No your story is great . Ai chang is rude 🙄. Take your time writing love the character development with Mia , Olivia and Jo . Olivia mom seems brutal but is only concern with marrying off her daughter to a poor family . Ai fighting for the prince is interesting . Since I'm still new to chat writing myself all I can say is have courage that your story will progress . Starting from scratch with your own writing ideas allows you to see where you can improve . Pace yourself , write what you can then watch it grow :) . Make sure you take a break or take some time or days out for yourself as well . :) Overall I love your story :)
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No your story is great . Ai chang is rude 🙄.
Take your time writing love the character development with Mia , Olivia and Jo .
Olivia mom seems brutal but is only concern with marrying off her daughter to a poor family . Ai fighting for the prince is interesting .
Since I'm still new to chat writing myself all I can say is have courage that your story will progress . Starting from scratch with your own writing ideas allows you to see where you can improve . Pace yourself , write what you can then watch it grow :) .
Make sure you take a break or take some time or days out for yourself as well . :)
Overall I love your story :)
2022-10-05
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