that was awesome I wanna cry cuz it ended๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ literally my feelings were attached with it the family drama, the misunderstanding and the most reliable think is that the old man she trusted was the snake as in reality we say the one who cares is the one who stabs๐๐๐
2024-06-14
5
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The story was great, overall. The plot is what got me mesmerized. I can't believe I completed it in a day, 80+ chapters, no less. Other than the spelling errors, some fancy words and too little pov of Eric, it was beautifully written, the mature content was perfect too. The story gets boring when the suspense is easily caught. But this one was different, Mr. Thompson surely played the villain card. I thought Wyatt would later be evil, but I am glad that he didn't. But the ending seemed so rushed, it could be prolonged to a few chapters more with Eric confessing Olivia. Anyways, happy that they got married after overcoming misunderstandings and all those obstacles. I would want an epilogue. You should have written that instead of asking opinions from readers, the story was great, really! 4 stars for this masterpiece! โจ
2024-06-14
3
โ ๊ฏฑืื ึฦืื ึแจฎืื ึฎ๊ซถ โ
thank you so much for this beautiful story ๐๐๐
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that was awesome
I wanna cry cuz it ended๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
literally my feelings were attached with it
the family drama, the misunderstanding and the most reliable think is that the old man she trusted was the snake as in reality we say the one who cares is the one who stabs๐๐๐
2024-06-14
5
๐ฌ๐พ๐พ๐ ๐ฑ๐๐๐บ๐๐๐๐ผ
The story was great, overall. The plot is what got me mesmerized. I can't believe I completed it in a day, 80+ chapters, no less. Other than the spelling errors, some fancy words and too little pov of Eric, it was beautifully written, the mature content was perfect too.
The story gets boring when the suspense is easily caught. But this one was different, Mr. Thompson surely played the villain card. I thought Wyatt would later be evil, but I am glad that he didn't.
But the ending seemed so rushed, it could be prolonged to a few chapters more with Eric confessing Olivia. Anyways, happy that they got married after overcoming misunderstandings and all those obstacles. I would want an epilogue. You should have written that instead of asking opinions from readers, the story was great, really!
4 stars for this masterpiece! โจ
2024-06-14
3
โ ๊ฏฑืื ึฦืื ึแจฎืื ึฎ๊ซถ โ
thank you so much for this beautiful story ๐๐๐
2024-06-13
1