okay the story plot is good and your way in writing is unique in a good way but..... but I think you need to use more realistic pics it makes the experience of reading more existing so try to search in Pinterest you may find some pics suits your taste
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Maria
okay the story plot is good and your way in writing is unique in a good way but..... but I think you need to use more realistic pics it makes the experience of reading more existing so try to search in Pinterest you may find some pics suits your taste
2025-12-15
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2023-07-03
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