author if you don't mind can i give a little advice pls don't rush the ending the pace of the story is a little rushed it is just what I feel it's like if u think i am wrong it is upto you if you don't it is upto you i felt like giving you a suggestion so i gave you one other things is up to you afterall it is your story who am I to say something about it
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Mansha Bhasin
author if you don't mind can i give a little advice pls don't rush the ending the pace of the story is a little rushed it is just what I feel it's like if u think i am wrong it is upto you if you don't it is upto you i felt like giving you a suggestion so i gave you one other things is up to you afterall it is your story who am I to say something about it
2022-08-05
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