author your story is good , I like your creativity but you just need to improve your english a little there are some gramitical mistakes that need to be put under consideration I am not looking down on you seriously , I like you're work , you have put a lot of effort into it , keep it up. lastly I want to say that to everyone that please check my work too on manga toon its title is love constellation , well its not a novel nor a chat story it's just some of own written poetry and lyrics .I hope you all like it
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otaku /army forever ( MTNP)
author your story is good , I like your creativity but you just need to improve your english a little there are some gramitical mistakes that need to be put under consideration I am not looking down on you seriously , I like you're work , you have put a lot of effort into it , keep it up. lastly I want to say that to everyone that please check my work too on manga toon its title is love constellation , well its not a novel nor a chat story it's just some of own written poetry and lyrics .I hope you all like it
2020-06-02
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I really like your story to
2020-05-31
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shru
It's really good story
2020-05-20
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