will good beginning 😌 but I feel it's little exiting there's not lot of action will maybe If I was you I will add for example that the female escaped one of her date or to tell her friend to pretend that he's her boyfriend It's your way in writing the story in the plot that you imagined is really amazing 👏😍 I hope that you continue will I'm continue reading your story and annoyed you with my stupid remarks
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will good beginning 😌
but I feel it's little exiting there's not lot of action
will maybe If I was you I will add for example
that the female escaped one of her date
or to tell her friend to pretend that he's her boyfriend
It's your way in writing the story in the plot that you imagined is really amazing 👏😍
I hope that you continue will I'm continue reading your story and annoyed you with my stupid remarks
2021-11-09
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