Oh man 🤔 I am not an expérienced author but basé on my POV you introduced all the characters a once and à little too bulky I had to go over like three times before getting it And it shouldn't be so Please take this advice But i am not forcing you /Hey/
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Ash
Oh man 🤔
I am not an expérienced author but basé on my POV you introduced all the characters a once and à little too bulky
I had to go over like three times before getting it
And it shouldn't be so
Please take this advice
But i am not forcing you /Hey/
2024-08-31
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