I'll be honest.. I read this because I could see how much effort you put in it. personally the story was not upto my taste so I wanted to drop it but seeing how much you enjoyed writing it made me want to read it. I'm glad I did read it. It's a good start, I know you will keep improving as you write more and more. Some parts did make me cringe like how they were calling thier partners wife and the parents calling them daughters, sex scenes (they need improvement).. I'm not saying all this to hurt you or make you stop writing. I want to be honest with you.. please keep writing and you'll keep improving. would love to support you on that journey. Also put trigger warnings for killing and mentions of killing/suicide so that the reader is prepared... I think I only saw ones for smut but there should be warnings for other stuff too. Keep it up author. wish you well!!! looked great in your farewell saree!!