yes , Anna might be the bloody one to kill and the cruel demon. But, I'm looking forward to which devils she had to face to becm such a demon. I mean she isn't a psycho.. and yes she isn't one of the lead characters . All demons were once an angel 👐
2021-09-16
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Ava💕<MTN>
nuuuuu the story ish not confusing😌 it's going great. Adam's character is suspicious but great!
2021-09-06
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Woah These letters are honestly getting more interesting. Ana and Honey know the dark past of everyone, seems Ana did a lot of bad jobs. But is she really that evil? Or some secrets? Gosh I'm terribly curious, Come fast and update ne Nehs All in all I think the story is brilliant, The plot gets curious and curiouser. Flow and continuity is maintained too. The only thing in need of improvement I've found are the few typos in the chapters and the slight grammatical errors that are present, Once those are fixed, Me knows your story will be the bestest of the best top class (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ Keep it up ne, Best of Luck for the Contest!!! — G, Reader from MTN Community
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Xomxom
yes , Anna might be the bloody one to kill and the cruel demon.
But, I'm looking forward to which devils she had to face to becm such a demon.
I mean she isn't a psycho.. and yes she isn't one of the lead characters .
All demons were once an angel 👐
2021-09-16
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Ava💕<MTN>
nuuuuu the story ish not confusing😌 it's going great. Adam's character is suspicious but great!
2021-09-06
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Woah These letters are honestly getting more interesting. Ana and Honey know the dark past of everyone, seems Ana did a lot of bad jobs. But is she really that evil? Or some secrets? Gosh I'm terribly curious, Come fast and update ne Nehs
All in all I think the story is brilliant, The plot gets curious and curiouser. Flow and continuity is maintained too. The only thing in need of improvement I've found are the few typos in the chapters and the slight grammatical errors that are present, Once those are fixed, Me knows your story will be the bestest of the best top class (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ Keep it up ne, Best of Luck for the Contest!!!
— G, Reader from MTN Community
2021-09-04
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