Author I feel like the story is missing parts for instance, how did Zach and Bella get to this point of being a couple. what is the backdrop story about the main leads? I like the plot so far just missing few pieces here and there. kindly check out my novels, you feedback are welcome...this is how we become better writers at the end.
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nivi
his dad is a pervert??
2020-09-07
4
🌺🏵Fantasy Dreamer 🌺🌸
Author I feel like the story is missing parts for instance, how did Zach and Bella get to this point of being a couple. what is the backdrop story about the main leads? I like the plot so far just missing few pieces here and there. kindly check out my novels, you feedback are welcome...this is how we become better writers at the end.
2020-08-16
2
Sam Ashfa
update plzz...
2020-06-08
2