hello I'm a new author who just started writing I released a new story and I would love it if you leave some review on which part I should improve on
Nicholas and Luca, two men from vastly different backgrounds, are brought together by chance during a family vacation in Pattaya. As they navigate their budding connection, they must confront the challenges posed by Luca's high-profile family and their own uncertainties. What unfolds is a captivating romance filled with undeniable chemistry, profound emotional resonance, and the promise of a future that could defy all odds.
2024-11-08
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Prajwal Budhathoki
Omg I'm really going to miss this story , As much as I enjoyed the story, I enjoyed the comments of the viewers it was literally halirious. 🥹😭
2026-05-18
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𝓚𝓲𝓽𝓽𝓲❤ >.<
awwwww🤗🤭...... again a best masterpiece 😌love you autthhy😘your works are just as pretty as you🤭🤗
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illaivan08
hello I'm a new author who just started writing I released a new story and I would love it if you leave some review on which part I should improve on
Nicholas and Luca, two men from vastly different backgrounds, are brought together by chance during a family vacation in Pattaya. As they navigate their budding connection, they must confront the challenges posed by Luca's high-profile family and their own uncertainties. What unfolds is a captivating romance filled with undeniable chemistry, profound emotional resonance, and the promise of a future that could defy all odds.
2024-11-08
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Prajwal Budhathoki
Omg I'm really going to miss this story , As much as I enjoyed the story, I enjoyed the comments of the viewers it was literally halirious. 🥹😭
2026-05-18
0
𝓚𝓲𝓽𝓽𝓲❤
>.<
awwwww🤗🤭...... again a best masterpiece 😌love you autthhy😘your works are just as pretty as you🤭🤗
2025-04-09
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