This story has the potential to be even greater, but there are just so many errors. Honestly, the story itself is beautiful, it’s just disappointing bc the writing isn’t polished. If I were to rate it as a novel, it would’ve been 9/10. But bc of the plot holes, errors, and grammatical typos, it brought the rating down to 7/10 for me. If only the writing and grammar could be fixed, the story would be so much better to read and readers wouldn’t get frustrated.
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Wade II
This story has the potential to be even greater, but there are just so many errors. Honestly, the story itself is beautiful, it’s just disappointing bc the writing isn’t polished. If I were to rate it as a novel, it would’ve been 9/10. But bc of the plot holes, errors, and grammatical typos, it brought the rating down to 7/10 for me. If only the writing and grammar could be fixed, the story would be so much better to read and readers wouldn’t get frustrated.
2026-07-20
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