil bit of small so author I want it a lil bigger than usual your writing
Reader of MTN~
2021-09-02
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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
No offense but their were mistakes in this chapter as well...Like there is no word "Banded" but Banned, you wrote "Lotus Village Villagers" instead of this writing "Villagers of Lotus village" Or "People of Lotus village" will be more good to use..And their were more mistakes too...The story is going good and it is intriguing too read but these mistakes makes the story plotline less and less effective so try to improve these...!!
~Reader From MTN Community
2021-09-01
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