not a criticism but Authorz u really need to work on your writing skills; the whole point of chat story is use of direct speech so that we could connect to characters. & the repeated use of pronoun makes one loose interest. It's becomes more like an essay rather than a story.
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Janet Breeze
not a criticism
but Authorz u really need to work on your writing skills; the whole point of chat story is use of direct speech so that we could connect to characters. & the repeated use of pronoun makes one loose interest. It's becomes more like an essay rather than a story.
2023-10-30
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