P.O.V. Change James
"This is so boring." I have nothing to do and I am sent out on guard duty in the middle of a war.
"Come on you can't complain I mean you are the first crown Prince of the Shadow Kingdom." Victor says in a teasing tone.
I turn my head and look at the forest ground as I look into the forest I see a girls dress and feet.
"Hey Victor look" I say seriously as I stop my horse and point my finger in the direction of the girl.
Soon afterwards Victor stops and looks to were I'm pointing. His happy face drops into a serious expression.He eyes me and I eye him back. We both get off our horses and draw our swords. We try to sneak up on the girl, for we don't know if she is a spy.As we go we finally come to meet her presence. We are standing there with our swords to her neck,but she still dose not move. She is covered in a violet coat with her hood on and has a pair of new looking boots on. I look up at Victor in question of what we should do cause she could be dead, fakeing, or injured.
"What should we do?" I ask
"Well let's see her face first to determine if she is a fugitive." Victor says seriously.
I slowly reach over and lift her head and carefully pull down the silk hood to reveal a rare color of white hair, skin that is as white as snow, rosy cheeks, and blood red lips. I look up at Victor and he is even more surprised than I am.For this girl is rare, beautiful, and is like no outher. I look down at her it seems she is starting to wake up.
P.O.V. Change Alex
"Hmm, that hurt" I say as I start to wake up. I open my eyes to two men, one holding my head up and the other holding a sword to my neck. Both of them are cute though. The one holding me up has short dirty blond hair, emerald green eyes, a light tan, and is dressed in armer and has a black cape. The rather rude man pointing a sword at me has short flaming red hair, hazel colored eyes, and a perfect tan.
"Who are you?" Asks the red haired guy.
"Its etticat to state your name first" I say happily
It seems to have raised his temper. The the outher guy holding me cut in.
"This is Victor, and I am Jake."says Jake the man holding me, well my head.
"Well then I might as well tell you mine, Alexandria Mari Shadow. But you can call me Alex."I say happily.
I look at there faces, and they seemed to be very surprised.
I sit myself up, put the hood over my head. I have no idea where I am but it is seriously weird. I go to walk away when one of them grabs my wrist I immediately reverse and put him in an armlock. Now Jake is in an arm lock and Victor is really angry. After this Jake's cape moves to reveal a crest the same one as in my dreams at home.
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please, release more chapters. and make them longer too. the plot is extremely good and your grammar is almost perfect. keep up the good work!
2019-06-16
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