Also Please don't make stories like this, i mean the story is good, plot is really good, but you're choosing in character s is not good, i know i sound rude but I'm saying this for my idol's,as well for you too. because of this story My Angels can get bad impression, and your changes of the character's of My idols into Villains from pure hearted one's can course you so much hate 🙌 even it's routine we still prefer the same thing, it's a Taekookers thing not to change ML or ML. it's a suggestion for you not getting so much hate, take it' for your own good, because being a author myself i know how it' feels 🙂, you've a good version of plot sence use it wisely. thank you 🙌
2026-08-08
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Kj_Aira_ Kim
I'll Honest!! The story plot is really good, but it' doesn't come out the way it' should, Starting was really hurts and middle of the story was so boring, I love the Panishment but you should make more beautiful like you shouldn't lag the story till the end, and should enter Gukkie atleast 10 episode s before so he can help Tae and gaining his trust, and Jungkook should know his place and feel the pain more, overall it's okay okay.
2026-08-08
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lil_melove
wow authorushi I read such story for the first time i really love it i am gonna save this story I love you authorushi the story is really amazing it also made me cry for a movement
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Kj_Aira_ Kim
Also Please don't make stories like this, i mean the story is good, plot is really good, but you're choosing in character s is not good, i know i sound rude but I'm saying this for my idol's,as well for you too. because of this story My Angels can get bad impression, and your changes of the character's of My idols into Villains from pure hearted one's can course you so much hate 🙌 even it's routine we still prefer the same thing, it's a Taekookers thing not to change ML or ML. it's a suggestion for you not getting so much hate, take it' for your own good, because being a author myself i know how it' feels 🙂, you've a good version of plot sence use it wisely. thank you 🙌
2026-08-08
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Kj_Aira_ Kim
I'll Honest!! The story plot is really good, but it' doesn't come out the way it' should, Starting was really hurts and middle of the story was so boring, I love the Panishment but you should make more beautiful like you shouldn't lag the story till the end, and should enter Gukkie atleast 10 episode s before so he can help Tae and gaining his trust, and Jungkook should know his place and feel the pain more, overall it's okay okay.
2026-08-08
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lil_melove
wow authorushi I read such story for the first time i really love it i am gonna save this story I love you authorushi the story is really amazing it also made me cry for a movement
2026-05-28
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