one question did he forget her? he knew her in the first chapter but here he doesn't seem to recognise her.
2020-06-18
5
Zylo
Dear Author, there are errors here and there. From chapter 1, Nick Nichole's name becomes "Dad" and here, Leo's becomes "Mom" with Angela's photo. Nichole's Mom, Nichole's Dad,
I'm sorry if I sounded like a busy-body because I really like this story and I've recommended it to my friends but when they read it, they didn't get the excitement I had because of these errors 💔 So please fix them
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Florence Tonsing
one question
did he forget her? he knew her in the first chapter but here he doesn't seem to recognise her.
2020-06-18
5
Zylo
Dear Author, there are errors here and there. From chapter 1, Nick Nichole's name becomes "Dad" and here, Leo's becomes "Mom" with Angela's photo. Nichole's Mom, Nichole's Dad,
I'm sorry if I sounded like a busy-body because I really like this story and I've recommended it to my friends but when they read it, they didn't get the excitement I had because of these errors 💔
So please fix them
2020-06-12
2