Ankita had learned long ago that unease was a warning, not a weakness.
At thirty, she was co-head of a coaching institute—disciplined, rational, respected. Ghost stories were for students who missed deadlines.
Every year, they traveled to different towns for promotions. This time it was just three of them—Raman, the head of the institute; Ajey, the mathematics teacher; and Ankita.
Raman drove recklessly along the narrowing mountain roads, ignoring Ajey’s warnings to slow down. By sunset, they reached a small fog-covered town.
Raman stepped out with a poster. “It’s evening. No one will notice. Let’s put it up here.”
He had barely pasted it when a police jeep stopped beside them. The officers questioned them, checked their IDs, and made them remove the poster. After a tense half hour, they were finally allowed to leave.
Ankita looked at the darkening sky. “It’s almost night. Let’s book a hotel room and continue tomorrow.”
This time, both Raman and Ajey agreed.
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By night, they checked into a cheap hotel.
The building looked worn—peeling paint, dim yellow bulbs, a long corridor smelling of damp wood.
At the reception stood the owner. Beside him was a thin man Ankita hadn’t noticed before.
He wasn’t talking.
He wasn’t moving.
He was staring at her.
Not curious. Not rude.
Just… staring. Unblinking. As if memorizing her face.
She looked away first.
That night, exhaustion pulled her into sleep.
But suddenly-She woke up.
Not gradually.
Not like drifting to the surface.
She snapped awake.
Her eyes opened into darkness so thick it felt physical.
For a moment she didn’t understand why she was awake. The room was silent. No footsteps. No sound from the corridor. No wind.
And yet—
Her body was rigid. Her heart was pounding as if she had run miles. Something was wrong. She didn’t move. She listened. Silence. Then she felt it. That unmistakable sensation. Someone was watching her.
Not imagination.
Not anxiety.
Watching.
Her eyes slowly adjusted to the dark. The faint streetlight outside filtered through the thin curtain near the window.
The curtain wasn’t fully closed.There was a narrow gap. And in that gap—
Two eyes.
They were just there.
Still.
Perfectly aligned with her face.
Not blinking.
Not moving.
Just staring.
Her breath stopped. For a second, her brain refused to process what she was seeing. It searched desperately for explanations.
Reflection.
Shadow.
Tree branches.
But there were no trees outside.
Those were eyes. Human eyes. Too close to the glass. The whites faint in the dark. The pupils wide. Locked on her. She tried to scream. Nothing came out.
Her body wouldn’t move. Hands frozen. Fingers numb. The eyes didn’t blink. They just watched.
Thud.
Thud.
Thud.
Her heartbeat roared in her ears.
She blinked—
Once.
When she opened them—
The eyes were closer.
The curtain shifted.
Not wind.Pressure. Something was behind it. The eyes tilted. Studying her.A faint forehead. The
Slow. Deliberate.
A faint outline of a forehead became visible. Then the shadow of a nose.
There was a face behind those eyes.
And it was smiling. Not wide. Not exaggerated. Just the slightest curve. Enough.
Enough to make her stomach twist. Her throat burned as she forced air into her lungs.
“Ra—”
The sound died in her mouth. At that exact moment, the window made a soft sliding noise. A slow, deliberate sound. The latch hadn’t been locked properly. The window moved open by barely an inch. Cold night air entered the room.
And then— A hand slipped inside.
Pale.
Long fingers.
The nails were dark and uneven.
It moved slowly, cautiously—testing the air.
Her skin prickled. Goosebumps spread across her body as the hand hovered above her shoulder.
It didn’t touch her.
It waited.
Then the fingers brushed her skin.
Cold.
Not night-cold.
Colder.
Her scream tore through the room.
The hand vanished. The curtain snapped. A faint scraping echoed outside the wall.
Raman and Ajey rushed in as the lights flooded the room.
The window was shut.
The curtain still.
Raman checked outside.
Nothing.
Only the fog-drowned, empty street.
“There’s no one,” he said firmly.
But Ankita was shaking uncontrollably.
Her shoulder still felt cold.
As if the touch had left something behind.
They convinced her it was stress. Fatigue. Imagination.
She said nothing more.
The next evening, she saw the servant stepping out of a room down the corridor.
Thin.
Silent.
The same eyes.
She was certain. That he was the one who left the window open at daytime. And breaks in.
That night, Ajey hid under the blanket beside her bed.
They waited.
Midnight.
The curtain moved again.
Slowly. Like breathing against fabric. The gap appeared. And the eyes returned. Closer than before.
Unblinking.
Patient.
Ankita lay still, pretending to sleep as the window slid open.
The hand came again—faster, confident—reaching for her shoulder.
Ajey burst from the blanket and grabbed the wrist.
It felt wrong. Too firm. Too cold.
The arm twisted unnaturally.
A soft crack.
The wrist slipped free—not by force, but by bending where it shouldn’t.
The figure retreated into the dark.
No footsteps.
No breath.
Just gone.
The next morning, they confronted the owner.
“Your servant is entering rooms,” Ankita said.
The owner looked confused.
“What servant?”
“The man who cleans.”
The owner’s face was drained of color.
“I haven’t hired anyone since last year. The previous worker left.”
“Who cleans the rooms?” Ajey asked.
The owner swallowed.
“I do.”
Silence fell heavy.
Ankita felt it again.
That gaze.
Somewhere nearby.
Watching.
She didn’t turn around.
Because she knew—
If she saw those eyes again,
They might be closer than the window.
----The End----
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