I can see the plot improve. but the pace is slow. I wish it get a little fasten up. Also, There are some places where punctuation,Syntax and grammar needs a double check. Overall good work author.
~Reader from MTN community
2021-09-04
1
🫧SweetScars🍭💋
I hope that the next update of this,will be even more interesting or creative as usual and gain more reader’s here! So,author just keep up the good work!
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kate MTN (R)(P)
I can see the plot improve. but the pace is slow. I wish it get a little fasten up. Also, There are some places where punctuation,Syntax and grammar needs a double check. Overall good work author.
~Reader from MTN community
2021-09-04
1
🫧SweetScars🍭💋
I hope that the next update of this,will be even more interesting or creative as usual and gain more reader’s here! So,author just keep up the good work!
{ reader from MTN }
2021-09-03
2