Hey Author.. the story is like really hot and all but just one suggestion and you should seriously consider it... It would make reading more exciting for readers. When you use beep words (I am not using any beep word for example here because if I use it my comment will not reach you..so...) Like for example consider "shit" is a beep word.. (I wanted to write that word for middle finger you wrote three times here but it will not be posted so...) and you write "shit" in the original copy. Then, when it will publish.. It will become like "****" this. and we wont be able to spell out the word So instead of writing the whole spelling use astricks in between like.. "sh*t" It would be really easy author. By the way the story is really amazing but please consider this one suggestion from my side when you write more. Thank you.
2020-06-21
0
habi
I already know that I am gonna get butterflies in my stomach
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Naughty princess
Hey Author.. the story is like really hot and all but just one suggestion and you should seriously consider it... It would make reading more exciting for readers.
When you use beep words
(I am not using any beep word for example here because if I use it my comment will not reach you..so...)
Like for example consider "shit" is a beep word.. (I wanted to write that word for middle finger you wrote three times here but it will not be posted so...)
and you write "shit" in the original copy.
Then, when it will publish.. It will become like "****" this.
and we wont be able to spell out the word
So instead of writing the whole spelling use astricks in between like.. "sh*t"
It would be really easy author.
By the way the story is really amazing but please consider this one suggestion from my side when you write more.
Thank you.
2020-06-21
0
habi
I already know that I am gonna get butterflies in my stomach
2020-06-15
2
Keith
oh my, such an honest ep.
2020-05-15
1