I think you should keep the tittle author... I really love the tittle and about the story I think you should just try to make them be obsess with MC little by little and even them doesn't notice their obsession with MC.... about the villain you could just do like the villain hate ML or something like the villain obsess with MC? just reveal it at the end.... it's just my opinion.... love your story author 😃✨
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I think you should keep the tittle author... I really love the tittle and about the story I think you should just try to make them be obsess with MC little by little and even them doesn't notice their obsession with MC.... about the villain you could just do like the villain hate ML or something like the villain obsess with MC? just reveal it at the end.... it's just my opinion....
love your story author 😃✨
2023-09-01
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