Author your writing style is good but it can be better I know you like angst in your stories but please focus on the plot I love your stories but the abuse you right mostly to jungkook makes me feel uncomfortable I know it's just a fictional story but we literally want to feel a bit better and different in stories but abuse makes me unhappy ,and mostly jungkook is a rich brat so some part of blame should be on his parents right so don't make v always abusive like this is not love ...other than this stories are good and please no offence I just want you to improve your angst /Toasted//Silent//Pray/
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Klmlkb
this is too much 😭
2025-12-28
0
Taekoo💜
Author your writing style is good but it can be better I know you like angst in your stories but please focus on the plot I love your stories but the abuse you right mostly to jungkook makes me feel uncomfortable I know it's just a fictional story but we literally want to feel a bit better and different in stories but abuse makes me unhappy ,and mostly jungkook is a rich brat so some part of blame should be on his parents right so don't make v always abusive like this is not love ...other than this stories are good and please no offence I just want you to improve your angst /Toasted//Silent//Pray/
2024-05-14
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vk
what they share bed room and jk is okay with that
2024-03-15
2