bro story, plot , character everything was good but it feels like you rushed the last 50 chapters and there are some plotholes.... overall the thinking was good but it needed a better execution.... nothing prsl btw ❤️
2025-03-19
1
💫✨ phoenix_💫
Amazing Story authy the plot is addictive and you won't believe me but I have read this story 5 times i just love this story it's amazing please continue writing such amazing stories authy and thank you so much for this story it's my favourite story so far
2026-06-11
0
💫✨ phoenix_💫
loved the story literally reading it for the second time and I think I'll read it again in the future too it's to addictive thank you for writing such a lovely story author 😊😊
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taekook7
bro story, plot , character everything was good but it feels like you rushed the last 50 chapters and there are some plotholes.... overall the thinking was good but it needed a better execution.... nothing prsl btw ❤️
2025-03-19
1
💫✨ phoenix_💫
Amazing Story authy the plot is addictive and you won't believe me but I have read this story 5 times i just love this story it's amazing please continue writing such amazing stories authy and thank you so much for this story it's my favourite story so far
2026-06-11
0
💫✨ phoenix_💫
loved the story literally reading it for the second time and I think I'll read it again in the future too it's to addictive thank you for writing such a lovely story author 😊😊
2025-03-24
1