His face description always reminds me of Rani Padmavati..... My mother told me that she was so fair so fair that when she used to eat paan, its red juice was visibly seen going down her throat
2025-08-02
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J' zen
The grammar error is very distracting and annoying, but it's okay, it's not that bad, as long as the story flows well and is understandable.
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Misty
His face description always reminds me of Rani Padmavati..... My mother told me that she was so fair so fair that when she used to eat paan, its red juice was visibly seen going down her throat
2025-08-02
1
J' zen
The grammar error is very distracting and annoying, but it's okay, it's not that bad, as long as the story flows well and is understandable.
2025-12-22
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Princess Greyzel Quibuyen
ehem² sir thats quite sus dont ya think?
2024-12-25
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