hey author.. Small suggest... introduction is good...👌👌👍..but in my view introduction part must be complete like if u don't want to reveal all characters now then u must create small anxiety like remaining characters will be added in the middle of the story......it's just opinion that's it......🤗🤗☺️
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GummyBear 🐻
hey author.. Small suggest... introduction is good...👌👌👍..but in my view introduction part must be complete like if u don't want to reveal all characters now then u must create small anxiety like remaining characters will be added in the middle of the story......it's just opinion that's it......🤗🤗☺️
2020-07-24
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