Lovey Dovey
Once there was a girl named *Steria***...**
“Mom,I’m going to Gea’s house” said Steria
“Ok” said Steria’s mom
While Steria was walking to Gea’s house-
Here besti- said Steria
Steria was shocked about what she saw...
“I can explain” said Gea
“SHUT UP!!!” said Steria
“DON’T SAY THAT TO GEA” said Braylon
“You said you were busy...all the time..” said
Steria
“BUT ALL THIS TIME YOU WERE WITH GEA” said Steria
Steria slaps Braylon-
Steria walks closer to Gea-
“you just used me for money...” said Steria
“I-I even let you borrow this house” said Steria
“I was there when you...needed...me” said Steria
Steria goes to her wardrobe in her bedroom-
Gets her backpack-
“pack your stuffs...NOW” said Steria
“I’m sorry...” Gea’s mind
“Go out now...” said Steria
While Gea goes to “her” bedroom-
While she packs her clothes-
Gea starts crying-
“I’m sorry...” Gea whispers her self..
While with Zero-
“Boss snake clan is eliminated” ???
“Great...let’s celebrate then..!!” said Zero
-at the party
“Look at this chick Zero” ???
Zero looks at her disgusted-
Buzz buzz-
Zero grabs his phone and answers-
Zero walks to the balcony-
“What is it Flera?”
“Babe...can you put 900,000$ in my bank account?”
“Didn’t you get 500,000$ 5 days ago??” said Zero
“Don’t you love me babe if yes just send it to me” said Flera
Zero saw a girl sitting on the side walk-
The girl started crying-
Zero was blinded by her beauty-
“BABE hello!?!?!” shouted Flera
“Ok I will ask my butler to send it to you”
said Zero
“Thanks babe cya!!” said Flera
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Comments
Misaki X Takumi😌
Great story! but there just 2 things that could be improved:
•I think you used "said..." too much which kind of made it boring and made me not want to continue reading.
Maybe u could use other words besides "said". For example: Exclaimed, Shouted, Replied etc
•Maybe you could also describe the characters and setting a bit more (since there's no pictures) so that the reader knows more abt the characters and stuff.🙂
2020-06-01
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