Hey author, I have read your another story! Good start and I have an advise pls don't take it in wrong way, you can write the charaters actions inside * and *... and you can write their thoughts inside the bracket, that would make it easier to understand! By the way, check out my novels too!
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SMS Maha
Hey author, I have read your another story! Good start and I have an advise pls don't take it in wrong way, you can write the charaters actions inside * and *... and you can write their thoughts inside the bracket, that would make it easier to understand! By the way, check out my novels too!
2020-08-02
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